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Part Two. Chapter Seven.
Dan South commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Seven.
This really feels like a ‘yes’ and ‘no’ situation. That was a whole lot to absorb in one evening, from Ava to Dayna. Being the odd-man-out is not a good feeling ever. He seems to think there’s some intent of malice based on his reaction and silence. So that’s a ‘yes’ to me. He must think he’s in the right. I’d say ‘no’ twice as loud though. They love him, all of them. I can see Kyan being situationally immature but this feels like an intellectual and emotional choice to behave badly. To treat the family badly. To treat Perry badly. Time to grow up? Face the music? Yeah, probably.- 167 comments
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Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
Dan South commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Until You Become Nothing But A Dot
We met the menagerie! Otis speaking about ‘being so small’ seems worth noting. I can’t help thinking of another menagerie and one of my favorite (tragic) quotes… ”When you look at a piece of delicately spun glass you think of two things: how beautiful it is and how easily it can be broken.” Spoken by another Laura. Penned by Tennessee Williams. Here’s hoping Otis remains beautiful and unbroken.- 13 comments
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Just two or three years old? That is unthinkable. Small wonder he keeps his sh*t together at all. Great chapter!
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Emmett and Alex are adorable! Must be a good reason they found each other. Really solid storytelling @TriadSync. Looking forward to more!
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This! ”or maybe Perry was too perfect not to harbor feelings for”
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This response is as poetic and beautiful as today’s offering. Too many must lean against the wind to stand…
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Vincent taught Jubal well. Of course I am speaking to his skills as a builder at this point. 🙂 That was great advice about erecting the roof. Technically perfect, seriously impressive. Looking forward to that erection…and others ❤️
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This THIS! C’mon Travis. THIS!
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Benji has a future yeah…
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Right?! I melted, total puddle of awwww
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Chose ‘sad’ as a reaction but I’d like to add 💔 too. I’m counting on the housemates and, hopefully, Zoey.
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So much speculation in the comments. Love it! I know enough to know I know nothing because, well, it’s @Libby Drew
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Always great to see a new Author post! Band geeks literally rock!!
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After I read this chapter I turned to chapter one and binged back to here. Lover the guys. Maybe not Jason so much…
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Kevin is finding his footing. Kyle was not hitting on Rory. Right? Jason is oblivious enough to do that but why would Kyle? Rory handled business. Love it!
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Yep. Love Kevin.
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After reading Chapter 17 I came to read Chapter One. Pretty sure I love Kevin. I’ll keep reading to be certain.
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“…you foul mouthed tart…” made me snort! And, of course, the meta 😂
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Into the Light of Another
Dan South commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Into the Light of Another
On the Scoville scale of heat, hotness, spicy … I have no idea how to rank this beyond maximum hot. Tender. Oh so glad it’s tender. Gah. Maximum trust in Hudson. Matching trust for Otis. Exposure. Huh. Minimal criminal activity I hope. So good. So good!- 18 comments
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Gotta quote you to ❤️ you
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You post it and I’ll definitely read it. I think amazeballs should always be served with a side of awesome sauce.
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Gotta go with WOW too. What an amazing ride. Excited to read your hurricane. The diversity of your writing is awe inspiring. ☮️
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Fun read! I’d love to hear what became of the leftover buttercream.
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Quoting you so I can love this twice because same. ❤️
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That preview is amazing
