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The unexpected meeting
akascrubber commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The unexpected meeting
what a mess! Noah finds out his grandmother lied to him. She had talked to his father and did not tell him.. He ran away very upset and borrowed his uncle's prized car. Noah drove too fast and crashed the car. Now he is unconscious in hospital and in his dreams meets his dad. He must have many questions for his dad--starting what happened to you.... I hope Noah is not going to die. -
Just two chapters to go ! The action will be fast and furious We will have to pay attention or miss important facts. We do want to find out with satisfaction knowing the assholes running this game suffer, please.
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Leaving his home of 22 years was heartbreaking for Sam. His parents were killed and he knew he could not stay. Joining the knight was a very big leap. He likes him and hopes he will have a better future as he is taught the skills he needs Sam is committed to his new path. He said over his parents' grave....“I’ll try my best.”
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I have to say it--Tyler envisions soon being part of a menage a trois with Taine and Charlie. Plus, Charlie now realizes he is likely gay. "I think it's ticking one of his dark fantasy boxes." Taine's voice was dry. "Rather annoyingly." Charlie processed this. "So he's not going to kill me?" Emotions are being expressed to the extreme. They are leaving for the church to try to resolve the confusion with the fused Lilith and Morgan.
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This total invasion of privacy without limits is even more reason to destroy this system and the people involved in running it.
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Fenn continues to be the pliant fool. The Herald hurts him for failing him.The bracelet now with sharp thorns hurts his wrist and he bleeds. The pain is not stopped as a warning to not fail him again. He does not even consider lashing out and hurting the Herald who has him completely controlled. Fenn accepts the pain since he failed the Herald, He continues to act like a submissive abused person. I expect he will be sent to find and kill Ain. Both expect the next time they meet, they will fight. Ain still cares for Fenn and could not kill him when he was tied up.
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I agree--The mask has come off .They know for sure that this is like the CW on meth. It is a money-making reality show. The fans want conflict and pain , not sex or pornography. This is not OnlyFans. The scale of the surveillance is unbelievable and suffocating large and comprehensive. The paradigm has shifted from being simple pawns to active, thinking, aware participants with new goals. Justin is read in by Ben. He is going to make sure the scenes are money makers. Tim sounds like he will have a spectacular revealing debate performance that will shock the viziers. They want to find and expose the director and others. But, can they really end this game? It is financially viable and the plan and infrastructure work well. It has a paying audience of voyeurs. Will it go underground and resurface when this cycle of students graduates?
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After a great Thanksgiving meal the two males took a long drive and placed their sleeping bags in a private spot and gloriously fucked twice, Both Gary and Jody were super excited and very happy The next morning, they woke up and Jody listened to Gary and counseled him. It turns out Jody evaluated Gary to be a super bottom who craved multiple partners in an extended session. He was a younger Jody Gary was advised to be open and careful and avoid bad situations where he could get into risky behaviors. Jody told Gary about his experiences. I think Gary was given solid, practical advice. They are going to see Carlos after lunch. I expect both Gary and Jody and Carlos will get a wonderful sexual workout.
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Now, it would be possible to understand and realize ---Go Fu..Yourself
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Fred checked Gabriel's picture out and the results came up super fast. So, the person who calls himself as Gabriel is at the top of the most wanted list. He must be judged highly dangerous. Fred understands Gabriel is around and Fred will be arriving in Hersey soon--maybe with others-to handle his seizure. Fred must think Gabriel will flee if alerted. He made up a story to distract Lonnie who has no arrest powers and is not as well trained as real Homeland Security people. Since Gabriel is an assassin, Fred will get to town soon to stop him and find out who is his target.
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Theo's mind has been over taken and he refuses to accept it. He thinks he is in his pack's lands and turned into his wolf form. He orders Vince and Jack to return to the human world. They refuse. Theo slashes Vince's chest with his wolf paw and runs away I hope Vince is not really hurt and that he and Jack can chase Theo, This is so unsettling. The three need to work together and are really lost now.
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Chloe said one of Charlie's girlfriends said he was short fused or cummed too quicky. I take from what happened between these two Charlies that they had no problems with premature ejaculation....It was not mentioned.
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Ain is asked to lead what would be a civil war while another country is being fought. His letter exposing the Herald's lies told many te whole yop leadership was corrupt. Ain said . "I will do whatever I can to protect people. To save as many lives as I can. If that means something as extreme as leading a war...so be it." This could get very messy and spiral out of control.
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Taking out the cucumber suggests that they share a large, impressive cock which excites the original Charlie as a new experience. He klikes what they did and wants a repeat performance. Better watch out new Charlie !.
