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    Chapter 3

    akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3

    You have just painted a picture of a very formidable army that has a tested leader, Darien. Raymond has fanatics and lots of them, Baldwin must be weakened. Baldwin can incite Raymond but can he help him with men. Khalid is arriving soon with heavy calvalry to lay waste to Baldwin's land The sultan has sent Ishan to Jerusalem to get a treaty agreement with the Egyptian occupiers, He is to wait till when the crusaders and Egyptians fight intensely ."And when they are both broken," Arslan whispered, "I want you to light the match."
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    Chapter 28

    akascrubber commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 28

    The ending was magical, Sky and Brant felt so pleased at the location and with the people in the crew, and the movie. David gave a wonderful speech and champagne toast, Everyone felt very good. Sky, Brant and Rachoud went back together. Seems Rachoud had some male partners over the 7 weeks They all ended up at the Ford house for a meal and break before they went their own ways. Sky begged off from his parents to sleep and then have time to thinks Sky and Brant need to agree on their new public steps. They have attracted great interest and need to carefully act. But, they will really have to decide what both of them want to do emotionally and romantically.
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    Instruction Day

    akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Instruction Day

    Of course, Lawrence was a disaster in his first fencing class. He was given no real instruction. Anton roughed him up. He was first to take on Lawrence, He wanted to assert him dominance, Norris continued his punishment, Bastien came to him but left upset when he saw Lawrence was given the helmet of the dead Lukas Lawrence is clearly the odd man out. At least someone is trying to unsettle him. Others just think little of him. Some are paying attention to him. He left the changing area knowing Anton and Abelard roomed next to Lukas time to play spy>
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    The chapter shows the new relationships. Neven and Denir will marry. Yarima, Enlin and Mhaly will marry New types of marriage are becoming possible.
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    Chapter 14

    akascrubber commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Will something terrible happen at the full moon ceremomy?
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    They saved the ship. They did deserve a celebration Jace backed Leo into an alcove and mercilessly tickled Leo until he was wrung out and gave up---mmm
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    Saved by the hard-wired laws "A robot may not injure a human being, or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm. A robot must obey the orders given it by human beings, except where such orders would conflict with the First Law. A robot must protect its own existence, except where such protection would conflict with the First or Second Law." Lukas loves Eriks and wants to fuck him often They are on their way back to stop Tripp--This will be very dangerous
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    I think Rikard would be angry, He must have plans and Tripp has gotten in the way
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    Tripp should not get over competent and think just about Lukas ending Eriks. His rule over the constructs may not be assured I do not think Rikard will give up so easily after some code is written. He must have an alert system and backup measures to assure he remains in control after the inconvenience caused by Tripp.
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    Chapter 2

    akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Darien, Wylan and the Vanguard have to clear enemies that want them dead Baldwin of Edessa and his men who feel they were robbed of their treasure Raymond of Toulouse who sees Wylan as a threat to his fanatical religious rule. He had the bishop poisoned to prevent his opposition
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    Chapter 27

    akascrubber commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 27

    Brant is committed to a loving relationship with Sky. They will be tested when they return home He is very forceful and he sealed the deal fucking Sky twice as asked “Sky, I’m not lying when I say I love you. I honestly am not sure about my orientation, but there is no question in my mind that at this moment in my life being in love with you is the most real thing there is. It is my truth and my reality. I want to be with you in a full, loving, sexual relationship, openly and without some stupid shame or fears of rejection.”
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    Noah is going to strip and have a good time with a naked Chase. I hope his spirits are lifted.
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    New normalish

    akascrubber commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in New normalish

    Noah is troubled, but he is fortunate to have the love and support of close, caring family members
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    Yes, keep fucking again--because it feels so good and you will love this science experimant It will keep you both alive
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    The first male to male marriage in Orinovo. Barriers are broken Yarima officiated--"Then as the moon is my witness, I pronounce you Denir and Neven Anarov."
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    Matteo is driving him crazy--He still thinks about their kiss--Sleeping next to each other will be the stuff of his dreams
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    He is asking the right questions He will not like the answers "I had to say yes to his ‘fake boyfriend’ act. I had to play along. Why would I not? If being near him feels like this, how could I ever walk away."
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    She is not convinced. The boys will need to do more
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    Matteo cares more about his "boyfriend" than he is letting on
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    Preview

    akascrubber commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Preview

    What a mixture primed for the unexpected
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    Chapter 1

    akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You make me want to know how Darien protects Julian from his overbearing father who cannot handle his own finances. Darien does not like or trust Julian's father. I hope we find out what Darien does in the next chapter.
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    Shore Leave

    akascrubber commented on chris191070's story chapter in Shore Leave

    Jacevand Leo together sharing a private room on leave for 72 hours. The whole gamut of pleasure is open to them. Jace starts with tickling Leo's bare feet and moves up to cover his body and starts kissing him passionately. They have so much to try freely and are looking forward to their mutual pleasures.
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    Chapter 1

    akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Libbet can get creative. I bet she can say she feels pregnant and wants the baby to be safe. Her husband can earn more riches staying with the crusade. Julian's father had too many debts before and must welcome the resorces Julian can bring from fighting and the prestige he will get for his son fighting for God.
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    These two are going to have so much sex--Can the find new positions even if Lukas is tied up? Time to get inventive, I think
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    Lukas loved being the top with Eriks the bottom. It was a new and glorious , exciting experience for him. He wants to keep on doing it this way even tied up. They may have programed a sexual role they will keep on repeating. Then Lukas cited the loophole in his programming. “What, that all I have to do is go back to him, I shoot him, and I am free?” Lukas asked, frowning. “I mean he hasn’t given me any orders that say I can’t kill him. All he said was return to him… oh… OH!”
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