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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Ishan spoke about matters Wylan should not know. But now Darien will lead a party to get food and a physician. I hope they find the healer and bring him back. Ishah/Wylan might be needed to get the healer to treat Lloyd. This intervention will make others question who this Wylan really is, The mind switch must really happen soon. But so far, Ishan/Wylan has been very helpful.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Bruce made an apt point to Johnny “Sometimes people spend so long chasing something, they don’t realize they were meant to find something else entirely.” Jonny is not sure about his future anymore and Bruce is destabilzing him. His touches shakes Jonny up. I want to see what happens to Johnny and what role, if any, that Bruces plays in Johnny's new life.
  3. Steve and Carl angered a god who was known to Steve who has a Greek background. They had taken part in hunt to kill a very large magnificent stag. A shot was fired at the stag. The ground erupted and many beings pummeled them to the ground and a tall being who had to be a god appeared ready to see them dead. She told them she wanted blood. Their clothes were removed and a large satyr tattoo was evident on Carl. The action stopped and Pan, a satyr, appeared. After a back and forth, Carl agreed to let Pan represent him in the argument with the goddess. Both the goddess and Pan meet to decide. The chapter ends as Pan is going to tell Carl and Steve what will be their fate. I cannot wait for the next chapter. What a very interesting beginning.
  4. '[The whole theme of how I’d treated him since Thanksgiving was “zero effort.” So, Travis decided to care and gave Will much better presents and a welcoming mood of goodwill and lots of hotsex arose until.....The temperature dropped. Travis on the way to the plane landing in Boston mentioned he was jealous of Austin and this unwound their arguments about unequal treatment of male friends--Kendo vs Austin. They separated at the landing no longer in good moods which is not giving hope for their recent plans to work on being closer. They are on a rocky path.
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Yes, what is Rashid doing? Was he injured? We see Khalid is acting like a leader and devising a task for Wylan/Ishan. Rashid might be even more looking for opportunities to have Ishan killed in the earthquake turmoil Wylan/Ishan has to be more worried about Rashid.
  6. Will someone go after Lawrence and try to win him away sexually or emotionally from Bastien in order to destroy him or show he is not trustworthy to Bastien? Now if this is like an Agatha Christie mystery should not we experience strategically placed, misleading red herrings to hide the culprit, often finding the least likely person to be the killer? We will see.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Sky is losing his perspective and resolve. Plus it is only yjr first night at the lake Brant does not know what his words are doing to Sky...."Your name will always remind me of this moment.” What tender, loving words! My resolve to not let myself fall for him felt as if it was about to shatter. How could my heart resist such blatant romanticism? Such sweetness? Oh, God, he turns me on so much!" How can Sky hold up his feelings after two months of great sex? Will they have a chance to disagree?
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 36

    Her is the essential plan "Yes, but that storm has to be in court. We want to avoid a riot," said Tysalin. "We must defeat him legally through the Arbiter of Law, not a violent mob, or our people will not know peace. Ayrin is going to insure guards not supporting the Herald will be by him when he faces the court.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    I love Dimitri. He did not know he could not do things, so he did things.--like shoot the cultists and help them escape. A 9 year old mastermind saved the day and they fled the Father. Boy, were they lucky and the two are a great team. Isaiah is on a strange ship that is hollow. The leader has stolen the ship and the crew is also strange. He is assumed to be like the old god emperor. I hope he can work his way to Mickey's ship when he appears. Dimitri is dressed as a cultist and a god emperor clone so he can be a distraction
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    The two and their key adults survived the earthquakes, All around them seems broken and is disorienting. Ishan as Wylan gave an inspiring message to the crusaders. He was the right person at that time to turn things around. Darien is there to help the three reunite when they can The one who is more at risk is Wylan as Ishan. He brother, Khalid, knows something is off and his younger brother is not himself. He tells his Ishan to rest and to try later to find his connection to the blind boy. I hope the Wylan can find his Ishan and re-switch minds. Khalid will kill him , if he thinks his brother is not near him. It would solve his problem twice over. He would get rid of two adversaries right now.
  11. Lawrence should take Bastien's comment to heart as he searches for the killer. "Bastien didn’t wait for his answer. “This place isn’t kind,” he added, his smile fading just as the color fled from his cheeks."
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Yulin was given expert sensitive care and the right herbs to help him start to recover. He is weak and needs to rest now. Hopefully, he will show he has become healthier in the morning Azula has noticed Raith is too thin and wearing black morning clothes. He does not know why and hopes to find out tomorrow. Azula is torn. He still feels a great pull for Raith, but he does not know what happened to his family and clan members. He thought Raith was going to find and arrest those who really stole the ore. There is important information to be revealed. Members of his clan are upset. Can Raith begin to ease the pain?
  13. Lawrence met the golden circle, He saw lots of possibilities for a killer or two. Anto inot a fan of him, But.Batien is fascinated by him. He said in French to Lawrence-- I think I’m falling in love Lawrence was invited back to him enormous room and inspired jealousy in others. They danced and Bastien was a smooth, easy teacher. Bastien kissed him first lightly and them they kissed on the lips seriousl--Lawrence felt it was magical He left Bastien's room.... Good night, knight-errant. I look forward to learning from you.” Lawrence is hooked. He needs to be careful and watching out. He does not want to be killed.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    They are melding together very nicely and learning mote about each other and their likes for females and males--But, no mention of Keanu or the young Anakin Skywaler--Hayden Christensen ? They are looking forward to more hot sex. Sky is keeping Brant chaste against his hopes.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 35

