SilentandBroken

Same. I love how in depth this story is getting. The deep rogue players can’t stop at Walter. This has me on the edge of my seat. Greg feels it, but is also torn between duty and family. I love the family..well except for Claire’s mother ..gag! I worry someone in the family is going to get killed off. Hopefully not but I’m waiting for the other shoe to drop

This is the most critical point. Tweaking doesn’t mean scrapping. You’ve already established a great base and structure. Work with it. A story is like a clay mold. Once you’ve established a firm foundation, then you can work with the rest with flexibility

But you did it and that is enough

Thx. I’ll start there.

@EnochGreat start. I loved the way you described the interaction between Mike and Sammy. I loved Sammy’s confusion and yet…clarity. I read a few comments below, I think your excited about describing baseball might’ve got to you. That’s ok! Because you slowed down a bit there after . That said, this is the first story I’m reading of yours. Sounds like I’m starting the wrong story first. Is there one I should start before this one?

I’ve never had Taco Bell make me question life choices. White Castle however…

If that happens Jack better keep his ass cheeks off the glass …j/s 😂

They made the list for shooting the moon out of a bus window?! Seriously?! how many movies in the 80’s ALONE showed the moon by boys and college kids doing exactly that? That’s like..expected on school trips! The world is going to shit.

That said, I don’t know if Nana is really aware as much as we think. Nick’s mom isn’t. Nick hasn’t shared those photos yet. But I fear they’re coming soon. Or worse. . @LittleBuddhaTW don’t you beat that boy to an inch of his life. He’s too sweet. Nobody deserves that let lone sweet Jack.

Let’s just say White Castle was a cheap way to get a colon cleanse..or convert from atheism to catholicIsm…oofta. Never again.

I so loved this chapter!! Well, everything but White Castle ugh! Can we say gut rot! Not that it isn’t tasty! But seriously this chapter was awesome. Nothing but happy feels and tears of joy.

Medellin? Where? Is it posted? I don’t see it.

Not going to lie, the confession on the way to the meet had me bawling huge crocodile tears. I’m proud of Joel. I’m proud of Cody. Lisa is still undeserving. Joel’s dad is still whipped but I can understand his position is very difficult but good lord man grow a set. Trace was pissed and rightly so. Celia, I expected, to be pissed but she kept it cool and calm and that I think, kept the cops from being called. Speaking of, I wondered if they’d be involved at the house when Trace and everyone arrived in a domestic between Joel’s parents. Oh well. Good chapter

I wholeheartedly agree on all points. I wasn’t too pleased Nick’s mom invited Tommy without consulting Nick first but I get it too. Tommy provided Nick with a much unrealized but very much needed change of pace and break from just Jack all week. Not that there’s anything wrong with Jack because how I envision Jack in my mind & I wouldn’t want to be apart either. I think it was just enough space apart however and it was good for all involved. Maybe Tommy might find it in his interest to ask his folks if he could transfer to HW…? Sounds like public school keeps him in the closet. I agree Noah is not going to go away either. The way Jonah essentially attacked him now has me worried. Will he reciprocate? Jonah is alone now more frequently now that Danny and him and hit the breaks for a while. Yeah. I’m a little worried for sure.

Not gonna lie I’m a bit worried about Mr. death breath back there on campus. I wonder if whatever letter Nick’s mom writes will be causing more trouble vs fixing what needs fixing

This chapter definitely felt like learning to surf and finally getting the hang of it. Next chapter, The wave crashes ..avoiding rocks gets tricky

That water bill is gonna rival that monthly tuition if they’re not careful 😂

@Dodger any eta on when the next chapter might be?

I’m trying so hard to be patient

Oh boy…..

I’m ready for more 😂

Yeah I’m kinda pissed at Ollie for that. He betrayed Mack’s trust. As for Luke, maybe he’s hurt he wasn’t told waay early in private by Ollie. Maybe he’s hurt by that and feels betrayed. Idk. Whatever is up with him we got some honesty while he was drunk. . It’s a starting point at least to a sober conversation

Things got a bit careless at the party. Bet someone heard Dec through the door talking to Ollie in the bathroom. I can’t say I approve of Ollie’s behavior without Mac’s permission. Mac is looking out for you dude. Pretty disrespectful thing to do playing with him without his ok in advance especially while he’s asleep.just my .02

Like what changes? And yes, Gabe is very well mannered.

Totally how envisioned this going down 😂