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    Chapter 5

    SilentandBroken commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 5

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    Ok! Let’s go! I’m already craving more.
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    He’s a little stud
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    Not gonna lie, I want more
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    I shall research thx
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    I guess what I was asking was did YOU have more works written like this . I’ve found many authors and many works that fit this style, but I also like your writing style very much. Have you ever considered spin off stores from A to Z? -Silent
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    Chapter 10

    SilentandBroken commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Matt and Emma were pretty careless about what they were talking about in public while on their scavenger hunt by themselves. Lots of situational awareness fails. No doubt they were overheard. Part of me wants to think they were the bait to draw them out. There’s still a lot about these exchange students that hasn’t been disclosed. To me, there’s still more to them that they’ve not sharing
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    Thx
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    man I didn’t think I’d miss him this much still. Granted, loss is a HUGE part of my traumatic past, I’ll admit, he left so much unfinished and I wasn’t finished learning from him either. Now, admittedly, I keep going back to his one reply to me encouraging me to write. But it’s that first big step ya know? It scares the shit out of me and the self criticism and self doubt have me stuck at the starting like making excuses like a nervous 14yo wanting to kiss his first boy crush or run…sigh
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    I happened to catch The Goonies recently and it dawned on me how much Sean Astin was a cutie in that film. Here’s a pic of him a little older than then
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    Chapter 11

    SilentandBroken commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Yes all that
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    After finishing the last written chapter of GFD earlier this afternoon, a second reading in total, this fits perfectly as a sequential chapter of the greater work of GFD. Dammit Com why did you get sick and die! 😭
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    Chapter 60

    SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 60

    Sigh… finally finished my second read through….and now you’re gone.😔
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    Chapter 50

    SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 50

    Wait, Alec and Justin not the same age..unless you’re talking about vampire birthdays.
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    Yep Nathan is a leech
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    Bloody brilliant chapter. Way to tie in all the points of contention to have them start to show the possible potential to the final outcome. But, I am still expecting a couple curveballs, minor ones that will be a means to an end. The different brand condom will come back to Robbie’s mind. I think somehow it’s going to be proof Nathan was cheating. The conversations between Rory and Robbie were great. I love how comfortable they’ve become with each other’s emotions. Something special is building there.
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    Chapter 8

    SilentandBroken commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 8

    This is only going to get worse for the kid. In a way, given what background story we know, I kind a feel for him
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    Chapter 8

    SilentandBroken commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Aaand so it begins..Lucas is in the wind on the streets without anything to survive with. This is not a good thing for him. He isn’t the brightest boy either. I hope the cops find him before a violent bum does. Oh btw granny crazy. on to Neil and his father…that was awesome. Beautiful
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    I’m ready for more!
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    Chapter 40

    SilentandBroken commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Have to agree that the Jewler had his own agenda & needs Justin to fulfill it.
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    Chapter 7

    SilentandBroken commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Kudos to Ronyx. Awesome chapter. Kudos to Owen in convincing the others Neil didn’t do anything they haven’t done themselves and that Lucas’s obsession for retaliation is wrong. Speaking of Lucas, the boy needs help and I don’t think he will get it. Not in time anyway. I’m afraid for Neil. Lucas too for that matter. If he had only 1/3 of the family support Neil has there wouldn’t be this problem. Now it’s not if but when. The other shoe is gonna drop and soon and there will be a lot of fireworks when it does
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    I’ve had to come back to my comment after rereading this chapter. I obviously meant whoever pushed Robbie not Nathan. Anyway, so long as you don’t drop off the grid and never finish the story Dodger, I wouldn’t worry about replying to every comment. I think Robbie is me mentally ready to move on from Nathan and has been for a while now. I’m ready for Robbie to finally be in a healthy relationship with Rory and see them both bloom. Robbie is waiting for Nathan to end it or him to cheat on him and that be his excuse. Neither will happen. Robbie just needs to do it. I can’t help but wonder if Miranda has been or knows the connecting missing link between Robbie being pushed, Stephanie being manipulative, and somehow they all tie in to Symmonds and that mess
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    Oooh yes Jeremy as Pan was a real cutie..I like his lips..
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    Such a beautiful boy. Such a sad story. I don’t remember when or how or anything magical so to speak why Jonathan became a crush to me. I just feel for him. Always thought he was gorgeous. His facial symmetry, skin tones, freckles, eye color, hair..but what really suckered me was the softness of his eyes and lips. Ugh. I just knew he had a huge heart and very kissable lips..which of course made me wonder about what ELSE might be soft and kissable 😘😋 sigh..there were other boys back when I was that age too but nobody captivated me like he did.
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    A young 14-15yo Jonathan Brandis and maybe even Leonardo DiCaprio at that age for that matter. Mm
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