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I think that it was a cliffhanger by itself,, them not being interrupted. Great chapter CJ, just like always I should add. yeahhhhh they done it. It was fun the reaction of Helen when she realized that it would be their first time, she was like,,,,, what!! you haven't done it yet,,,, and then how she helped Brandon to choose the right outfit for the occasion. I should say that being Chase, even if I knew it was just an act, I'd start to be jealous as the plan is for Brendan to act as if he has a "just a friend" girlfriend,, all there, kissing and walking arm in arms with Barbara. There's one line that particularly caught my attention,,, does that means that Chase will be outed soon, or at least rumors will start spreading... I'm hoping that, if that is the case, Brandon will stand by his side. I hope to see some more of Jim and Linda when they'll be around las Vegas, as they are, at least for now, Brandon only remaining souvenir of his old life.

Hey, it really seems like you had a blast. that's great! And, ya, if it's the same as it was a few years ago,, I really wouldn't have tried to drive in rome,, that's way to crazy

ya, I can understand there always can have little changes needed to precise something that will pay off in a later chapter maybe, Have you eaten some bad goat and gone mad?!? surely you haven't seen a herd waiting impatiently for the new chapter,,, it's just a joke btw,, and CJ take all the time it needs to come up with the best end result.

I totally agree with Graeme here, the answer is yes. It's the same thing for every story,, the best ones, the ones that goes thru time, have more often than not one thing in common, it is concentrated on the people and how they interact with each other. if that part of the story is good, then the reader will forget about the environment.

ya, that's a good choice,,,, Princess Beastkid

where's the new chapter?!? mamaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn

ya but they need to take them down,, otherwise by january 3rd they won't have the place to put up the Valentine's day decorations

Then, the boxing day ain't for you,, in the news they always shows the big lineup outside the future shop in downtown. It's really really crowded. because of that, they don't let us exchange the gift we receive on x-mas that day.

"colour" is the right way ,, and for pete's sake it's "zed" not "zee"

I don't think I'd be able to eat goats,,, I'm too picky of my food

Is it me, or I don't see the spoiler in that,, C'mon,, that's no spoilers!

indeed,, tho that's still pretty far from the great master goat

Oh yeah,,, the lyrics were nice, and yes, usually I don't really like it when it's putting in lyrics just to write lyrics. but I think that, here, it brings something special to the story, and knowing CJ I'm sure that it will play something later on in the next chapters

Well, I've been working on my own story, above with trying to manage uni assignments. Oh and finally, trying to keep up with mum's need to not go shopping alone

Then, I'll be third,, Welcome back,, the time seemed soooo long without you making your comments. We all missed you! and remember, we only give hard time (like starting queen things) to people we like. I second that,,, now tell us about the trip, and the fun you had!

Kevin, There you go, I've edited the post in question, ,,, hopefully, now, no one will give my comments unwanted meaning

Then what are you doing,, stop loosing your time and get back at it,, write my friend, write! I wanna say that I did say that you weren't the "queen" thingy,,, and that you NEVER used cliffhanger,, at least not in FtL Oh and ya,, Welcome back!!!!!!

Oh no! they'll be flying eventually without a pilot in the plane, and brandon will have to save the day!

Oh well, I might not have made the #500 but I did do my part maybe next time, hehehe, lol,, now it's 5:10a, off to work have a good day everyone

What's going on!, it's a real slow night,,, and slow day i should add, ,,, I'm about off to sleep,, sadly gotta get up way early tomorrow for work, and graeme, that indeed doesn't sound like the typical play that prep kids would make,, but way to go your son has one of the key role,, dada must be real proud,,, SLR

Thanks Kevin, your comments are highly appreciated. and I agree, when you write with someone in mind it almost always makes something very emotionally compelling

it seems like too many are filling their tummies and partying in family,, happy thanksgiving you americans btw.

we'll be alright,, only 9 post to go,, it will just be a little harder without Beastie.

well at first it might be fun, you know the "first-time" effect. but after some time, specially if you don't have any real winter sport that you do, it gets just annoying

less and less good since I've noticed there will be a snow storm tomorrow, I just hate that.