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So the only ones in the romance novel in this who had sex were the two Charlies who seemed to have given each other handjobs--blowjobs--??? Taine is uneasy. Charlie wants to do it again. The spell has ended this morning. Now, what do they do? Will the witches give up with their love spell? Are Morgan and Lilith separated? Does Lynix need to talk with his sister and find out what she wants to happen?
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Tim has sold his sole, But, Ben knows he is Blue and will adjust, The GM has to know this, Only Justin is in the dark so far I would love to see Ben take off his shirt. Justin is now outed as gay so he can play with Ben at no cost to his reputation Ben and Tim alluded to the Hunger Games and Twilight movies This high school drama is beginning to look like a hellscape like on painted by Hieronymus Bosch I am still unable to see a way out for the pieces.
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Since Sean thinks Gabriel is part of Homeland Security, Sean might invite him along with his upcoming tour with the kids.
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Tom is not the shooter. Gabriel and Tom go way back and were on serious secret missions together. Tom rememberdd tge shooter ws tall. Gav briel let and a tall man--the shooter, tracked him out. Is this the kiler for the senator or Gabriel? Lonnie call an old friend in Homeland Scurity to assk him if he could identify a man from a photo. He sent the pic he took of Gabriel and was told he was a Homeland Security person. Lonnnie was relieved and told Sean who called Gabriel and asked him to attend a dinner this night withhim. Gabriel happily agreed. We, the game just got more complicated. Gabriel is trying to stop someone from killing the senator and himself. Now, Homeland Security is after him. Lonnie's friend lied to him. Gabriel has to be seen as dangerous and at the top of the most wanted list. Fred from Homeland Security will go after him and try to arrest or kill him, if necessary.
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It is good to find out that Winkler still wonderfully anticipates his lord and master's needs. George was promptly outfitted with a clean shirt and cravat They are a great pair. I am glad Lefevre is along to create wonderful meals George has accomplished staff to make is life easier so he can have great sex and still get his key missions carried out.
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It was perfect. They both were very thrilled and felt rewarded. Gary could not understand how exciting it was to fuck Jody until he did it. Jody was the talented bottom Gary needed. Then, when Jody fucked Gary , he now had the full glorious, sexual experience. Gary is going to need more time in bed with Jody. It will be a labor of love. Gary is going to treat his boyfriend to a very good time after Jody leaves.
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What a minefield and a naval officer always wants to avoid one Granger was thrust into a battle royale between Cardona and his wife. They clearly hate each other. He objected to her affair with the French attache, She brought up his sexual relations with a hussar and said he was fucking George--Gulp ! She has the duke's amorous letters with George and has copies At the request of Cardona George accompanying Cardona and his wife to see Cardon's father. It was not a pleasant meeting. The father chastized cardon's wife. She was sent to an old estate for the season. Cardona will let her have few servants and will prevent her from writing others. Cardona said if she does not reform, he will banish her to a convent. Might he see that, if necessary , she has a riding accident and dies should she really be dangerous. What an upsetting experience and it may linger and has the potential to explode if sexual charges are raised. I hope peace will prevail. George needs to make Daventry feel welcome and to bring him into court life with good introductions. He knows the French will try to impair his actions. I hope no threat to his life is made by the attache. Granger is told the attache will be sent away when Granger leaves. This trip is both very important and problematic for Granger. He needs to be careful and use his well-polished courtly and diplomatic skills
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Matt felt competent because he could navigate IKEA. When I go to IKEA I want to eat the Swedish meatball plate and take home a jar of lingenberry jam--.delicious Charlie was sending pics of his cock to Lilith and when they met she pulled his cock out of his trackies and held it. The group took charge and disrupted the ritual and the possession was broken But, suddenly new and unexpected happened. It felt wrong. Why? Did Lilith or another demon step in since their plans were stopped or holiday badly interrupted? Help!
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A Blade of the Brier
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in A Blade of the Brier
Slowly John is regaining his memories He now knows Karsa and he were lovers and this was forbidden by elves and humans, John expects to leave his cell and be killed. He doesnnot yet know what happened to Karsa. -
Let us hope the Herald is hoisted on his own petard. He was too clever by leaving the evidence behind thinking he could destroy it later. Ain and Petre have written proof that the Herald devised the attack on himself. How will they reveal the evidence in a believable way? Petre has special powers. Can he consider how the Herald might use his powers to control Fenn?
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Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
akascrubber commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Can we do it again
The ground is set for new beginnings. Martin reasonably wanted his son and boyfriend to really think about why they wanted to move in with him and the implications. I can see these three will be very compatible at this point. They do need to take with Marin's ex. His son will no longer be staying with her . I expect Martin will still not reveal all that is happening with him and not reveal his new wealth, etc. He should be careful to not lie on--only not tell the full story. He needs to be thinking how he will later tell his family The new job will give them a chance to see how their combined efforts work and also let them see how appealing and smooth running the hotel is.
