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    Chapter 13

    Sam--he is so fragile and just 14, He has been pushed in new ways to his extreme limits Has Sam committed suicide? Will Justin call 911? If he is dead or near death, the other guys need to get revenge with no limits of Pink and anyone else like her.
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    Chapter 12

    So, Goodwill comes to the rescue. It is an excellent operation, and I know a bit about it because I worked at one for a few years
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    OMG--A fifth book in this new series! You mind is so creative and you are so ambitious in your literary goals that are way above most of the writers in this site
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    Chapter 32

    Petre brought the injured, whipped Ain to safety and to recover. He pressed him to forget his attraction to Fenn. He told Ain Fenn is an adult and has made his decision. Fenn, according to Petre, will not listen to Ain. Ain was told that the people were not happy with his punishment and rioted. Ain felt he had to stop the fighting, He sought the rioters out although still in pain and bleeding. He found them in the square with the Herald's assistant ready to be whipped. She was not hiding behind the palace barriers like others. Ain stopped her from being hurt and chastised the rebels, He took the assistant to some place guards to return her to safety. Fenn materialized nearby saying he was getting ready to save the assistant. Fenn and Ain argued. Fenn sounded like he still was a puppet of the Herald. They parted unhappily. Maybe the other high-ranking officials hiding in the palace are upset with the Herald for causing problems. But, what can they do? Will an attack from the enemy shake them up?
  5. The author moved out of his comfort zone and began a supernatural mystery with a surprising love story. He liked the concept and so far has proposed at least three more books in a connected series. Mix a frustrated demon, a 73 year old philosophy professor who will not help the demon out, a 17 year old punk who delights in tormenting the old man and an uprooting body switch with a deadline. The 17 year old is moved into the professor's declining body with death soon happening. The professor takes over the 17 year old body with his problems of too many angry girlfriends, too high a loan debt due soon to a bad guy and a new gay attraction to a hot , well-built son of his father's political opponent. Unexpected alliances will be built, and new problems will be faced. People will need to face up to new realities or things will fall apart. I bet you will be fascinated and entertained as you read this story, Enjoy!
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    Chapter 13

    Ghostbusters? Are they going to act somewhat like the characters in that movie fighting demons? I am very glad you like his next book. It definitely should be worth reading.
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    Chapter 12

    I am betting there is a book two. It would be so cruel to let them think they beat the bastards and destroyed the game only to find out it restarts
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    Chapter 12

    Was Marc or Blue ordered to give Tim money or did he do it on his own? Tim existence or livelihood is very fragile right now. Did only Marc care? If the Director owns Maya's admission file, the Director is a school administrator? Can that person be discovered? Can rumors start about that person having sex with a student to ruin their career?
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    Chapter 11

    I did not realize Tim was 18. The police recognized the situation as a domestic dispute. A willing lawyer would help Tim sue on charges he thinks applies, if the father has money and might even settle to not face public awareness
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    Chapter 17

    King John's weakness lay evident. His fleet to fight off the French and an invasion was destroyed by intense storms. The nation is vulnerable. Lords speak of treason. Kaylen and Ronan and Tomas will be tested. The upcoming fights are going to be defining and hard fought.Will they survive?
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    Chapter 31

    The Herald tested Fenn to see if he would help hurt his former lover. Fenn was surprised Now, he tied Fenn up for their lovemaking play, The Herald got him to accept that the vines would be as tight as before. More bruises will result. Fenn's manipulation continues. He is acting like a battered spouse/partner.
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    Chapter 11

    Tim’s eyes, red-rimmed but clear, met his. “We’re going to find the people who did this,” he said, his voice low and steady. “And we’re going to burn their whole game down.” Tim's resolve and new focus will upset the game. He has nothing to lose Later, he can sue his father for support and humiliate him publicly.
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    Chapter 12

    This is confusing. Two 17year olds resulted from the swap and one is a zombie like eternal. How will this work out in practice? Two high school students in one house? Three upset girls who hate Charlie? Will Ellis leave Charlie and Taine and Tyler alone?
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    Chapter 11

    Why zombies? I hope you do not see Taine, Charlie or Tyler to be made into zombies by Ellis !
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    Chapter 11

    Things are going too fast--no time to release hormones joyously Tyler won his match as he expected. They shared a naked shower--so hot--mmmm-- with more fun intended to be happening later. Their dinner was perfect. They told each other they loved each other. But, then Taine's phone message told him he needed to go to Warwick Hospital. Is the 73 year old body failing? Ellis had to step in and ruin their moment and his life What will happen to Taine and Charlie? Will Taine be given the chance to take back his old body or left to feel guilty he lost the chance? How will Tyler cope? We just have 2 chapters to go. What kind of trade can be made?
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    Chapter 30

    Pride goeth before the fall The Herald overstepped and had to lose public support for whipping a war hero Yarima and Oretski saw the whipping and could not believe what happened. Fenn help make the whipping possible. They want to know the real reason it happened. They will learn of the Herald's action to seduce Fenn and anger Ain. This soap opera tale shows great weakness in the country's leadership. Orinovo can throw off their attackers because this country will be torn apart by dissention. Ain will not be helping his country since he is in jail.
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    Chapter 10

    This was very painful to read What a cruel, shocking and absolute disaster that befell these pieces and rocked the high school. These guys were punished in the most underserving, world turned upside down ways. They are going to be psychologically impaired losr They need to rethink their plans and methods. But, will they be able to turn things around ?
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    Crossroads

    Kitt needed that talk from Tom. He did need to feel a little less lost,
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    Chapter 9

    Even to pay for their marriage and honeymoon? It would help them out.
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    Chapter 9

    Sounds like Tyler should be selling his worn t-shirts, briefs and socks and maybe close up pics of his naked body and start an OnlyFans page.
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    The Veil

    Working together, the three persevered and took it all in stride and finally made it through the veil However, they only see a barren land. Theo remembers the poem. He needs to find the Wisdom Tree. Theo will lead the i other two to find their goal and hopefully find out about the missing pack Do they still need to have real sex soon? The next chapter should be revealing.
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    Chapter 9

    Dear author-do you want his worn, masculine smelling t-shirt?
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    Chapter 10

    On to seeing Tyler beat the Mangler...and having a good date with sex afterward? So much to enjoy, I hope. Will Taine meet Tyler's father soon and what will he say to Taine? Will he be as supportive and Taine's/Charlie's father was?
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    Chapter 8

    Love the sexy, suggestive dancing--Are the plyers being given ideas? Now, will some of the pieces be forced to dirty dance in the lunch room to humiliate themselves as punishment?
  25. If Martin has a title, do his kids get one? Does his former wife as a woman who divorced him before he assumed a title not get a title? Will Martin use his title on his official stationery, business cards and in formal legal proceedings?
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