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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Sam has to be careful. He will killed if he is seen by the drug pushers. The lady already wanted him killed. They likely are going to checkout the warehouse. I wonder who owns it? After his rescue and retirement in their room. Sam feels very attracted to his knight but cannot day it." Perhaps it wasn’t a lack of courage, but the fear of rejection if Graeme knew the truth of Sam’s attraction." It turns out both feel an attraction for each other, but are not able to take a risk and speak their mind.
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    Prologue

    Ishan is standout gorgeous. It is a sham Wylan will not be able to se him. However, Ishan's future is tied to Wylan who might be able to save him from his brothers "And somewhere ahead, in the darkness between them, a blind boy was waiting to see what he would become.: Together these two can chart a better future for each other, I bet. I cannot wait.
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    Chapter 9

    You mean Brant, not Grant.
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    Chapter 6

    I am looking forward to seeing what Dimitri becomes
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    Chapter 29

    With luck and determination, they made it out safe from their attackers. It was very scary, The plan is to march tom confront and destroy the High Herald who was a cruel dictator. Then they would march back and overthrow the queen Fenn is very angry and resolute. He will payback all his false orders and free the country. The Herald will not give up easily. He must be ready for Fenn somehow.
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    Chapter 6

    Lucky Dimitri--He is now free--For the moment--He did not have to face the cliffs. Will Mickey show up and take Dimitri? Will Mickey comply with the court order? He may need to in order to keep his new ship. Dimitri will be in heaven and want to be on a falcon banner ship. It is the stuff of his dreams. He has knowledge about the force behind the ship and its adversaries. He will be targeted for obedience on any location that has servants of the Father. Isaiah and he can bond over their shared cult experience.
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    Chapter 1

    Stephen and Julian are being trained by combat and deaths. They almost died. Others are assembling. The men are getting ready to host the king after he comes through horrible passes with his men. They need to recover and then move on to Antioch
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    Prologue

    Ishan was not killed by the sultan who liked that he killed his father who was weak--too weak. His two brothers would defend Antioch. Ishan would lead the vanguard of 1000 men to delay, obstruct, poison the wells of the crusaders who are coming to Antioch Rashid is the true devil. The Sultan did not understand him. ....."He turned to Rashid. "And you, my clever one. You smile and you bow and you whisper in the ears of men who think they are your friends. You are a useful man to have at a court." But, Rashid is the one who killed his father and wanted Ishan to be killed for it Ishan needs to end his brother.
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    Chapter 5

    They have to be careful at Port Talon. This new ship will attract attention . Someone might inform the former owner or some Asmsus entity. Mickey and Isaiah could have a target on their backs when they leave Port Talon.
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    Chapter 9

    Wow--The step by step and repeated shots made the production work in Brant's apartment, Even Brodie's eventually was able to not get upset seeing his son being fucked--even if simulated. But the high point was when Brant and Sky went into Brant's bedroom to handle their hard leaking cocks. Once inside , Sky offered to suck Brant off and he accepted. The experience was explosive and Brant was so excited feeling new joys that he kept crying out. He could not say "Fuck" enough. Sky gave Brant a world class blow job and was lucky to be able to eat some of his fabulous cum. Needless to say, the crew, director and Sky's dad heard them and knew what had happened. Sky and Brant have crossed a line and I can see Brant will want more cock sucking fun from Sky.
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    Chapter 13

    "Azula said, his voice steady as he looked Wolfe in the eye. "The council wanted a solution to our standoff with Lyria. Here it is. At best, we negotiate a peace. At worst, Draeya Prince will make an excellent hostage." Raithion has three purposes for approaching the Sura Clan. One was to save his poisoned soon. Two, he was delivering a message from the Basileus offering a study of the past crisis and possible redemption. This message could end the stand off and offer a path to a reconciliation. Three, he wanted to meet Azula and he has yet to figure out what to say to him. Someone should note his black mourning clothes and find out his wife has died from poisoning.
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    Chapter 28

    They found Ain and began to take him out. The guards attacked them. Nev was hit in his shoulder with an arrow. Still he labored forth carrying Ain to freedom. Eventually they found Fenn who was taking them to their hidden shelter, Fenn hurt Ain when he touched him and was very worried, Yarima said they could work the problem out soon. Nev and Yarima are injured. Only Fenn is a full strength and able to forcefully defend them. They are still in danger.
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    Chapter 13

    Raithion and Azula met at the shore. Azula was angry and threatening. However, Rathion's plea to save his son was answered. Raithion and his medic/coroner were taken to a healer's area and Yulin was on the way to be treated for Silver Malice poisoning. We will find out how long the treatment takes At some point, the matter of renewed relations and answers to questions will come up. Will Azula be i open to listening to Raithion?
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    Chapter 5

