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Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
Lots of things are in motion. Vane is not giving up. He wants Carter to to diagram the key relationships. He will break them up. Elias is growing smarter. He knows trouble lies ahead. He helps them to unite and communicate simply. Caloway helps and touches Elias to show he cares about him -
Chapter 15: Counter Strike
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: Counter Strike
Lucy was poisoned by someone handing her water before she got on the plane to leave Iraq. She was dead the moment she drank the poisoned water. Peter and Andrew were quarantine after the plane landed in Washington DC to make sure they were not hurt by the radioactive poison. Will came to meet them and take them home. Andrew cannot tell Will about Lucy till CSIS clears it. Will is at risk, but does not know it yet. -
Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
When Andrew learns Will is challenging Julian Dufresne for the party leadership, he will know Will's life is going to be in danger. The forces backing Julian Dufresne will stop at nothing to see their man win. Will could be killed by a mugger or in a car accident so it would not be tied to Julian. Will could get CSIS help but Will is not going to be ready to expect Julian would have him killed. I wonder how Andrew alert Will without breaking his vow of secrecy. -
Let’s Be Mates Forever
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Let’s Be Mates Forever
A wonderful, unrestrained menage a trois. They shared their bodies and sexual positions. They inflamed each other. -
"When a newly observant Jewish family hires an affable jock as their Shabbos goy, the rule is simple: anticipate their needs without being asked." Things unfold in an unexpected manner. David, the Goldstein's son is gay and he eventually finds out the helper, Patrick is gay. They develop a sexual relationship and friendship which is not known by David's parents. The test will come when Aunt Einan visits. She controls the family purse strings. David knows she is sharp and might realize they are lovers. What will his Aunt decide? How will his parents react? How will the relationship between Patrick and David change?
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The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
A very satisfying ending--Thank you/ Patrick and David's relationship was discerned by Aunt Einan, “The boy is useful,” Einan said. “Good shoulders. Try not to ruin things. I’ll be back in the fall.” Patrick easily fell into a comforting role with David and his parents- 13 comments
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Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
Calloway has been warned.Keep your head down for at least 2 weeks. No thefts. Vane is on the lookout for things missing. Will there be surprise searches? He and Elias have not been intimate. They cannot be caught with Vane looking for changes. -
Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
"Julian Dufresne." as a Harvard professor raped his student Lucy Bradford. Her claim was considered without merit and it was requested so move to a less stressful school. Intimidating men followed her on campus. She fled and joined the Army. She listened to Andrew Carter and became convinced he would help her. She was transferred to a joint logistic operation and left with Andrew and Captain Harding. "The war against Julian Dufresne had officially begun." -
I am looking forward to learning more about Miles and what he is thinking in the next chapter. He might reveal what his motivations are and what his plans are.
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Right now, this really is clear as mud. It could go in many directions.
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Remember Kendo does not want to take Travis to a doctor or Emergency room when he is in his current state. The professional will realize someone--Kendo--has been drugging Travis. Kendo is trying to re-drug Travis ASAP.
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He is going to remember that last, hard great sex he had with Troy. I bet no one else will come close to what Troy did for him?
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Miles will be on his own. He will not be able to tap into his inheritance even if he sought to get money until he is much older
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Chapter 13: 24 Sussex
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: 24 Sussex
The conservative opposition will become even more worked up when they learn Andrew saved Lucy and their mercs were destoyed. -
Is this the start of what really happens to Troy and Miles? Now the title--Long Road Home--makes sense
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Barnaby and crew have to stop another disaster and have to act quickly. 'The Victorian parlour on Threadneedle Street is currently unspooling into the early Cretaceous" With their practiced skill Sam and Leo follow Barnaby's lead and stop the wrong-headed time shift. The Victorian humans are shocked and stunned and saved. Another crisis averted. These three are essential and effective. Barnaby is a critical leader.
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Barnaby led Sam and Leo to stop another timeline disaster. They met 5 individuals playing a board game that is the source of the problem. Time will shatter soon. "You have triggered a Class-Four temporal paradox. Julian, you absolute fool, you didn't just roll outside the matrix—you cracked the baseline probability engine!" Barnaby directed his men to stop the intervention and bring back the normal timeline. They succeeded and returned to their time and home. Sam and Leo were going to make love.
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The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
Davis is gay and his mother had to work through it and it took time. Now Patrick is regularly fucking him without protection. They are very comfortable with each other. No one else knows about their intimate relationship. They intend to not reveal themselves when the visiting senior relative who controls the purse strings arrives. David has said she notices everything. Is the ground being set for an explosive reveal? -
Troy needs to keep it together. He should call his dad and ask for advice. Miles has more issues to work through. Their rough love making it turns out was a form of a goodbye message. He needs to stay calm and be ready to respond to any inquiries from Miles and tell him he wants him back
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Chapter 3: The Friction of Stone
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Friction of Stone
Calloway has shown himself to be useful--mending and analyzing physical mechanisms. He helped Elias who will be paying more attention to him. Vane will find times to test and use him. Calloway is now visible. -
Chapter 13: 24 Sussex
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: 24 Sussex
So, Will now knows who is behind the push to get Andrew and drove him to Iraq. He hated being violated an abused. A conservative fixer tried to push him and she knows all about Yani. The mess is very serious. The PM told Will that he had to get into the fight and oppose the man wanting to be his party's leadership."He had to run. He had to launch a kamikaze campaign to break Dufresne’s machine and save his party." Will got the push to force him to act. -
This chapter fully exposed Kendo. He wanted Travis. He manipulated him and used drugs to control him and he thought Travis would be his ticket to lots of money. He originally thought Travis was tied to Marie and used his wiles to capture Travis with drugs. Now, that he knows his opponent ii Will he is scared. But, he is not worried enough to rip Travis off by skimming money from him when he sold his watch Will may keep away. I think it is time for Jake or Brad to meet Travis and offer to help him. Kendo is going to get Travis back on drugs as soon as he can. This is going to get lots more messy and painful.
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The Saturday Boy, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part One of Three
So the Saturday Day guy David had admired was gay ! David was very surprised What does this really mean? -
Travis feels his life has fallen apart. Will saw them fucking. He left his promise ring and cleaned them out Kendo is still manipulating Travis This is a real mess
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Part 11: Maybe It’s Not An Act
akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 11: Maybe It’s Not An Act
Matteo asked him to stay over tonight. This is real. Hooray!
