SilentandBroken

Tbh Seth’s apology seems truthful. And so does his version of events. How ironic is it…or selfish for Rory, that the one time someone is FINALLY upfront and honest with him, he totally misconstrues that for something initially and doesn’t recognize it. Boy Rory is slow on the pickup

I’d prefer to see Luke do it. That boy has been looking for a reason

Oh my…. So hot.. wonderfully done

Rory has a LOT of things wrong. I’m shocked he hasn’t put it together that Aaron lied to him again only this time about Seth and Angela.

Henry the 8th I am I am!

Incidentally, I shared this with Comsi once and he loved it

YES. Emphatically yes! I’ve posted them before but here is Justin from GFD

It’s called narcissism and Aaron is exactly how they act. He’s a manipulative little boy who uses his hot looks to his advantage to screw with Rory’s head. Speaking of Rory, he needs to make up his damn mind. He’s waaay past getting a clue because they’re been there since he’s got to Az.

Ooooh this boy…sigh. Aaron is dangerous. Rory is clueless & can’t make up his damn mind because he’s too afraid to acknowledge the good person Luke is. HE is who he needs. As for Eddie and Jase, whatever it is isn’t any of Rory’s business until one of those two make it his business and bring him into the mix. There hasn’t been a whole lot of explanation of why Jase is in the picture let alone mad at Eddie. We can speculate all day and only remotely come close to being right here. If I were to speculate, I’d say Jase is pissed at Eddie because Eddie has yet to talk with Jase and Rory together and lay everything out. What everything actually is idk. Could be nothing but given how Jase is behaving I’d guess it’s something big but no clue what.

Yeah I’m REALLY not feeling all trusting about Aaron. Or Seth for that matter. As for the rest, I feel it’ll work out.

I get it with Rory. His anger is justified. Is he being immature with how he’s handling it? Sure. But, he’s also 16 and 16 year olds think with two things. Emotions and hormones. Put yourself in his spot. Is he missing some super huge clues? Absolutely but again, his emotions and hormones are dominating his focus. Out of EVERYONE so far, the most mature one is damn dog calling Luke out. So this chapter goes to Chey. I loved the pool scene. I loved the nostalgic moment Rory was using to help cope in his grief with his mom. I don’t think it’ll be long now before things get revealed. No way can any of these characters continue their own charade.

I think Carter is right under his nose. The kid is already looking out for him

Soo good soo hot! Damn Comsie. I take a break from your stories since you passed because..well because I just can’t. You were so fucking good at this shit. I found this story just cruising looking for something before I even realized it was yours and before you know it I’m sucked in and now I want more of this story. I want to see these boys bloom into soo much more…😭

Weinerdog is right. It’s going to be very hard and difficult but the struggle is going to be worth the finish. While GFD is Comicality’s Magnum Opus, this one is the one that resonates what life was like growing up for a lot of us. IMO, it’s his best work.

I just discovered this story and tbh …I’ve had a hard time still accepting your passing Comsie. God I hate knowing there will never be another masterpiece from your wonderful anxious loving mind on here. As for this story..I know it was writing with the intent to be a short story but damn you just get it off the ground gorgeously and it’s over. This kid was so precious and I soo want more. I want to learn more about that Irish heartthrob. Yes I’d be super pissed at my friends who outed me and I also have to agree they’d get a pass this one time too but they got lucky this time. I don’t think I would be able to forgive them if they did it again. Ugh 😩 why did you have to die Comsie. Other writers here come close to writing so accurately how well the nervousness and anxiety of coming out as a teen feels like but I think everyone would agree you have that “it” that makes it feel real..like you ARE that person. Such talent you had.

Ok I’m already rooting for Matt & Oscar. Intriguing start.

I CHOSE this one for not just the song but the cutie singing it..

As great as this story is I can’t say I’m at peace with it. How did TJ die?

Sigh. Fuck

I’m sorry but I don’t trust Carter. I have a suspicion where this whole story is going given the introduction at the beginning. I’m going to reserve THAT particular thought for the time being however. I don’t yet know for sure if Carter is gay but I’m leaning towards yes. However, I think Carter is poisoning TJ’s mind against Randy.

Comicality was a brilliant writer to me simply on HOW he convey the character’s emotions. Sure he was able to pull from his own experiences in real life and how he felt. A lot of authors do. But he had that “it” factor that instantly made what all his characters relatable. They became real. Being able to relate especially in MOE as my experiences were very similar in many ways ..at least in how I reacted to what I experienced was almost the same. Not just the reaction to the abuses but the emotional struggle to keep from losing his shit..not many authors can articulate it quite like he could. That’s what made him special.

Mrs Jones is definitely a gem. One thing I wish I knew how to do back at that age was to be a little more open with my emotions but alas..those cliques in school ..yeah, I wouldn’t have survived the first week. Randy has the makings of an awesome friend and more

First off Bravo Ronyx on a wonderful start. I love how you’re coming right out of the gate with both character’s perception of the same interaction. TJ just doesn’t seem like he can get a break and man..why is it the nice guys always seem to get shit on? In these case, this seems it will eventually turn true for both boys. On to chapter 3

Ok I just discovered this story and holy shit what an intro…already in thinking of Comsi 😭

Idk.. sometimes I guess. Seems to depend on the story and how well written it is.