    Facing disaster they went back to the abandoned ship and took it over. It was larger, cleaner and more powerful, Mickey wants to dump the bodies of the dead crew. They were killed by microwaves. They are going back to Port Talon to claim the ship. Hughie the AI was transferred to this different ship What can of worms did they open? Will they have a target on their backs?
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    Chapter 15

    I saw in a movie that cute young guys get adopted by an older male protector in prison. If Lee makes his guy mad, his teeth will be broken and taken out so he can give good blow job.
  16. What a scary, exciting tale focusing on Kier's sidekick Riley and the monster, Ben. Keir has run away with Lee, Ben was his project, Kier, back He is his architect and he wants him back. Ben finds Riley and is disoriented by the chaos he creates, He is going to use Riley as bait to get Kier back. "I am not 'sweet'," Ben snarled, leaning his weight against Riley. "I am his architect. I am the one who made him. And you... you are nothing. You are the dirt he scraped off his shoe." He takes Riley to his home. Riley is not sure he is going to live or not. This mystery expands and revises Ben's assumptions and eventually draws in a 4 main characters. You will be amazed how people grow and warp and have new wants. This will almost conclude with a life and death struggle. This does not appear to be set up for Happily Ever After ending. Do not put this down!
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    Chapter 15

    Thank you. Lee has fled and the police are after him. Kier just melded away in the ether. Ben was lucky and is saved and has begun resting with Riley as he caregiver. Ben want to explore sex with Riley when his body recovers "I see you," Ben confirmed. "And what I see is not a tool, or a variable, or a project. What I see is a person I am unwilling to lose. A person I am learning to... care for. In whatever way I am capable." "That's love, Ben."
  18. Noah and Leo are slowly trying to figure out everything from labels to sexual positions. The are still keeping their relationship secret which led to a smell fight going out with Fabian How soon will they forgive each other?
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    Chapter 4

    His mother wants a daughter to take over her business. I guess she will find a surrogate using his sperm Mickey's three children are Jeremy 3, Arlo 5, and Dimitri 9
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    Chapter 29

    Rebel forces are surrendering. Louis is sitting in his reinforced London cage. His last hope is a new fleet with men , money, supplies and siege. engines. The English feet is preparing to take the French fllet on. This victory could decide who finally will be king.
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    Chapter 27

    Staslav , her mother's greatest magical creation, stood in their way to save Ain. He had so many awful powers. Yarima sent Nev to gather Ain while she fought Staslav.He kept winning in his attacks and Yarima was injured, Unti the end, when Yarima concentrated her power to destabilize Staslav. Yarima was able to get close and killed him thrusting her dagger into her heart. Now, they had to win. The queen will know she was involved They still need to find Ain and take him back past more guards.
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    Chapter 4

    Mickey soon needs to start on that cup of semen for his mother. Is that right? Will he finally get Isaiah to help him? I hope he shoots lots so he can fill up the cup before it spoils.
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    Chapter 14

    You say you have not written the final chapter, so you have not decided the outcome yet. If Ben and Riley knew they were going to be targeted to be killed, then why did they not have any weapons? Did you set them up to lose or die? Do you want this to be hopeful or a tragedy? I push for hopeful along with other, but.... You have just enabled the four to get on the same page with no misconceptions, Will you kill off Ben and let Riley turn feral? Keir and Lee seem now to be irrelevant. You can end the whole story on a tragic note. The siren, though, offers a possible medical solution.
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    Chapter 14

    "He is not the bait, Kieran," Ben stated, delivering the final, ironclad truth. "He is the replacement. He is the evolution of my design. He survived you, and in doing so, he taught me how to open doors instead of building walls." Ben Shocked Keir. The Lee found them and used his crossbolt to shoot Ben in the shoulder who fell to the ground in great pain Keir and Lee ran away and found the Audi and drove away, Riley found Ben. He will not pull the bolt out. Riley is staying with Ben not knowing how to get help worrying that Ben is slowly fading. Maybe, help is on the way. The chapter ends as a siren is heard. Is it coming foe Ben or is it going elsewhere?
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    Chapter 8

    I find it amazing how methodical, repetitive and well prepared the practice for the movie scenes were. Sky had to teach Brant and the director about anal sex penetration and they welcomed his tutoring. I wonder if Brant to be very capable by the end of the movie. Of course, realism matters. Sky's father recovered eventually after seeing his son in a simulated gay sex act. Things are falling into place nicely.
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