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Miles has been very lucky so far. Erik supports him. He has not run into any mean or evil guys on the road. He has money to support his travels so he does not have to take hard or uncomfortable jobs like dishwashing or to sell his body to live. It seems Robbie will be a lifesaver and confidant.
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OK--now we have to know what Miles did not tell Troy, but told Robbie "So I started to speak, and didn’t stop until she knew every one of my secrets, including the biggest one I hadn’t even told Troy— the reason I had turned tail and fled." How can we best know what matters to him and what he must do to find peace and acceptance ?
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Chapter 17: The Wedding Planner From Hell
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wedding Planner From Hell
They will be formidable duo. Dufresne had better be prepared for extra scrutiny. Yani will find the foreign intrusion. Will can use the help opposing underhanded attacks -
Chapter 17: The Wedding Planner From Hell
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wedding Planner From Hell
It is organized chaos. Will's run for the party leadership caused the RCMP to order the wedding to Toronto for better security. Peter is adapting and reorganizing the reception and wedding planning. He shows he is a force of nature. Will is facing increased dirty tricks from Dufrense. He fears he is ruining their wedding. Andrew closely holds him and says he knows what matters. "I am going to stand up in front of whatever is left of our family, and I am going to marry you. That is the only objective. We are going to survive this campaign, and we are going to build a life together. Do you understand me?" -
Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
Vane sensed something was off. The fractured group as reported to him did not match up with what he was seeing. He will be looking at them more carefully. The group might learn their truth cannot be hidden for long. Do they need to create acting roles for Vane? -
Julian is fortunate to have Mr. Clarke who appears to be an honest man who knows what happened and what is needed now. If he buys the place, Julian will have to invest more. "The plantation was left weakened. Repairs delayed. Debts where there should have been surplus.” The weather has been calming, but there can be rough storms that might require costly repairs so Julian will need financial reserves. The plantation will require his full commitment.
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Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
Perhaps in hindsight people are going to understand the wisdom and real sacrifice of Will's effort to stop a corrupt man who would tear his party a part. Will is a moral man. -
Julian appreciates what he sees. "I feel like a man learning the shape of his own future." He still needs to know if the plantation can be a viable going concern if and when he buys it from his father. The financial discussion he has next is critical. Is his $50,000 enough to correct the problems left by the past crooked manager?
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Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
Hey, the PM and his husband to him to run with different reasons. How could he say NO. -
Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
I think if Will become a credible force and begins to spoil Dufresne's rise to leadership, then he might face dirty tricks and vague, non-provable threats to his life or his family -
Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Eva Peron Gambit
Will did it. He resigned as interim leader and is contesting Dufresne for the leadership of the party. Andrew could not tell him what happened , but he knew Will had to run. His request to undertake a suicide mission was enough for him. He only asked the right to name their first child He had a plan."Will was going to force them into a corner, hoping they would overreach and hand Andrew the leverage he needed to finally break them." -
Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
Love to read about the sad , painful life that will befall Alistair Merrick. He has hurt too many to not suffer more once his physical recovery is discovered -
Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
akascrubber commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
Nos is learning his own securities are holding him back. Cal seems receptive to him, but Nos does not yet know how to read him and treat him right. Will he be ready by theGlass Moon Festival to get properly close to him and enable them to be real mates? -
I just read today about the mess Chris Atkins created as a young star. He was a hottie who starred nearly naked in the Blue Lagoon. Speaking to a conference now he said he became addicted to alcohol and lost out to Kevin Bacon for the lead role in Footloose. His career spiraled down due to his alcoholism Travis needs to take action with help to turn his life around. Kendo has to leave him or be pushed away.
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Dr Kendo controls Travis now. OxyContin is terribly addictive and will control his life. Kendo has him ensnared Travis can still function during the day. He stood up to Brad and Jake. They have yet to learned how much Travis depends on drugs. They put a private detective on Will. Maybe, they need one on Travis. Brad warned Travis that he was questioning Kendo who he just met and wondered if he had hurt Will. Brad said to me severely. “You might explain to Kendo that if he does that, he better start looking for a rock to hide under, because I will destroy him.” Kendo should be scared when Will finally talks to Brad and Jake. I can see the family will help Travis get into a drug rehabilitation program
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Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Frequency of Dissent
Lots of things are in motion. Vane is not giving up. He wants Carter to to diagram the key relationships. He will break them up. Elias is growing smarter. He knows trouble lies ahead. He helps them to unite and communicate simply. Caloway helps and touches Elias to show he cares about him -
Chapter 15: Counter Strike
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: Counter Strike
Lucy was poisoned by someone handing her water before she got on the plane to leave Iraq. She was dead the moment she drank the poisoned water. Peter and Andrew were quarantine after the plane landed in Washington DC to make sure they were not hurt by the radioactive poison. Will came to meet them and take them home. Andrew cannot tell Will about Lucy till CSIS clears it. Will is at risk, but does not know it yet. -
Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
When Andrew learns Will is challenging Julian Dufresne for the party leadership, he will know Will's life is going to be in danger. The forces backing Julian Dufresne will stop at nothing to see their man win. Will could be killed by a mugger or in a car accident so it would not be tied to Julian. Will could get CSIS help but Will is not going to be ready to expect Julian would have him killed. I wonder how Andrew alert Will without breaking his vow of secrecy. -
Let’s Be Mates Forever
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Let’s Be Mates Forever
A wonderful, unrestrained menage a trois. They shared their bodies and sexual positions. They inflamed each other. -
"When a newly observant Jewish family hires an affable jock as their Shabbos goy, the rule is simple: anticipate their needs without being asked." Things unfold in an unexpected manner. David, the Goldstein's son is gay and he eventually finds out the helper, Patrick is gay. They develop a sexual relationship and friendship which is not known by David's parents. The test will come when Aunt Einan visits. She controls the family purse strings. David knows she is sharp and might realize they are lovers. What will his Aunt decide? How will his parents react? How will the relationship between Patrick and David change?
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The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
A very satisfying ending--Thank you/ Patrick and David's relationship was discerned by Aunt Einan, “The boy is useful,” Einan said. “Good shoulders. Try not to ruin things. I’ll be back in the fall.” Patrick easily fell into a comforting role with David and his parents- 13 comments
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Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
Calloway has been warned.Keep your head down for at least 2 weeks. No thefts. Vane is on the lookout for things missing. Will there be surprise searches? He and Elias have not been intimate. They cannot be caught with Vane looking for changes. -
Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Ghost of Cambridge
"Julian Dufresne." as a Harvard professor raped his student Lucy Bradford. Her claim was considered without merit and it was requested so move to a less stressful school. Intimidating men followed her on campus. She fled and joined the Army. She listened to Andrew Carter and became convinced he would help her. She was transferred to a joint logistic operation and left with Andrew and Captain Harding. "The war against Julian Dufresne had officially begun." -
I am looking forward to learning more about Miles and what he is thinking in the next chapter. He might reveal what his motivations are and what his plans are.
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Right now, this really is clear as mud. It could go in many directions.
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