FrenchCanadian

WOW, I'm amazed!!!,, outta word,, thx benji, CJ, CoLeYy, and of course Wildone.... as for now i'm having a good day,, didn't work and didn't have class either. so that good, I'll cut a piece of b-day cake for all of ya.

Great chapter again,, great twist,, this is the kind of chapter that makes me like read your stories CJ! Exactly, being Brandon, I wouldn't hear anything about getting into any covert plans with Eric and Jon. I'd immediatly would tell Chase,, BUT things we have to remember that nothing is done till it's written in the chapter and posted. At more than one point we've had changing heading at the start of a chapter... maybe that won't happen, Brandon already said "no way in hell". I think over the last few days he learned to stand up a little more for himself. hopefully he'll keep his ground with no, and tell chase right away,, it's time for another drum solo.

I've already said that i thought eric was overall a good guy. I think that promescious fits as it is there. but if it had to be replace, I'd use something with "gays sleep around"

wow amazing chapter,,, I simply love all that happen between chase and brandon in this chapter. and how about how chase got back at jon and eric!!! I know he did it mostly to get back at them from medling into their relationship,, but hey, everything that chase said was so dam to the point.... it's one thing that str8 people always assume about gays,, they almost all think that gays are promiscuous... but as chase pointed out,, they weren't exactly better for themselves. Any thought of what's in the paper that made Helen a red face and ready to burst at Jon and Eric? my guess is that 2 drunk guys coming back from a party is more than enough,,,

good cause it was starting to be a long wait,,,

wow, that is quite insane, specially since lots of the european countries , they can dring starting like 15

I don't think you have to re-enforce it that much in the text, I mean it's stated clearly enough that chase is the youngest and will be soon 18. and in the presentation of the group in the very first chapter, at least, it was also stated that Jon was the oldest and 21, so therefore it's just logic to think that Eric is the middle bro. I agree, tho here it's 18... but hey my parent were letting me drink some wine and other alchool well before 18.. it's all about control and not go too far. For exemple getting waisted at a foundraiser event is not that bright. Helene might have went far for them not to drink at all, but don't we have enough celebrities getting too waisted and finishing the night by going bald ,, she is just trying to protect them from doing mistakes that has-been star do.

YAY, I'll be the first one to give my comment about the new chapter,,, first of good one. In my mind it has been the best chapter yet... The way Grady handle thing with Dalton was wicked, tho I think that the coach did went a little hard on him, sitting him down for the next game and even saying that he could maybe not even pitch the next time too. hadn't Grady just said a little before that Mr Bellinger "hated" bullying,, and it was exactly what Dalton and the other guys were doing and Grady did told him what Dalton was saying to him, Also I think that Dalton was right for one thing,,, I think that Brennan is jealous or at least left out of the loop. and for that I can't really blame him, I'd sure be as mad as him.

Hey it was a good chapter overall. Just as much as someday out of the blue, I love the writting style. I think that there's still some developping that needs to be done, but in term of the story, I'm fairly sure that we're still in the intro phase. Well I'd say that it wouldn't be that much of a gay story if there's no real gay in the story point,, although I gotta agree that sometimes life makes you go through different things,,, a teen that always said that was str8 can turn out gay. good chapter, and i'm looking foward for the next one

wow, 500 posts, that's getting a pretty sizable amount of post,, congrats,, Maybe in a few years I'll get to that point, lol,, that's like 50 times more than me,

well well well, that's not really a spoiler, lol, it's just stating a fact... and as for the title for chapter 10, I don't know but i have also the feeling that it's more about Dimitri and the Scar. the wild night for the band is prolly just Eric and Jon passing out and Chase and Brandon taking care of them

Hey, it's a great chapter, ya darn Helen but I was more or less sure that something would make them to not kiss. I maybe in next chapter we'll have somee good follow up to the party in the hotel room,,,,

it could possibly, or the otherway around,, could some tequila be the cause of a cold between them,,, (something that I hope doesn't happen). Now I can't wait for the new chapter

Like some has already mentionned,, stop apologizing for stuff like that, cause you simply don't have to.

Alright, we'll still have to wait a few days (arrg) before knowing if they did manage to get the kiss done, but still I'm very gratefull that it didn't take too long for the brothers to tell chase that he had gotten the situation on the street all wrong. good chapter,, I personally find it better than chap. 8

hey, they story look promising, so keep going on. I'm a little surprised tho by how young you made your main caracter be. but still, looking foward to the next chapter

my guess wouldn't be "something juicy" per say,, but it could be nice that Brandon gets to have his sexy pose poster-like picture. The same would be with, who are their primary public. because having a main public of teen might not be a good sign for a long future career as a group.

Oh, I basically read all the story in 2 days. Very good story there, I'm looking foward to an eventual sequel. Strange, but at the end I was kinda hoping that somehow Eric would get some kind of absolution.

First of good chapter overall, it's a little sad tho that, this time around, there wasn't any big Brandon/Chase moment. I'm wondering the same thing, what is it so troublesome they'd need to keep from him. him being a fourth of the team? For sure a picture of brandon and chase hugging can make things more interesting.