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  1. Wow--JJ has fallen hard for Kris. He wants him to be his boyfriend and only have sex with him. He is going to move in and Susannah is kicked out with cash to survive. They keep having great sex . Even Jacinta like Kris. All seems in sync and wonderful. I hope it lasts for a long time and they can both moderate their anxieties and tempers. Thanks for the insight into the family at Escorial. Several are going with Will to Athens. Even Marie is going to stay there as long as Will. This could be a delightful send off for college. Will did not know how he got his role at the Olympics. I hope a former enemy is not seeking revenge at some point. With all who are going, Will will have a strong, capable support group to handle any challenges
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    OK--I can see that River and Kenji are going to meet after this performance. I expect Kenji will make contact. I am apprehensive. I read the intro story comments. I noted-"Things get messy and feelings get hurt." River is a sensitive guy who can be hurt by the wrong guy who gets too close.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    River really gets into his online act. He prepares a special costume and make-up and follows a theme. He sought to be a vampire as a viewer asked by private message. This time two friends helped him with one on cam and one in the act on cam in costume . His friend did not show his face. River had to be fascinating with vegan leather across his body and a barely there brief along with material in his hair and lots of makeup. I guess he stripped to naked since he said guys want to see his male bits. He remarked on his messages that he did not expect so many guys wanted to fuck a Pokemon character. The session was streamed and pics were taken for sale. He was nonplussed by a short message at the end, saying-"I thought you looked familiar." Well, I hope River is not freaked out. It might just be a statement of fact. But, if Kenji shows up at the tattoo shop, then River will need all his wits to figure out how to react. Maybe, Kenji wants to ask him out on a date. Will he accept or run away from the shop?
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    This chapter to me examplifies a more powerful and richer ability to make the key players more interesting and compelling figures. You add new elements and characters that advance carefully advance the plot, Having Lew find his grandmother who is a powerful elder with a good sense of humor is a masterstroke. Xavier and the green dragon story seems to be known many except Mablin and Gablon who will find out when they return I do hope they reach Lucas the Lost and gain the hidden great power is sought and then are able to move on to Scorpion Falls. Getting mixed up in the dragon wars could impair or prevent Xavier from restoring Seandra You continue to make me want to dream up what might happen in the next chapter. Your actual text , though, is always better than I conceived. I hope this is not the last chapter and the story is not put on hold.
  5. akascrubber

    Four

    Keith found the right place and right guy by luck. Good for him. He was transfixed by a serious kiss which was a new expereience for him. It was wonderful. ....."Keith passed it off as meeting an old friend. And that’s what it felt like, that he’d known Thomas forever." Thomas was new to the area and an interesting sympathetic man to a newly out--just found the word--gay guy. Their first meeting was very encouraging. The next one might be even more meaningful and pleasing.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    What a fascisinating, sensitive advancement of the story that breaks new ground. Thank you. We are told the touching, troubled story of Hontel, the orphan, who is now healthy and on the way to recovery. Garnet meets him and they question each other. Garnet gives him the blessed holy symbol of Rovnar and gives him a incorrect story of the caravan members who he expects to be reported to the watch. They do not want the watch to track them and see them as a threat. Xavier is still having nightmares and is embarassed by his cries that others hear. Madelyn acting like a mother counsels Xavier to see his worries as a sign of his strength and inner goodness. She is amazed and supports his views and those of his friends. They are uncommon and that is what is needed. I think he is given the push that he needs to turn his attitude and behavior around. The surprising find and path to new knowledge was Lew finding his grandmother, Kameko, who is a pantherling clan elder. Lew took his grandmother and a sliver dragonling to the camp. Over time it was all revealed. At first, the clan elder and silver dragonling could not believe that the halfing was a green, also. When they accepted it, they realized the serious implications. The green dragons had silently infiltrated many places and were very dangerous. When Kemeko was leaving camp, Xavier gave her a letter and green dragon horn for Prince Milan. She told Xavier that is is likely to be drawn into the dragon wars now that he is known to exist. I hope not. Right now Xavier most fears meeting Premier Kandric, the dragon killer. We learned that Kandric had just killed Prince Werawald. Xaiver is not near to him. Xavier wants to travel to Lucas the Lost for a purpose. He and his crew should be further distant from other dragons and the battles they are fighting. I do not think Kandric will want to kill any sand dragons who do not threaten him. Kandric has other priorities than seeking Xavier--working with King Wryhren, taking the battle to Rolling Dale and fighting Flexna to bring his kidnapped brothers back. If Kandric wants help fighting in the spirit realm to take on Flexna, then he could do no better than graciously seek out Xavier and Garnet to help him. What a great informative chapter !
  7. By law, US fondations must give away a minimum of 5% annually. They can give away more. Some have set up a lifetime existence like 20 years from the date of being established. Those who set a lifetime limit want to aid with more money the present generation and also not depend on future as of yet unknown board members to decide and who might not think like those who set up the giving program.
  8. I some how think Hudson will be the most nervous for others and especially Otis. But ,I see Otis being calm and collected in the face of potential danger and death. He will disorient the bad guys and unexpectedly find a solution and , I bet, a gun and kill those who will hurt Hudson.
  9. I think is ist very positive that Owain and Mhari want to know the real story about the family business. The college professor seems to have done a fine research job with the lomited material she found. The comapny's real records were destroyed after the bankruptcy. As for making armaments and black ,ayet dealing, the picture is cloudy. In the lead up to WWII and during it, many firms were needed to protect the country that at one point was severely bombed with a fear of invasiion. In the US, I know that the Ford Moter Company turned to a force making tanks and airplanes. The founders son did not have the skills to run the company . After WWII, a large foundation was set up to support charitable causes. It seems to me that contrasting strengths and weaknesses of the male leadership history is not fully known , but influential. The great grandfather built the company, The grandfather destroyed it. He was strong minded and may not have liked his son and saw to it that he would not get his money. I bet tax law was involved. The father seems to have rejected what his father bult or was not going to share in it. Was this the reason he joined such a fundamentalist strict church? He did not want his kids to benefit from family money and tried seemingly to illegally hold money from them aslong as he was alive to use for other purposes. He seems to not have enriched himself. The present generation is better grounded .Owain and Mhari are not greedy or just looking out for themselves. As they talked about what to do, the group thought about a high minded purpose and did not argue. Lots of money can tear people apart.They are not counting their chickens before they come due. It is wonderful that the came up with the idea of a charitable trust to help give away some or maybe a great part of any possible inheritance. Joe offered an idea. Colin thought it was great. Owain wants him to help him make decisions. This is all so encouraging.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 23