    The bulwark is taking the lead in finding opposition to the High Herald. She brought her partner to the rebels to get the tonic that would free her from being controlled. She is taking Fenn back with her to assist her with another counselor and her partner,head of the place guard. Knowing the Herald caused the famine and made sure the pay of the guards was cut will help others oppose him Now, they need to be stealthy and win over more supporters. I hope the Herald stays clueless. Might Fenn have to step up to oppose the Herald , if he attacks them?
  16. akascrubber

    Uprising

    Jason--I am very sorry to learn of your ankle injury and required surgery. You must be in a great deal of pain. I hope you are getting some therapy and pain medicine to help your health improve. I use a cane and know about leg and foot pains. Good Luck!
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Oh no--they are caught, Camilla is questioning them. She wants to know why they are in her glassworks. They she knows they both care for each other. They cannot tell her and give away their mission. So, she has Sam's mouth open ready to be put in the ash. Enough ash will kill him. The knight has to speak to save Sam Just as the ash is ready to be given to Sam, Rafe walks in and shows he knows Sam. Things are going to get messy.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Isaiah and the gremlin are trapped in the alien space ship. They are held firmly and a superior power. This does not seem like they can be easily rescued. Are they being transported to the larger ship for questioning and maybe to be killled? What might give the superior power reason to free them?
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Wow--This is a mess with no apparent solution Is Jesse going to attack the vessel that has Isaiah and the gremlin and ignore Mickey? He must be trying to fulfill his contract. Jesse is going to take on a powerful enemy. Mickey is going to be disoriented when he returns and finds Isaiah missing. He will have ti improvise again? More information please.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    We were told the story of 12 year old Darien who was betrothed to a disguised Willian, not the intended Val. The three met later and Val said she wanted to be a knight and she knew Darien would be a knight. Their futures were set. Val and Darien stayed good friends from then on.
  21. Noah and Leo are fighting. Leo wants Noah to be candid about their relationship. But, Noah is afraid. Noah'[s parents do not think he might be gay. If they heard that, they might want him to leave this town for a career and a girl friend. He will not know their feelings unless he opens up. Right now, he is losing Leo.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    The Bulwark came to them and spoke of forgiveness and working together. She changed the mood and outlook of the group. She knew everyone was fooled by the Herald. She had a plan and gave Petre a copy so they could discuss and make suggestions for improvement. She has to get back to the palace, but they will meet again. Ain was very hopeful...."Ain was actually fairly excited for it. The thought of Lys-Akkaria and Orinovo being allies and working together had never crossed his mind as a possibility, but that was exactly where they were heading if this all went well."
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Trouble comes in sets--The first problem is this massive alien race with a strange language that seems to think Mickey and crew have invaded its planet. They hopefully can talk with each other and Mickey will not repeat the mistakes of the previous crew of his current ship. Can the gremlin help them out? The second problem if they survive is that a bounty hunter is after Isaiah because the Father wants him back. Why is he so important? He expected to be sent to the cliffs and die?
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    The earthquakes might give Wylan some cover for his ignorance about his two new brothers. He can claim headaches, dizziness, etc before he can recover. The earthquakes might make the city less defendable. I hope the Turks do not flee and take Wylan with them.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Their worlds' erupted at the wrong time. Major upheavals. Strange bright colors in the night sky. People will see bad omens. One earthquake after another at night. The damage cannot be really known till first light,I the crusader camp is ripped apart. But, Antioch could potentially suffer more. The walls could rupture and the city could be hard to defend. Ashot found walking through the city that starvation was common for the normal people. Ishan was reaching out to Wylan. They switched bodies. Wylan was in the city with Ishan two brothers. If they knew he was the blind boy, he would be killed. Darien knows Wylan has left and Ishan is with him. He is not angry. He wants them to find a way for them to switch back. Right now, neither boy knows what to do What a great mystery ! Danger abounds.
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