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I have no doubt your creative talent and enthusiasm can make the story sing and can add wonderful, interesting nuance to the vampire paradigm
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Chapter 4: The Serpent’s Tongue
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Serpent’s Tongue
I re-read the story's intro material and Jason's connection to Marcus promises to be very chilling and eventually destructive--Merrick is totally evil " But Jason is being seduced by a conversion therapist—and the firm is photographing every secret." Can Peter, Jared and Will come to realize what is happening before this turns disastrous -
Chapter 4: The Serpent’s Tongue
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Serpent’s Tongue
Marcus is the serpent incarnate. He will report to Alistair Merrick and carefully poison a hurting, unsuspecting Jason. Merrick does not want to help Jason or anyone in his new family. He will use any info Marus gives him for his ulterior purposes. -
Employee of the Month, Part One of Three
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Employee of the Month, Part One of Three
Alex, 3 months on the job, was made Employee of the Month by the CEO. But he knows the sad reason--"He's pimping me out. My straight boss is literally using me as gay bait." I cannot wait to see how this plays out. -
Kendo knows how to play to the insecurities Travis faces and has found a special role as his drug supplier/pusher. He is telling Travis that what he is giving Travis is commonly used by other Hollywood actors so Travis should not be really concerned. So far Kendo is being gentle and seemingly joking and offering to keep things on the "down low." He appears to be thinking he can eventually win over Travis. He is mistakenly not worried about Will who is far away. I am going to be looking for what Kendo might do to draw Travis closer to him--especially when Travis is under more stress and needs more drug help or a person to talk things through. Kendo will certainly seek a way to lower the defenses Travis has set up.
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Google--Modafinil is used to help people who have narcolepsy, obstructive sleep apnea/hypopnea syndrome (OSAHS), or shift work sleep disorder (SWSD) to stay awake during the day. The drug made a huge difference in Travis and he was confident and acted in top form and won praise. He bought a bottle of the pills from Kendo. Travis is still being pursued from Kendo for a gay relationship. “Would you date guys if you didn’t have a girlfriend?” he asked coyly. “No,” I lied. “Besides, nothing would blow up my career worse than that, and the same goes for you.” “I’d risk it,” he said. “I know how to keep things on the down-low.”
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I am puzzled. The 300 year old predator gave in to a determined teenager. The vampire became the bottom and the teenager seemed to control him . The vampire has not yet sucked his blood This is so out of the way vampires and humans normally interact. Is this realistic?
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hmmm--Travis is going to be more like Robbie Robbie liked to be fisted--Will Kendo try to fist Travis ?
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Chapter 3: The Bondservant
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Bondservant
Alastair Merrick has plan for Andrew and Will. Robert Gable is in the dark about what Alastair expects , but he was told he wanted Andrew on his case. Is Andrew being set up to take a fall? This very mysterious. We will find out later. -
Azula has been carefully warned by Raith, “Gesi Ajai is a cunning man. Once he recognizes you as a thorn in his side, he’ll attack where you least expect it.”
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They finally speak openly how they have fallen for each other. Raith kissed Azula first and was overcome with the intense feeling of the kiss. Later, Azula kissed Raith and loved it. The both showed they felt strongly about each other. Will they continues wanting to be very close tomorrow ?
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Chapter 2: The Garden
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Garden
Domesticity with three of the boys playing on the floor. Hidden pressures are still there. Will is the glue -
The Peculiar Predicament of Maximilian Hawthorn
akascrubber reviewed Topher Lydon's story in Fiction
Max , a 11 year old brilliant student, runs the school in many ways. He terrorizes his teAcher and brings him to tears. He has one weakness, a theater student in his class, Gabriel, who he secretly watches him and finally tries to talk to him and he freezes. Max asks his mother for advice and she tells not t plan but just to be himself. It is going to be hard for Max . He struggles and Gab realizes what Max is doing and is not making easy for Max to get close to him. Fead on to find out what happens to Gab and Max. This is a delightful, encouraging tale-
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Max's mother gave him awesome, useful advice. "I'm saying you should stop trying to control everything and just let things happen. Let yourself feel. Let yourself be nervous. Let yourself be awkward. And most importantly, let yourself be honest."
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Max is floored. His world will never be the same. I bet it be fun watching him finding the tables turned Is his heart throb going to take control of Max ? We are going to enjoy this ride.
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Theodore knows the evil ones spent hundreds of years preparing to take over the lands. He was to die but did not. Now he wants to bring his pack back. His next step is to find the wisdom tree. How will jack and vince help?
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Chapter 1: The Covenant
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Covenant
"Tomorrow, he would meet Robert Gable. Tomorrow, the real work would begin." Andrew will start learning about Merrick holdings. This is what he wanted. One wrong move and he might lose his life, I bet. -
A scary beginning. Tanaka told him he was on his own spying on the firm. Andrew is up to the challenges and surprises, I bet. This will be a fascinating tale.
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Kendo is stepwise moving on to Travis. He is getting him onto drugs slowly and as Travis needs more help to handle the overbearing Julian he will need more drugs with Kendo encouraging him. Travis has him over for a meal but left when Travis asked him to leave. Travis will ask him over again, I am sure. Kendo is going to make sexual moves on Travis when he is more vulnerable--maybe when Julian really makes him upset or he has a fight with Will. Does Kendo want a sexual playmate? Does Kendo want to blackmail Travis for money? What is his real motive?
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marie was a successful beard for Travist\\ Will is designing new sex acts
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Will Wylan Know Ishan lives before he travels to France?
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Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: THE ART OF THE PRISON RIOT
45 minutes until they die in the event horizon Mickey needs a plan or a savior -
My Heart is With Harry.
akascrubber commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in My Heart is With Harry.
Two definitions Aled met his family and told them about his new life After an intensive session with Noah, Callum's ex, Aled realized Callum was falling for him Aled told him Harry had his heart All panful, but needed -
The Vanguard defeated the massive Egyptian reinforcements by surprising then a tacking at night. They were overconfident The touching part that effected the vanguard leadership was seeing Tam and Conor cut down brutally. Facing the cusader leadership, Darien turned down the title Prince of Galilee and said he and his forces will return to France. He listened to Wylan
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Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: THE ART OF BREAKING POINTS
Mickey would be up to causing a catastrophic riot. He will not hold back.
