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Her is the essential plan "Yes, but that storm has to be in court. We want to avoid a riot," said Tysalin. "We must defeat him legally through the Arbiter of Law, not a violent mob, or our people will not know peace. Ayrin is going to insure guards not supporting the Herald will be by him when he faces the court.
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I love Dimitri. He did not know he could not do things, so he did things.--like shoot the cultists and help them escape. A 9 year old mastermind saved the day and they fled the Father. Boy, were they lucky and the two are a great team. Isaiah is on a strange ship that is hollow. The leader has stolen the ship and the crew is also strange. He is assumed to be like the old god emperor. I hope he can work his way to Mickey's ship when he appears. Dimitri is dressed as a cultist and a god emperor clone so he can be a distraction
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The two and their key adults survived the earthquakes, All around them seems broken and is disorienting. Ishan as Wylan gave an inspiring message to the crusaders. He was the right person at that time to turn things around. Darien is there to help the three reunite when they can The one who is more at risk is Wylan as Ishan. He brother, Khalid, knows something is off and his younger brother is not himself. He tells his Ishan to rest and to try later to find his connection to the blind boy. I hope the Wylan can find his Ishan and re-switch minds. Khalid will kill him , if he thinks his brother is not near him. It would solve his problem twice over. He would get rid of two adversaries right now.
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The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
Lawrence should take Bastien's comment to heart as he searches for the killer. "Bastien didn’t wait for his answer. “This place isn’t kind,” he added, his smile fading just as the color fled from his cheeks." -
Yulin was given expert sensitive care and the right herbs to help him start to recover. He is weak and needs to rest now. Hopefully, he will show he has become healthier in the morning Azula has noticed Raith is too thin and wearing black morning clothes. He does not know why and hopes to find out tomorrow. Azula is torn. He still feels a great pull for Raith, but he does not know what happened to his family and clan members. He thought Raith was going to find and arrest those who really stole the ore. There is important information to be revealed. Members of his clan are upset. Can Raith begin to ease the pain?
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The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
Lawrence met the golden circle, He saw lots of possibilities for a killer or two. Anto inot a fan of him, But.Batien is fascinated by him. He said in French to Lawrence-- I think I’m falling in love Lawrence was invited back to him enormous room and inspired jealousy in others. They danced and Bastien was a smooth, easy teacher. Bastien kissed him first lightly and them they kissed on the lips seriousl--Lawrence felt it was magical He left Bastien's room.... Good night, knight-errant. I look forward to learning from you.” Lawrence is hooked. He needs to be careful and watching out. He does not want to be killed.- 29 comments
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They are melding together very nicely and learning mote about each other and their likes for females and males--But, no mention of Keanu or the young Anakin Skywaler--Hayden Christensen ? They are looking forward to more hot sex. Sky is keeping Brant chaste against his hopes.
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The bulwark is taking the lead in finding opposition to the High Herald. She brought her partner to the rebels to get the tonic that would free her from being controlled. She is taking Fenn back with her to assist her with another counselor and her partner,head of the place guard. Knowing the Herald caused the famine and made sure the pay of the guards was cut will help others oppose him Now, they need to be stealthy and win over more supporters. I hope the Herald stays clueless. Might Fenn have to step up to oppose the Herald , if he attacks them?
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Jason--I am very sorry to learn of your ankle injury and required surgery. You must be in a great deal of pain. I hope you are getting some therapy and pain medicine to help your health improve. I use a cane and know about leg and foot pains. Good Luck!
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Oh no--they are caught, Camilla is questioning them. She wants to know why they are in her glassworks. They she knows they both care for each other. They cannot tell her and give away their mission. So, she has Sam's mouth open ready to be put in the ash. Enough ash will kill him. The knight has to speak to save Sam Just as the ash is ready to be given to Sam, Rafe walks in and shows he knows Sam. Things are going to get messy.
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Isaiah and the gremlin are trapped in the alien space ship. They are held firmly and a superior power. This does not seem like they can be easily rescued. Are they being transported to the larger ship for questioning and maybe to be killled? What might give the superior power reason to free them?
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Wow--This is a mess with no apparent solution Is Jesse going to attack the vessel that has Isaiah and the gremlin and ignore Mickey? He must be trying to fulfill his contract. Jesse is going to take on a powerful enemy. Mickey is going to be disoriented when he returns and finds Isaiah missing. He will have ti improvise again? More information please.
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We were told the story of 12 year old Darien who was betrothed to a disguised Willian, not the intended Val. The three met later and Val said she wanted to be a knight and she knew Darien would be a knight. Their futures were set. Val and Darien stayed good friends from then on.