    Thank you--Life will now be much better. You showed us how the good people in the story can have a fulfilling path forward. Brother Wolf will be rebuilt with Micco and Chase as a team running the new place. A new pup appeared and Micco knows it is Kane in a now young form. Micco and Chase made up for lost years and are ritually committed and joined as husband and lover. They shared over the night intense new now total sexual experiences. They hold nothing back. They are ready and hopeful as they look ahead. What a good feeling ! Well done.
  11. Oh My God--Hell is in session, Bad fate is ahead Keres wants a third young man for the dangerous--snuff-- performances. He knows about Otis. Otis is drugged and captured and hidden away. Keres meets him and likes him Hudson requested that the police protect Otis. He just found out the police were too late. Hudson realizes Otis is on trouble. Plus , he should realize his life is now in danger and has a short future ahead. They know he will react badly when his boyfriend is put on stage at the club. Hudson will be killed soon. Hudson is supposed to not know Otis will be featured until it is too late. He is expected to take pics as part of the team and not expect to be killed when Keres orders it. I hope Hudson can some up with a plan and is able to use his hidden gun. Otis , I believe, can and will act calmly and look for opportunities to stop the bad guys. He can take pain . If Hudson starts shooting, Otis might react and find a gun on his tormenter and killl other bad guys. Let us see what happens, This is scary....
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Some things are becoming more settled. You could almost end your story here with one big loose end.The main people find or make closure in positive ways. The future of the animals and the shelter are in limbo with nothing clear. Matthew tells Micco about his father and mother. He wanted to confess his sins. He was friends with them. After marrying his mother his father turned into a bad man who turned into drugs and abused his mother. She fled. Her husband later sent non-Seminole men who killed her and his sister. Matthew found out Micco survived and killed them and his father. When Micco was returned to the tribe, Mathew took control of his own life and sought to be better person and a real father to Micco. He succceeded and is not hated for his killings .He has no sins in Micco's eyes who takes in all this and says Matthew is his true and good father . Calhoun gives Micco a confession written by Sam to him. Sam states he has decided to not go through with the plan to end the shelter. He realizes he needs to follow his good side or wolf and not his bad wolf . Micco has set a good example for him and he wants to do the right thing. Sam did not realize the danger he faced when he changed his mind. Incidentally, Martina has not been found and is presumed lost/dead . Micco returns to the destroyed shelter. He gathers his animals into a few structures and tries to comfort them.. The whole place is broken apart. Chase finds him and tells him he will help him and has taken a leave of absence from the FBI. Micco does not expect the tribe to help the shelter. He cannot see a solution as of now. He is comforted by Chase and that strengths him. Micco and Chase as a couple will take in the situations they now face. Let's see how things develop. I hope they get some very good news.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Raith and Azula finally come to an understanding and will trust each other. They realize, also, they are attracted to each other . Raith made sure the right legal step has been taken . Azula was not going to do this and it would have been a mistake. The thefts have been properly reported to the magistrate. Raith can now officially guard the ore transfer, We learned about the background and motivation of Gesi. He is truly evil and tightly wound. He is behind the ore thefts and wants to discredit the Sura clan and obtain more money. Gesi dreams of being part of the royal family. He is seeking to get his daughter introduced to Basileus Dio and for her to eventualy become his wife. He expects to continue controlling his daughter. Things are moving toward disaster for the Sura clan. Unknown to Azula and Raith, Gesi is directing plans to bring charges on the Sura clan very soon and Raith may not arrive in time with exonerating evidence. I hope Raith and Azula are lucky and able to arrive in time with the ore and more. Raith will claim the Sura clan is blameless since previous shipments have been stolen,
  14. Wow-Key threshholds are crossed. What a great day and night. They went to the society party. JJ with the focused help of Belona saved Kris's job and made sure the his biggest boss saw him favorably. JJ made sure Kris was introduced into high society. Kris was estatic.... “I felt like I was out of my league at first, but you were there and that made it alright,” he said, and gave me a loving kiss." At first they did not connect well when they got back to JJ's place. Kris did not make a move on jj and JJ felt rejected and retreated to his room and bed. JJ began going nuclear since Kris left him alon But, Kris joined him in bed and they both made love and said that each other was their best sexual partner. Kris said he did not know how to deal with JJ and JJ opened up and reported on all his insecurities. Kris then knew he had to fuck him and it worked. They are now very compatible. I can see JJ feel to be in love. He held nothing back and let Kris know about his fears and issues and Kris still wanted him. Hooray!
  15. As for the possibility of an attack or capture of the king for a bargaining chip in this critical time while peace talks are underway, Granger creatively sees how he would do it. He sees a threat from his view as an experienced frigate captain who has used men in boats from his frigate to sink ships ashore, free men in prison or from slavery and end threat from prirates on two continents and it motivates his thinking . Calvert understands how Granger is thinking when he earlier remarked-- ---“Thompson was thinking as the captain of a ship of the line, while you were thinking as the captain of a frigate,” Calvert pronounced. Calvert looks at the maps considering the motivation Granger has offered and sees a way for a small naval based party to capture or kill the king . At the upcoming dinner party, Granger is going to offer his idea of a threat to the king and it maybe too far fetched or unconventional for Major Gambier of the Life Guards, but then Major Moultray of his Marines should better be able to accept it. In any event, Granger seems to have the freedom to do as he wants at sea so he can have his frigate patrol the area of a likely assault and send a jolly boat with Marines to patrol the cited lagoon to watch out for a warring party. I bet we are going to find out if Granger and Calvert are right before long.
  16. akascrubber

