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What a way to compel us to read your next book! You have raised our expectations, and we will expect an uncommonly compelling and substantial work of literary art. I suggest
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These mysteries reinforce my appreciation for our author. I am glad you are back much better with a strong voice that captures our minds. Thank you.
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Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
OMG---The veth captured Mickey and said Kyle, the pet, would be incinerated. Was Kyle really killed ? Will he be found alive? Hughie was located and is being taken to Isaiah's ship. The veth scout ship is left behind with Kyle? Hughie will tell Isaiah what happened. Will they go after the veth mothership? Will they find Mickey before he is killed? Too many key questions that needed to be answered. Help please answer them..... -
Ishan was saved and the battle to save him was intense. The witches were badly injured and stopped. Ashot and his team were merciless and effective Now we will find out about the consequences for them. Wylan needs to recover and reunite with Darrien. Ishan needs to heal. There is much more to do and understand. The vanguard may be the sane force. Raymond and his fanatics and Godfrey and his men will be fighting with no restraint against terrified, weakened Egyptian forces
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Well, Gabriel found Sean who was being held by kidnappers with a hood over his. head. Gabriel killed the kidnappers silently. Lonnie then found them. Gabriel asked Lonnie to hide his role and he left. Lonnie and one of his security guys took Sean away Sean in his band area asked Lonnie to watch out for Gabriel who he knew just saved him. Lonnie was reluctant but agreed to do what Sean wanted. Sean thinks Gabriel is going o die and he will not see him again Gabriel walks the interior of the huge facility. He thinks he sees the sniper but he loses him. He will renew his search efforts I hope Gabriel is lucky and finds the sniper. I expect he still has to consider he is also a target.
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I remember driving at 65 mph on an Interstate highway crossing rural Michigan. I began to smell a pungent, foul and very strong odor and realized I was passing through pig farms. The smell cannot be forgotten once you noticed it.
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Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
Could Mickey solve his mother's fixation on him and save Dmitri by now visiting an agreed upon clinic and depositing enough sperm to enable several birthing mothers to have babies? The docs can study the pregnant women and know if one will have a female child -
Johnny continues to deepen his soul searching and is bringing together parts of his life. He is having unifying insights and finding ways to refine himself and how he sees his craft. He reaches a turning point. “You finally stopped performing,” he says. “That’s what makes great actors—they don’t act, they feel.” Now, Johnny confidently looks ahead...."but my path, lit by authenticity, is one I’m determined to walk without apology."
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Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
So now we know the backstory on Mickey, Hugie and Jesse and their struggles. Mickey was lucky to live through his homeless period at 14 years of age. He found Wren who saved him first, then Hughie who save him next and finally Jesse who took him back off the street. Hughie and Jesse will continue to save Mickey as he cycles through his periods of despair. He will continue to risk his life along the way. Mickey was smart enough while homeless to not eat the special surprise noodles. -
Oh My-Ashot is leading the mission. Wylan is going to find a way to sneak under the Jerusalem walls and find Ishan who is imprisoned before he is killed. Ashot and three others are going with Wylan. I am sure the three witches will be present to stop them and try to kill them, if they are up to it. This could turn out to be a suicide mission. Wylan feels he has to save Ishan
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The allies defeated Iraq in 2003. I have a feeling many of the readers on this site that comment are some years older than 23. But, that is just my guess and the shock and awe phrase was added elsewhere. It was the headline before the final battle began and it turned out much shorter that estimated.
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Talk about a shocking and uncommon type subject for your next book I will keep an open mind
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Things are wonderfully set for a potential better future Julian's impressive forces arrived because of his wife and he is made a knight Geoffrey's forces arrived and he was shocked at what he sa and gratified that Darien thought ahead and prepared for them with food and supplies Wylan told Darien of his terrible vision. Darien believed him and said he would not let it happen. They will return home. Tomorrow--The battled for Jerusalem begins
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Raith will not break Azula's heart. But, others will try to thwart his plans to seek vindication , gain proof the clan committed no fraud and stop any efforts to find out what happened to any clan members left behind. Raith will need to protect Azula and help him .
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Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
Isaiah has to be ready to accept and help a broken Mickey. Finding him with Kyle who is his sex partner will shock and test his resolve. But, Mickey needs help. -
Norman Schwarzkopf Jr. Commanded The Allied forces to Defeat Iraq using Schock and Awe https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Norman_Schwarzkopf_Jr.
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Noah looks like he is going to be responsible and stable. He feels connected to Chase like no one else He set up a scholarship program anonymously. Now, he just saw Shiloh applied to it. I think he should follow his feelings and say no. He cannot trust him. Shiloh will not know he was the donor. He must be applying to lots of places for help.
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Yes--Theo knows he has been listening to an evil spirit and has stopped paying attention to it. Jack and Vincent want to see the battle and told an evil spirit they will not be discoutraged and think less of Theo. The evil spirit hopes not.
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Palomar is in the cabin next to Granger. He will know if Granger has sex with an officer, I wonder how he will react when he finds out Granger has sex with men. Willl he be upset? Will he join the list of men who wants to have sex with him?
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So, Harry and Aled are going to move in with Callum to take his spare bedroom. Can this situation remain as is? Will Callum make a play for Aled or Harry? We will see.
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Chapter 5: THE ART OF THE CRASH
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: THE ART OF THE CRASH
Mickey is still a coward. He will not tell Kyle that the sex they had was a mistake. He will let Kyle enjoy more sex with him and let Kyle keep masturbating too. Mickey is going to be even more depressed, Will something happen to shake things up? Will the veth find them? -
The correlation of forces has changed. Raymond has lost his commanding prophet who was burned in a pyre. Haskal is the centerpiece and Geoffrey will lead the crusades to capture Jerusalem. Haskal will be holding he key high ground territory of Bethlehem. He is preparing the city to defend an Egyptian army. He has Greek fire.
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Granger has to be looking for the two French spies/sympathizers One officer already sems to want to seduce him. “Don Rafael Herrera de Soto y Benavides, sir,” he said, his voice deep and resonant. “If I may be so bold, I have been looking forward to meeting you.” His smile was captivating." He bothered Palomar. I expect Granger will be wary of him, too. He may have a resource to check out for information on his officers. One midshipman likes him since he is from Roses.“Don Jaime Riquelme, sir,” he said. “I have had the pleasure of seeing you before.”
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I bet George is going to spend some of his own money to outfit his new men and ship and see the ship is up to high standards. He is going to need better sails as is and for sail drills and extra power for gun drills.
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Wow--Granger definitely took charge of his new ship and laid down the law. He explained his mission for the ship, the immediate sailing plan and his expectations for what must happen when the ship is in the drydock. He is making several new requirements., including his normal bodily health standards. George is going to have many opportunities to evaluate his officers, men and ship. After the main meal he should get his report on the food for the men and discus his thoughts with Captain Palomar. George's initial impression was to be suspicious of his purser,
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