Fishwings

I nearly choked on my breakfast LOLLLL Yep that's me, right before I ate Dory.

My biggest qualm about the Twilight series is that it is completely... *drumroll* Anti-feminist. Completely. It's so anti-feminist and normally I don't care, but there are young girls everywhere that are reading this. It's so anti-feminist that Stephenie Meyer, one who identifies with such backwards ideologies, can't even realize it herself. Twilight romanticizes all of the following: a) It's totally hot for a stranger to creep into your bedroom uninvited and watch you while you sleep, because he's "protecting" you. b ) Once you freshly get with this stranger, you should throw away all of your friends and ditch your parents in order to be with him for eternity, because that is "love." c) You are an agentic, independent woman by choosing to make this ultimate sacrifice. You go, 21st century girl! d) If your boyfriend is going to break up with you, suck it up, because it's his call. And if he breaks into your house and removes all of your possessions, he's doing it because he loves you, not because he's a power-tripping, emotionally abusive criminal. e) If your boyfriend leaves you, it is the end of the world. f) If you want your boyfriend to come back to you, indulge in life-threatening activities. Such as... jumping off a cliff. g) Possessiveness, 'hot and cold' treatments, and further property damage (removing the engine to your car to prevent you from driving off somewhere) is all okay as long as your boyfriend has abs of marble. h) During sex, it's desirable to get bruises all over your body so you'll look like a trainwreck in the morning. It won't hurt at all. And if he apologizes to you in the morning you should be like... why did you apologize? I'm wearing these as badges of affection. g) When a grown man imprints on a baby, like a newborn, a bloody fetus that had just been ejected from a caesarean gone wrong, that is TRUE LOVE. Oh god what? No that's not pedophilia, why the fuck would you suggest such a thing?! in summary) If your man is your "Edward," he's perfect. What possessiveness, property damage, power manipulations? Those are quirks, not disorders. So, think about all of that for a second. If you say "oh it's just a book, young tween girls can think for themselves..." then you are way underestimating the importance of media and education in the development of a child's values.

One word: Scrivener.

Jesus did this really have to be brought back from the dead? -__-

Wow Viv, that story was wonderful. The unique interactions between Justin and Luke unfolded with such fragile uncertainty, determination, honesty, and love. All of that really came through your writing without the protagonist becoming to contemplative or irritable. What a clever take on the anthology theme too! I'll definitely be reading more of your stuff, as "days of silence" is a very poignant, humorous, well-written piece all around.

penis envy? Dear lord pup LOLOLLLL

HAHAHAHAHAHA. NOPE not me but yes he does share a similar sense of humour as me. And yes I think he's pretty cute too :3

For all you Harry potter fans out there: YUP. It's all true.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY LUGH!!

CIAAA your april fools prank sucked hahahaha. But excellent selection suggested by.......................... percy? :0 This story sounds super cool, will definitely read this.

Thank you Rano for the kind words and for stopping by. I am glad you liked the characters and the imagery!

My team is mostly relatively new but I'd really like to thank my editors Sharon (sat8997) and Colin (colinian). You guys are the best -- I always make a lot of stupid typos. And my beta readers: leisureguide, James (jamessavik), and morganisagingekid. Oh wat would we do without beta readers/editors? xD

I am loved. SCORE

Hello Terry P, thanks for stopping by. I'm happy that you found the story of good standards, and that you found the ending satisfactory. I tried to give hints throughout the story so the ending wouldn't come as a slap in the face. Thanks for reading!

Hello Daithi, I'm glad to see you again. One of my primary goals was to incite hope in multiple forms throughout the story, despite the fact that it was essentially still a tale of tragedy. Thanks for stopping by.

Yes, I think you got it! My head is really fuzzy at this moment but I'm pretty sure that makes sense. The reason why schrodinger put a cat in the box is because all felines are nefarious entities that are all secretly plotting the destruction of human beings... So no question about it : D I love dogs. Ieshwar loves dogs. I love ieshwar.

Aww that was sweet :3 I actually half expected Brae to turn out to be a badass photoshop stalker dude and then kill them all, but I'm glad that the story didn't go in that direction. I still quite like Keith, he seems quite calm and resolute and level headed in what he does.

Oh my god... PHOTOSHOP..... back to reading.

Wb trebs! *hugs*

WAYne, WAY too good hahaha

: D CONGRATS!

