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  1. What's your point?
  2. Hehehe I am not finished with yours either :'D!!
  3. Fishwings

    Author's Note

    Hello Ketchupblood, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked the story!
  4. Omg that's how I feel too! My list is like the US debt -- it never stops growing
  5. Ohmygodthisjustmademeorgasm D: The trailer looks so good. Loved the first movie to bits -- kept slapping tables screaming "THIS IS... not mahogany" for like a month.
  6. Fishwings

    Weekly Wrap Up!

    Prat? ....................... As in, "Harry Potter you are such a PRAT!" Who uses that in real life !!
  7. That sounds like a terrifying experience. I hope your specialists will be able to diagnose the issue soon. Best of luck Renee *hugs*
  8. Fishwings

    part iv

    nothing would be more awesome if you CONTINUED THIS STORY <3 <3 <3 I love the characters -- they're all so distinct and funny.
  9. Fishwings

    part iii

    omg i haven't laughed like this in forever xD This is awesome. I'm in love with Tristan's klutziness and his bubbliness. Hope you continue this story!
  10. Fishwings

    part ii

    The craigslist ad made me choke LOLOL. This story needs to be shared with the entire world.
  11. Fishwings

    part i

    LOLOL THIS IS FUCKEN AWESOME. I love the inserted pictures and text message screenshots.
  12. This seems like a very interesting book. I will look into it!
  13. If all fails you can In all seriousness, the hormone PRL is released during orgasm and it has several effects, one of which will make you sleepy.
  14. Reading these make me very happy. I think GA is a very special place filled with extraordinary fiction and even more extraordinary people. Sure, GA has had its fair share of mishaps and site wide disagreements, some of which have been long buried, but overall, deep down the people are kind, supportive, and genuine. I think that's why a lot of us have stuck around here for so long. I've never felt more part of an online community than I have felt at *home* here. Thanks Renee for compiling these!
  15. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    Oh my god D: This was an uncomfortable read. I love the juxtaposition of the sweetness of the beginning with the brutality of the other scenes. They were visceral -- bloody, gutsy, gritty -- and I loved it. I did however think some of the scenes were a tad too short and it made this chapter feel like a bit of a disjointed read, however, I have to say your prose and your masterful way of dealing with dramatic tension is one of a kind! Wonderful stuff Louis.
  16. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    Wonderful beginning Louis! What I was most impressed with was the very beginning of this piece, then the dialogue punctuation kinda got in the way. But seriously, the beginning running scene was simply amazing. I felt so lost within the story that I was running there with him. Amazing job.
  17. Fishwings

    Chapter 1

    I read the first line and I was instantly transported into the story. Your writing is sharp and to-the-point, without being too detailed or too lacking in detail, and what a finely written story this was! I've always been told that a "good writer is also a good editor," and you've just reinforced that notion I loved the tension you created in the story and the perpetual frenetic sense of impending doom. I didn't know whether the brothers were going to get up and kill each other at many points throughout the story -- and I found the ending very exciting! I would have loved to have learned even more about the backgrounds of the brothers but I thought you achieved quite a lot already in such a short piece. Great work again, Louis. I'll definitely be revisiting your other stories sometime!
  18. Fishwings

    Days of Silence

    I just had to read it again I love it!
  19. Fishwings

    Just Say It

    This was sew cute :3!! Good work Viv.
  20. Conversations At Dusk: The sky is burning Sun set; rays spurring. You don't know me, and I don't know you but we're here for good Conversation. Short, sweet Meager – unsaid words they flee. Unsure how they should be rolled, Unsure how they should be strung, Flung into the wind and into the stars, they fall all around us as we're here for Silent conversation, hooked with a laughter compilation, Ev
  21. The Empty Road Muted streetlights loom over like giant anglers in pursuit of prey Illuminating crackled sidewalks, electrifying the stars within the glassphalt. There is a weak breeze blowing, but all is silent. All is still. Even the post autumn leaves and crisp flakes of ice remain undisturbed, sleeping in quiet mounds along shadowed gutters. It is 6:30 p.m., and it is dark as I walk down the empty road. Soon, I will be home, embraced by firelight and heat from humming
  22. The Unburied Fossils The forest air swells as the heat of the sun slips through the chapped wings of the trees, down the scraggly fingers of the ferns, slipping away down the quiet cracks of the earth. Silently, the animals tread. Footfalls of leather against root; leaden flesh and cold dust moving forwards with calcified minds and hearts filled with neither beating cells, nor rotting worms but angry sparks manifesting the hollows of their chests, For they are moving to transcend the
  23. What happens after astronomical dusk? Three beats of writing following the supernatural, the suburbia, and the heart as the last boundary between day and night is crossed. Poetry.
  24. Your local food store may have Melatonin pills. They're relatively harmless in low doses as it's the natural hormone produced when humans enter dark phase, go check it out.
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