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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Yeah--it is a primitive time versus today. Searching was cumbersome, Microsoft just put out its useful browser in 96. I was addicted searching the web and the first night I got online I stayed up past 3:00 AM Would Kier be smart enough to effectively hide his spying?
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    If there are cameras outside. Ben can check the feed tomorrow morning and will be aware they are being watched. I do not know if the cameras are good enough to catch faces clearly. At least, Ben is warned.
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    Chapter 11

    Sam was not careful. The men have him and they might want to play with him and his body. The armor and knife made him a matter of concern. Is his knight tacking him and will he arrive in time to save Sam. While a prisoner he may learn useful information about the ash and who makes it.
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    Chapter 13

    You know many of us want a happily ever after type ending. But, I can see you ending with an unhappy result blowing up all the main relationships with lots of unnecessary violence. Ben, Riley, Kier and Lee are flawed. They could lose the trust they have and get mean with some being really hurt and some running away
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    Chapter 26

    Training in the dark is going slow and bothersome. Neven is upset and Lashes out at Fenn. Yarima surprisingly comes to Fenn's defense They are not yet ready to save Ain.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Some progress==Mickey while drunk tried to kiss him 7 times and at least once touched his chin.
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    Chapter 3

    Mickey is going to have two members of his crew who are fleeing the Father. He will have a mark on his back. So, what's new!
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    Chapter 13

    Are Ben and Riley being lured to Leeds to be stuffed and hidden away? “And Northern Transit specializes in secure, unchecked cargo to the Scottish borders. If Kieran wanted to disappear...." or to disappear Ben and Riley....
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Reading about Taine and Kyr fighting the evil bugs really is exciting--even if is a comicbook
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Ben and Riley dismantled Montague before his father and mother. He was shouted out of the house by Ben's mother. They now knew the plan was a fraud. Montague fled fearing his creditors. Will he find a way to get back at Ben? Ben and Riley were in great moods. Ben got Riley his driver's license and bought him a small Jag. Riley said You love me." and meant it, At home they got in bed and got close. Ben asked to do more, He touched Riley and really kissed him. They were so outside or at least someone watching his house into each other, Meanwhile, Ben has missed Kier watching his house. He focused on Riley and not his neighborhood. He found an electronic record that suggests Kier is in Leeds. Riley and Ben will travel to Leeds tomorrow. Ben has not considered the record was a false one. Kier would assume Ben will track him and he will mislead Ben and send him away. Why?
  11. Noah was not the target, Uncle Matt Two husband and wife doctors were jealous of his promotion and wanted him ded. The bad male doctor was caught on camera messing with Uncle Matt's car. Both doctors were arrested but released on their own recognizance. They returned to the hospital to kidnap Noah. Security guards stopped them. Little B stayed with Noah and made sure the door would not open for the kidnappers. Noah is safe for now. But, he has to tell Shiloh and the bracelet he was wearing, More trouble ahead....
  12. Knowing there were three parts helped focus my attention. I wanted to know how it turned out and not have to read a twenty chapter story that might dwell on painful self-destructive actions and thoughts. You resolved the issues fairly quickly in a positive manner. Jake and Junior still cared for each other.
  13. This is compelling, powerful story starting out as sexual abuse of a high school student, betrayal of a close friend and serious guilt that never seems to end. Jake learns his worth is only as a sexual object. It all crashes when serving as a Marine in Afghanistan his legs are blown off. He works through his pain and depression to become a wheelchair bound coach in a high school in Alaska. He builds up his upper body and takes part in athletic games. Junior, the boy he feels he betrayed, finds him and comes to visit him with his husband and baby. Jake is very apprehensive. How they relate and come to understand each other is very enlightening. Will they be able to accept each other and not come to physical blows and painful mental anguish as Jake fears. What will they learn about each other? Is this going to be a tragedy? You will want to finish this story to learn how it turns out and how Jake and Junior move on.
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    Chapter 12