I LOLed so hard at prompt 220

Hello readers, authors, unregistered users and the like, It's been a long time since I've written. I've decided to start a blog about my latest story, "Six Seconds," which has been published as part of the fantastic "A Night to Remember" Spring Anthology. To anyone who hasn't read it/is considering to read it, I'll give you a brief overview. What is "Six Seconds?" "Six Seconds" follows Callen Worthwright, a young man who, while driving back home from his snowboarding expedition, takes a dangerous shortcut down Blackcomb Mountain. He hits a patch of black ice, loses control of his car, and crashes it into the Pacific Ocean. Mortally wounded and trapped in freezing water, a mysterious presence speaks to him and grants him six hours to see the one person that is holding him the most back in life: Sage Hefferman -- a boy and a long-lost friend whom had gone missing for many years to come. Callen is propelled by supernatural means kilometres across the country and lands in Sage's home turf... naked. Needless to say, his arrival comes as a complete and utter shock to Sage. Click below for an excerpt: "Six Seconds" is primordially a Romance/Suspense but it touches on a lot of other genres. According to my beloved editor and a story writer himself, colinian, it is a "fantasy and a bit of science fiction and a bit of horror and a love story all rolled into one. And a mystery, too." It is around 19K and will take you about an hour to read. Click HERE for Chapter 1. What Were the Inspirations? (some spoilers) The creative process is a complex procedure of remixing all things you have read, watched, and experienced, to create an end product that is a unique blend of all of that. With that being said, I feel the need to attribute elements to my story to these following muses. There are many other inspirations that I drew upon including tragic real life events, bone-chilling EDM and other fantastic novels, but if I listed all of those we'd be here until next week! So, here are the four main driving forces behind "Six Seconds:" First, the words "A Night to Remember." It was what started this whole procedure. When I read them, they had such an impact. No immediate ideas popped into my mind of course, but I knew I had to do something because the line was so simple yet so powerful and really resonated within me (I think this was suggested by comicfan). Just read it out loud. Read it in the most monotone way possible. It still sounds fucking dramatic and sexy as hell. Besides getting the ball rolling, these words played further roles in developing the events in the story. "Six Seconds" involved several major life-changing nights that Sage and Callen could and could not remember: Callen's accident, Sage's secret, their memorable sleepovers, etc. Secondly, a part of Sage's character motivations, as well as several romantic aspects, was inspired by a book, "the Keeper of the Isis Light," written by Monica Hughes. The novel follows Olwen Pendennis, a girl who had been transported onto a distant alien planet to safe-keep it for immigrating humans who were coming from an apocalyptic Earth. Her human physique had been medically altered so she could survive better on the planet Isis, and her appearance stirs up controversy and prejudice when the immigrants land on their planet. Notably, it stands in the way of her love for a young man who was amongst the new settlers. Obviously, it is a very different story from "Six Seconds," but Olwen's strength, her need to be free from the authoritative voices that caged her life, dictated her happiness, really had a big impact on me, and influenced Sage to embody some of these character elements. Thirdly, the basic framework of "Six Seconds" was inspired by the phenomena when your brain remains active even after your heart stops beating. You are pronounced "dead," but there are some cases where victims claim that they can still observe their surroundings even afterwards because of the fact that the ganglia in your brain continues to fire action potentials through synapsing neuronal cells. Ben Breedlove's story is one notable example, a real life tale which was the first catalyst in the planning process of "Six Seconds." Finally, the story was influenced by the concepts of "hypertext" and ultimately "multiverse (multi-universes)." Initially, "Six Seconds" didn't start off including that topic, but then I read "Garden of the Forking Paths" by Borges, which was assigned to me in one of my university classes. I hated the story at first. The language was pedantic and after reading it three times I was still like "what the fuck I don't get this shit," but when I dug deeper into "Schrodinger's cat," the film "Source Code" and started tying it into things that I learned in the past such as wave-particle duality properties of light, the concepts of alternate universes, alternative realities, and the illusion of time -- it all began to make sense, and I realized that it just fell into place with the theme of my story. And plus, quantum physics is simply fascinating. What if, in every turning point, every subsequent moment of decision, both and all outcomes continued to exist, and there is a bifurcation and creation of another dimension? What if reality isn't as we know it? Isn't linear? And is instead a vast, immensely complex, infinitely growing, phylogeny of possibilities? I mean, could another you exist, right at this moment, wearing another sweater, walking down a different street, who made a different career choice? Could we have fallen in love with another person? Could perhaps some of our deceased still be with us in another universe whom had avoided untimely accidents and diseases? Could there be a parallel you who was happier? And relating back to "Six Seconds" -- could Callen and Sage finally be together? And, if space and time were so vast and indefinite as we know it and don't know it to be (another quantum video for another day), could Sage and Callen actually exist in another reality? I certainly believe so. I certainly believe that there are many Sages and Callens as there are ponies and Finns and Edward Cullens floating out there in our ever-expanding whole universe somewhere. (I'm only half-joking). So What do You Think? ... of that? The confounding existence of Sages and Callens and mythical creatures? About alternate realities and brain activity after cardiac arrest? ... About "Six Seconds" in general? Did the story make you think and wonder? Did you cry? I hope you did. I'm kidding. (I'm only half-kidding). Leave me a review to tell me your thoughts. ps: Artwork? I was initially going to use this drawing as a cover for my story but I never got around to completing it because I was in the middle of studying. I still don't think I'm going to use it and I might actually remove it altogether because this is only my interpretation of how the characters look like. It is certainly not everyone else's.

Shittt. I'm not an expert in this area but I think there's a time limit in which you can file a complaint since your employer is breaking the law. I'm not sure what the time limit is in there in your area but I think you visit this website: http://www.dol.gov/ To contact your local state labour. I'll try to do some more research in the meantime to help.

Yes that sometimes does happen :0 It can be annoying within the prose itself but when it's incorporated into modern dialogue it just shows that the author needs to observe how people talk a little more. I've read the opposite though -- in fantasy books where the dialogue is filled with modern contractions that it just doesn't fit!