Dan South
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Love that you love The Longhorns. Pretty sure that was what this one panel comic is called.
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Such a wonderfully creative world you’ve built. Looking forward to seeing what world you create or just inhabit next.
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Innocent and uninhibited is a very interesting, and surprising, combination!
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Absolutely a foot job. For these two we should call it a tentative or accidental foot job. Couldn’t have been more deliberate!! The attraction is mutual and proved to provide climax. I couldn’t survive another sexual awakening. High hopes for these boys. Let’s get even more awkward!
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Middle school angst activated! *closes the closet door quietly*
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Ronin has real impulse control issues. Doubt that’s a desirable quality for a shifter. I’ve had my legs crossed for most of this chapter…
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Amen hallelujah and WTF. Boys first. Much of what’s happened feels like future testimony. This is about one boy. Did control shift? Boy is safe at this writing… No. I err. One boy, his boyfriend, his brother, his Dad, his Dad’s boyfriend … Good stuff good neighborhood. Who could imagine we’d meet here? Next!
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“Internal Sound” is the concept of speech pathology you’re describing. Without the resonance of our skull as we speak our voice sounds different. You need to know that you have a beautiful voice. Promise. Keep recording when so moved. The Author’s words, the Poet’s words, in his own voice is incredibly powerful. Thanks again!
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Loan Fallout and New School, New Problems
Dan South commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Loan Fallout and New School, New Problems
You GO Drew! Drew’s not just a good friend, he’s an ally. An ally that can throw a punch! How cool. So much more happening but the shift to school is leading somewhere new for the guys, I’m sure. -
Extremely satisfying that the core group, the family and framily, are growing so much stronger in the face of adversity. Very cool that Bryan was being protected at school and even cooler that Caleb had to explain it to the older kids. I’m still falling in love with Steve. Total dad material ❤️ Diego really should put a ring on it
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I know I keep pointing at the meta but what’s not to love.., “But I'm still the main character of this trashy teen novel.” ❤️
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Thick drama. How much more can these people take? I love this. We all need to understand that nowhere near the Jersey Shore is safe and this is such a soap opera. Such a compelling soap opera. You will end up hospitalized 😂 Ease up on Pete? I almost lost sight of the playlist and then Foreigner joins the conversation? They’re as cold as ice… ❤️
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Good to see Travis acting like a kid…when he’s not starting fires, blowing things up …
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Beautiful! The recording is an absolute delight!!
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Josh seems to have survived the ugliness pretty well. Love can heal a lot of wounds. Ethan is absolutely audacious! Will freedom be free? Hope so.
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I’m so happy and sad to see the curtain readying to close. There is no doubt that you @Demiurge have lived up to your pen name and then some with this creation, this world. #meepwillsavetheworld
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Josh needs a hug dammit. The good doctor will likely need his own therapist and I couldn’t love that more 😂 Really great chapter.
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I needed to quote you so I could love this twice. Absolutely spot on ❤️
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Truth is you evoked my memories, and the smells, of hunting wild boar in the Honey Island Swamp. Pretty much a right of passage for southeast Louisiana boys. Absolutely not an activity that carried over into adulthood. I’ll never forget the smell and I sure don’t mind being reminded of it as part of the fella’s journey.
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Love Otis lots. Hudson doesn’t have much boyfriend experience does he? Growth for both. Nice.
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A bath! I can smell them from here. Swamp, blood, mud. No way that ‘valuable cargo’ remark was a throwaway. Jubal is right to be cautious because it sounds like he has approached the wrong person previously.
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I’m left to wonder if Ethan provides the only kindness in Josh’s life. Looking forward to finding out.
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What the heck did he see in Jenny’s mind? The child pornography call out was some very quick thinking. Impressive.
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“I just age really fast, but I’m almost done with that now.” Huh. And he doesn’t sweat. Hmm.
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I’m going to use Caspian’s words: childish drama. Way too much protest from both Kavan and Gideon. Looks like they’ll have to work together. Might produce a different type of bond? I still like the abandoned one…