    Three

    Keith is on the path to being gay openly. He told Jaz without incident or pressure. He is asked two gay men how you knew you were gay. He is being thoughtful and not rejecting his feelings. Now, he just has to find a guy or maybe a few until he finds one that he wants to be long time friends with. He is not, thankfully, hoping to find his love right away. He is not going to live in a fantasy world.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    No doubt, Kenji can afford to buy River's new pics from his web site and might become more attacted to him if his desires are inflamed.Will River post hot pics that are crafted to make him sexually appealing or just place simple naked poses showing off his body as if he is in an art class? I would love to see what Kenji want to do next after seeing pics of a naked River. Might he email and offer to pay for new special erotic poses and outfits or more?Will he come back to the shop and be direct and ask him out on a date? I hope River get to meet him for a third time and is further charmed
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    What a trip to and through the club they frequent. It was enlightening and tiring and unfulfilling. They eventually open up to each other. River gets hit on by Nicky , a bartender, who interests him and August gets a poor choice. River thinks he sees Kenji going with others into the super VIP area. August teases River about the guy who he calls his "little soul link" who River refuses to accept as fitting. Did Kenji notice him looking down from up high? Red pants and a black harness would make him standout--especially if Kenji saw him earlier on line. BTW, River plans to post naked pics this time on his site and could be even more irresistible. I wonder if these new fully revealing pics will tempt Kenji to make a move to know River better. August and River leave the club not connecting with anyone and travel to River's apartment to sleep. River and August wonder how things will turn out for them? They seem ready for something new and better. River ponders their lives and hopes....“After everything we’ve been through and how hard we work at it. We’ll be happy. We have to.”
  19. The love these two men express is very uplifting and encouraging. You want them to survive and be rewarded in the face of their enemies and they have so far. This is an apt and happy episode to read about on Valentines Day ! Thank you, Mark
  20. Love the blowjob Geoge gave his long lost friend. They both needed that reward. Winkler was present to help the two friends adjust. What a glorious discussion George and Francis had covering ships and their capabilities and the possible threat to the king by a small party seeking to kidnap him. George and Francis came to the same conclusion on the likely attack approach and way to defend the king, if George and his ship had to do it. I bet George is going to discuss his ideas with the two Army officers who are coming aboard for dinner. He , though, is ready with a backup plan if they do not accept his threat assessment. Sounds like the expected calm duty might have some firewoks.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    A wonderful, happy gay fantasy where all turns out right--boy meets his true love and they stay committed and homophobic father realizes he is really gay and connects with his son's father in law. Goodwill and love abounds throughout. You made us all so pleased as Valentine's Day begins. Thank you
  22. akascrubber