    Raithion is traveling to Sura island. He needs to find an antidote to cure his stricken son. He brings an offer of a retrial and possible redemption from the Basileus. The Sura leaders want closure and to find their lost relatives and dead bodies. Raithion can help them, Will the bad blood and deep hurt between Azula and Raithion prevent a reconciliation? Will they ever be able to forget and become closer?
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    Chapter 25

    I am worried about Ain, Neven wants to spend a few days training and testing, He is risking Ain's life by the delay. , Neven already said he and Yarima cannot be gone too long from the queen, Will they have enough time to train the rebels? Neven should help Fenn plan his attack and where to find and kill the torturer. Fenn can capture Ann and take him back to this meeting place.
  16. Theo is trapped by an evil one. Jack and Vincent wolf form had moved to the Whiteflame pack in the past, They met Theo's father and were incvted to share a meal. The father is very gracious. They asked to see Theo and were told he would appear soon.But, they were advised he was very formal. Things are so mixed up. How can they be changed for the better?
  17. Thank you. I was very surprised and comforted by how this story turned out. I was not expecting this story to be this positive and redemptive. It could have been a tragedy but for the way these three men grew. Jake fearing the worse was turned around. He counselled Junior to not have any regrets about their past and to please understand Jake took responsibility for his own choices. He joined the Marine. He was injured. He now is living as best he can. Junior stayed the night with his husband's support and they both found ways to give each other orgasms. They needed this chatharsis. The quality , goodwill and improved understandinng from this visit impressed me. Jake was invited to stay with them in Seattle next summer. Things are going very well for these three. Arriving home, Jake contacted a male friend and invited him to stay the weekend and to go out for dinner. They are going to have a real date and not just a rush of excitement. Junior has changed Jake's opinion of himself and how he can better relate to others.
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    Chapter 2

    I hope even though cowards that they do not seize the opportunity when they can to find a better way to survive. I guess we will find out soon.
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    Chapter 2

    That looks like a falcon symbol--is this ship something from the past or a different culture? Will they return to this ship?
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    Chapter 12

    Cane23's suggestion is quite provocative. "Hmm… could Kieran be behind the Montague business?!m" If so, Kier has really upped his game and is playing chess, not checkers. He wants to destroy Ben. In any event, the normally smart and insightful Ben is clueless focusing on his new feelings for Riley and could be destine for a great fall.
  21. This is overwhelming--John has been told now that he lived a lie in his mind. Karsa did not love him. Karsa used him to infiltrate the human army and see its destruction. The confessor would be found and painfully burned alive "Teardrops dampened the warm stones – drip, drip – as Karsa crumbed the remains of his ear-borne grub and flicked it away, and all its enchantments with it. “That my mother, Warden of the Woods, would debase herself by fornicating with a human. Or that I would. I am no half-breed mongrel, you troglodyte, I am a true elf, as pure-blooded as my ennobled foremothers. But you humans do so love a tragic ardour.” John has served his evil purpose well. No what? Will he be given a quick death?
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    Chapter 12

    Oh No--Things are going to off track soon in unexpected ways riley took Ben to Cheetham Hill and found the right guy. They learned all about Montague and who his creditors are. He needs to pay them back by the of the month or else. Ben says he will be humiliated and destroy him tomorrow. The two are very pleased and become more interested in their relationship. But both men did not keep their eyes on their surroundings They missed Lee seeing them at the market. He used his cell phone to tell Kier he saw them together. Lee has a friend whocan track Ben's car and give him Ben's address Kier and Lee will mess with them. They know they have not been discovered so far, While Ben is focused on Montague tomorrow, perhaps they might rob his house and maybe if Riley is alone at home or on the street alone they might take Riley hostage and rough him up and pump him for information and money, Will they demand a ransom but really intend to kill Ben?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Sounds like there might be a need for a heavy laundry detail for loaded up socks and other clothes
  24. Cole was his lifesaver.... But this sounds ominous--"He had built his fortress piece by piece—completely unaware that one day, Junior Griffin would come to Alaska to tear it all down."
  25. Jake was out of options. So, he enlisted in the marines. As an army veteran, I think he made a bad choice. We will see.
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