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Noah and Leo are fighting. Leo wants Noah to be candid about their relationship. But, Noah is afraid. Noah'[s parents do not think he might be gay. If they heard that, they might want him to leave this town for a career and a girl friend. He will not know their feelings unless he opens up. Right now, he is losing Leo.
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The Bulwark came to them and spoke of forgiveness and working together. She changed the mood and outlook of the group. She knew everyone was fooled by the Herald. She had a plan and gave Petre a copy so they could discuss and make suggestions for improvement. She has to get back to the palace, but they will meet again. Ain was very hopeful...."Ain was actually fairly excited for it. The thought of Lys-Akkaria and Orinovo being allies and working together had never crossed his mind as a possibility, but that was exactly where they were heading if this all went well."
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Trouble comes in sets--The first problem is this massive alien race with a strange language that seems to think Mickey and crew have invaded its planet. They hopefully can talk with each other and Mickey will not repeat the mistakes of the previous crew of his current ship. Can the gremlin help them out? The second problem if they survive is that a bounty hunter is after Isaiah because the Father wants him back. Why is he so important? He expected to be sent to the cliffs and die?
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The earthquakes might give Wylan some cover for his ignorance about his two new brothers. He can claim headaches, dizziness, etc before he can recover. The earthquakes might make the city less defendable. I hope the Turks do not flee and take Wylan with them.
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Their worlds' erupted at the wrong time. Major upheavals. Strange bright colors in the night sky. People will see bad omens. One earthquake after another at night. The damage cannot be really known till first light,I the crusader camp is ripped apart. But, Antioch could potentially suffer more. The walls could rupture and the city could be hard to defend. Ashot found walking through the city that starvation was common for the normal people. Ishan was reaching out to Wylan. They switched bodies. Wylan was in the city with Ishan two brothers. If they knew he was the blind boy, he would be killed. Darien knows Wylan has left and Ishan is with him. He is not angry. He wants them to find a way for them to switch back. Right now, neither boy knows what to do What a great mystery ! Danger abounds.
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What a wonderful, surprising Christmas story. Scott wanted to raise up a lighted Christmas tree in the free space without any permits in a day or two. He needed helpful friends, a tree, lights and some blow up figures and ,oh, power to turn on the lights. Scott wanted to please his gran and create a display that was common years ago. Scott was going to have to get around his boyfriend, Luke, a police officer who would arrest him for breaking the law when he set up an illegal Christmas tree Read on to learn about the twists and turns and how things eventually work out to create a welcoming, happy family holiday celebration. BTW, Gran is very pleased with the result. Scott and Luke cement their relationship.
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David is very happy with the film showing their sexual attraction and clearly emotional and realistic love making. He asked them to keep their romantic actions and sex for the film shoots. They agreed with him. Sky is very pleased. He senses Brant maybe interested in maintaining a romantic relationship Everything is happening under the intense pressure of filming a movie. I wonder how Brant and Sky with handle TMZ, intense paparazzi and others if they come out as partners, Will their movie roles change in negative ways or be dropped or focused narrowly in gay roles?
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Fenn is a mess and an addict. He cannot get away from his compulsions and fear of the Herald. Was his visit later discovered ? Will he be mentally able to make any return trip, if necessary, to replace and controlling tonics?
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Is this the time and incident--trip to Australia-that we can mark when their breakup took place? It does not have to be the definitive ending of their relationship. They are relatively young with so much ahead to learn. They may keep on learning about themselves and how they relate to others and might or might not feel better able to recommit later.
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What begins as a tale of a knight training his new squires in his templar keep grows to them facing a series of greater responsibilities and rank and difficult battles. An unpopular king dies and his son, a new young king , aided by a respected lord assumes the crown of a kingdom with two claimants. Prince Louis of France was welcomed as a better king against the then unpopular King John and holds London and has the support of many lords. Kaylen and his two squires will fight off many enemies at home and pledge their allegiance to the new Henry III. They listen to William Marshall, essentially the kings right hand man , and undertake important tasks to cement the king's control and over important territory. They carry out their duties effectively and honorably and earn the respect of the king and Marshall. Find out how the grow and become skilled fighters and ably serve the English crown
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A fitting ending and then a new beginning in greatly changed circumstances. Louis left humiliated and renounced all claims to England, Henry III named Kaylen Earl Wynthorpe of Lincoln. Ronan and Tomas were made officially his sons and heirs
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So, it all feels so good, so hopeful and so peaceful. They are content and not aware of anything troubling around But, they seem to have forgotten some thing or someone killed the previous crew of the ship They have made an impact with a fire and cooking with visual and sensory impacts. The ship , too, could register on any planetary system or hidden life forms. They could attract attention. They should be on the lookout for interest from something on the planet or from one of the moons. I hope they sleep on the ship and have the ship's sensor looking for any things that might be hostile or curious.