    State Visit

    I am very glad the first family visit went so well. They have a plan for other meetings. Annalise is a gem. The kids are irrepressible and too energetic. Connie, the mother, is slowly warming to her more honest gay son. This was a healthy activity that is encouraging. Owain could not have had such a visit with his family while his parents were living. However, he is in good shape now with his sister. Colin has to be very much relieved about the improved feelings with most of his family. Miles will just be a pain for now.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    I can see Xavier's crew moving to Scorpion Falls to enter the desert after they secure the legendary power they seek at the City of Lucas the Lost. Xavier and his friends meeting Adga and her patrol pus Lord Kandahar will rock all theiir worlds. Meeting the thought lost sand dragon king, drow, garm, alphar and Orakin will be history making for those in the desert realm. Will others join Xavier's quest to liberate/ recreate Seandra and drive out the evil spirits and death walkers?
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Axel was a true lifesaver--but undervduress. He essentially ran an emergency room for Jeha and his injured men in an apartment. They were treated expertly and in safety. They did not want Moon's gang to find them and kill them. Axel seemed clueless at the seriousness of the situation. Ryan ,the second in command to Jeha, told Axel he would have to wait for answers from Jeha when he wakes up. Ryan and the others also know he is "sweet" on the boss and that the boss likes him. When Jeha wakes up Axel helps him take care of his basic needs in the bathroom. It is done clinically without affection.Axel considers Jeha as his patient. Jeha is so sore and weak. Axel asks Jeha if he is running a gang Jeha, I assume , will be candid. He wants Axel to stay with him and give up his practice. He will likely be danger from Moon's gang after he saved him. The scene is set for a serious conforntation. Axel , I assume, will not be be willing to give up his practice at the hospital. But, the two men are drawn to each other. Will this tension drive them apart or bring them closer as they realize they have strong emotional feelings. If and when Axel can stop thinking of Jeha as his patient, but as a dear friend and perhaps impending lover, the path forward to them will get even rockier. They live in different worlds for now. This feels like scenes from the Godfather.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Adga encouraged and permitted fights to let some gain their freedom or be measured for their potential value to his patrol. After contests she offered three the chance to be on her patrol and considered one to be a standard bearer. The patrol seemed to bond with some of the captives. The tales of exploring the Crags and finding treasure scared many and upped the respect for the patrol members and Adga's exceptional power fighting death walkers. We learned a more balanced view of the drow. The history of the drow was not just defined the bad drow who attacked the garm in Under River. It was claimed there are also good drow and this statement surprised many. The Shunral line is still hinted as flowing from Drow ancestors and in fact it was. BTW, in the Sands of Time Xavier's bodyguard protector is Syth Shunral, a powerful drow fighter, and maybe a founder of the house due the King honoring his defense of Xavier from an assassin. The noble sons described the cooperation between the drow and alphar and garm fighting mthylings and in the desert and Under River. Alphar and garm drow armor and weapons are still being found in the desert. Past beings were identified as destroyed in the fighting , including Falconings and orakins and sand dragons. The chapter ended with the next goal. Nuk and Tez are going to sit on the pain causing chairs . "Nuk stated as he gritted his teeth and stood. “Getting more blisters is not something I am looking forward to, but if we get a map and the hole the packs came out of to open again, then it’ll be worth it. We need ink, parchment, and quill in the hands of someone who can really draw and do so quickly. I DO NOT want to go for a round three on the same chair!” They want a map of the Crags and hope to create a new magical opening. The results could be pathbreaking and mind opening. We will see soon.....
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