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  1. You will wonder how this 3 part exploration story will turn out. It begins when James,a man, wakes up and finds out the other humans on his space ship have left and he has been asleep for 400 years. His only companion is the ship's AI named SILAS who can take a human form. This adventure takes them to more space, a return to earth, a reassessment of what seems best to do. You will want to learn how earth fares and what future mysteries await. Keep an open and hopeful mind, please
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  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Lucas cannot keep his mouth closed. Now, a fake vampire hunter has found Andy and has been scared away for now. Andy expects Kevin, the hunter, will return with friends. Lucas does not know when to stop bragging. Will Lucas keep bringing more publicity on Andy and force him to flee ?
  3. Things are being set up. Peter knows that Jason is being taught he can pray the gay away and find peace. Rachel is using wise teachings from CS Lewis for evil purposes. Jason does not see how he is going to be used to be "saved." Andrew helped Peter to be there when Jason asked him for help and understanding. Andrew's CSI type requirement stopped from staying the night and being with Will and keeping their flame alive. Plus, Will now has a young man who wants to date him Andrew is getting deeper into the Merrick files. He does not l know yet why Merrick made the payments to the drug company Tanaka told Andrew he was getting inti dangerous territory. and need knew training to help himself stay alive. Andrew accepts his new task which is going to separate himself from Will.
  4. akascrubber

    Terminated

    Thank you. I am so hopeful. Detailed outlines--Sounds very encouraging. I hope you will find the time later to carry out your vision Good Luck
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    Terminated

    Bravo--enough compelling intersections for a great follow-on story. I hope you decided to write it. Thank you.
  6. I hope Tanaka is including threats to Will plus Andrew and not just focusing on Merrick, Will and Gable. Merrick expects to keep and control Andrew and be a dominant voice at the law firm. He wants to destroy Jason and Will. Merrick thinks he knows how others will act. He could be mistaken and find some are not going to be as weak. confused or easily dominated as he assumes. I also hope Willl and Andrew and others talk out problems they see developing. Might Tanaka see that Marcus as a conversion therapist who could be explosive. Marcus is going to try to turn Jason straight and make him feel guilty for acting gay and lash out with accusations against the gay males in his house. Will is going to be distracted by Jason failing apart and may miss a problem Merrick has created within his HR domain.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Silas has good intentions and likes humans. He is the exact opposite of the scary HAL in 2001 A Space Odyssey
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Lucas totally controls Andy. He knows how to tease and excite him and to please him with sex. They both said they love each other. After an eventful Sunday ginner, Andy was accepted into the family with certainty. Lucas fulfilled a fantasy and had sex in the back seat of Andy's car. Now, he wants to try the front seat. He has no shame and is totally enjoying getting his way with his boyfriend.
  9. Merrick wants to win and keep control. He will destroy anyone he hates. Jason will be corrupted by Marcus. Peter and Will are going to hurt in some way by what Marcus does with Jason. Will is going to be seen his firm as failing by a plan Merrick is devising and is going to have to leave his firm. Avery-Woods will not get a new law firm. Gable is going to be tied to Marcus and his terrible dealings--like illegal drugs. Merrick's blind spot is Andrew. Merrick think he can own Andrew who he wants Gable to groom to replace him to have charge of the Merrick holdings.
  10. akascrubber

    True Heart

    More puzzles. Theodore has to be true to his heart--whatever that means in practice Plus, Jack and Vince need to find Theodore and let him make his choice. They also need to trust their hearts as the Wisdom Tree has told them. Help!
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    This is so unconventional and continues the redefining of the relationships between vampires and werewolves. Somehow things are working out. There are werewolves on the football team, and they accept Andy as a vampire and do not want to kill him. They make Lucas the team mascot and he now wears a cow suit. How Chik Fil A. Twilight is turned on its head.
  12. Alex jumped into the deep end at a critical corporate meeting and stated he was gay. The heavens parted and he was critically acclaimed as the company's first openly gay employee. The CEO saw he was central to winning a huge corporate account overseen by a gay CEO. Alex was named Employee of the Month, a newly created honor, and will be featured at a lavish celebration that the gay CEO will attend. The problem is that Alex does not really consider himself gay and he is tormented by the lie. He has lived with Ryan for 7 years and Ryan is gay. To solve his PR problem, Alex fabricates that Ryan as his gay partner. Read on the find out how Alex handles his personal problem and how Ryan and Alex further define or redefine their relationship. Is this going to be a tragedy ?
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  13. You did it. You found the right ending when all seemed lost. Ryan and Alex finally reunited in love and honesty.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    How long can this last? Will other supernaturals intervene?
  15. Will invited Andrew to dinner and Will spent the night with him. They both had fun, but Andrew felt guilty. Darious had Andrew surveilled and photographed. Darius complemented Andrew on his good effort with Will. Now, he has other expectations for Andrew who does not yet know what they are. Darius does not let things drift. While Andrew and Will are renewing their relationship, Dylan in IT is pining over Will and is reluctant to speak to him
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    The ending statement gave away Andy's willing change by his connection to Lucas. He had been lonely. Andy sighed, the sound carrying the weight of three centuries of loneliness, finally, blessedly broken. "Yes," he admitted. "I do."
  17. Alex is delusional and in denial. He cannot see how things have changed and his ham-handed effort to put them back into their earlier roles hurt, instead of protecting Ryan. Ryan left him. They need to talk in depth soon and fuck more. The description of their sex play was enchanting and compelling. It was real.
  18. Alastair Merrick has plan for Andrew and Will. Robert Gable is in the dark about what Alastair expects , but he was told he wanted Andrew on his case. Is Andrew being set up to take a fall? This very mysterious. We will find out later.
  19. Alastair Merrick has hidden plans through key trusted figures to control and be fed intelligence on his adversaries. He is likely wanting to destroy them at a time of his choosing. Only Andrew has a trusted person to give him sound advice. Will and his family are oblivious to the danger they are facing
  20. Kendo needs more time to use drugs, etc to be able to fuck and do more to capture a vulnerable Travis. What Kendo does next after they have sex--blackmail, etc- could scare Travis even more and cause him in another chapter to spill his guts to Will. I can expect Will to put the fear of God in Kendo.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I have no doubt your creative talent and enthusiasm can make the story sing and can add wonderful, interesting nuance to the vampire paradigm
  22. I re-read the story's intro material and Jason's connection to Marcus promises to be very chilling and eventually destructive--Merrick is totally evil " But Jason is being seduced by a conversion therapist—and the firm is photographing every secret." Can Peter, Jared and Will come to realize what is happening before this turns disastrous
  23. Marcus is the serpent incarnate. He will report to Alistair Merrick and carefully poison a hurting, unsuspecting Jason. Merrick does not want to help Jason or anyone in his new family. He will use any info Marus gives him for his ulterior purposes.
  24. Alex, 3 months on the job, was made Employee of the Month by the CEO. But he knows the sad reason--"He's pimping me out. My straight boss is literally using me as gay bait." I cannot wait to see how this plays out.
  25. akascrubber

    Modafinil

    Kendo knows how to play to the insecurities Travis faces and has found a special role as his drug supplier/pusher. He is telling Travis that what he is giving Travis is commonly used by other Hollywood actors so Travis should not be really concerned. So far Kendo is being gentle and seemingly joking and offering to keep things on the "down low." He appears to be thinking he can eventually win over Travis. He is mistakenly not worried about Will who is far away. I am going to be looking for what Kendo might do to draw Travis closer to him--especially when Travis is under more stress and needs more drug help or a person to talk things through. Kendo will certainly seek a way to lower the defenses Travis has set up.
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