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Chapter 18: The Wrath of Karen pt 2
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: The Wrath of Karen pt 2
Karen must be over the top mad from the escape operation and her being stunned. She is directing the USS Texas to vaporize the USS Kodiac. Her ex-husband has ordered evasive maneuvers to avoid the expected proton torpedoes. Are they too close for the torpedoes to be effectively targeted? Is Karen Hollis too mad to be thinking effectively? Does Tweek or anyone have another defensive trick? -
Poor Will--He is wrecked physically and is blind. He needs glasses. His new captor has plans to use him and at least is not intending to kill him as was the intention of the late Sayf al-Din.
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Drink that coffee fast or it will get very cold.....
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Will ended being taken by Al-Maghrabi who shot and killed Sayf Willl blinded and bloodied is put in an armored SUV and is expected to be a pawn in Al-Maghrabi plans Andrew could not find a a way to take a shot Andrew is soon found by the Italian officer who intends to free him and Will. He is responding to Tanaka's request Al-Maghrabi does not know he is being followed by the Italian military team. Let's hope Capitano Enzo Mancini can find and extract Will before the enemy gets to its base.
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Theodore has lost his pack and through 55 chapters of challenges, evil forces, twists and turns he seeks to find his pack and help it regain its singularly important protective role. His two key companions are Jack, a clairvoyant, and Vince, his guardian. The three struggle to accept each other and face off against cruel hostile beings who want to stop them. Things facing them will only become slowly known and it is difficult for the three to know what to do. They are battle tested and need to stay united. Theodore is told he needs to mate with Jack and Vince and he is not ready to accept them to his bed. Read on to see them undertake major challenges to find the lost pack and save its critical role and themselves. You want them to succeed. Do they ? These three and other pack members you meet will be compelling and act earnestly and stay hopeful for a positive outcome. This is an enjoyable, very interesting story that has earned a high number of followers.
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Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
Tweek argued they are going to get their Captain back and probably seek to disable the USS Texas and its tractor beam and fly away cloaked Doc was excited to be part of this rescue mission."Finally," Doc rasped. "A suicide mission I can actually get behind. Let's go ruin our Captain’s ex-wife's day." -
The pack is settled at peace. Theo and the other two are going to look for more guardians . Skarg is in his wolf form and hunting on the nearby mountain. Thank you for writing an interesting, challenging story.
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So, follow through and slash their tires ! Punish the guys who are playing games.
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Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
BTW, do not forget the Zodiac has a stolen cloaking device that Captain Karen Hollis does not know about. -
These two thoroughly enjoyed themselves exploring each other's bodies, sensuously kissing and touching and feeling supreme pleasure. They found peace together.
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Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wrath of Karen pt 1
This is going to be insane and fun in a lunatic asylum way. I can see a madcap plan evolve. I bet there will be Texas crew members who will look the other way and help Hollis escape. The Texas can be sabotaged and left stranded as the Zodiac crew fly away and lose the Texas. -
Chapter 8: The Hyenas
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Hyenas
OMG--A gun ready to shoot Will--Sayf al-Din—the Sword of the Faith.- wants Will dead-But he wants it on TV for Western viewership--This is the wrong place and time to kill him Andrew does not now about Sayf al_Din's plans---He has his sniper rifle aimed at the gunman's head--Is he going to shoot the gunman? We have a standoff? Might the next chapter bring a resolution? -
As for Troy and Miles at their dinner some wise person suggested the aphorism " It is time to shi.... or get off the pot."
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Chapter 16: The Shore Leave Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Shore Leave Episode
BTW--have Hollis and Tweek consummated their marriage yet? If not, I hope they do it soon and often. -
BTW--just to be provocative about a possible future scenario----After their dinner, I hope that the sex they have after such a long time apart will be easy, familiar, mind blowing intense as they get in sync, supremely pleasurable for both and unable to be forgotten joyous orgasms I hope they really talk afterwards and decide on their next steps
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I think if Troy found out Owen was having an affair with another teacher, he would be crushed and look to Miles since he was here now. Owen needs to show Troy he loves him and wants more passionate sex. Knowing Troy is going to have dinner with Miles could make Owen try to be more romantic. But, we will see how the three act and think leading up to the dinner, Will Miles intend to maintain his non-romantic actions toward Troy or when they meet for a last time in VA Will Miles be more hands on and become more suggestive? Any indication when they meet for dinner that Troy is enjoying Miles hands play could cause Miles to do more to excite Troy.
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Good way to start out. Someone wanted to cause trouble. Jackson was given Noah's locker.--And so it begins on a rough patch....
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Even after having hot passionate sex with Owen. Troy is turned on by being near a half naked Miles and applying sun tanned lotion to his body. They later are going to have a real dinner date without Owen. Will Troy fantasize about Miles in the meantime? Will Owen push Troy away by being too insecure? Might Troy be open to be slowly become more intimate with Miles who is leaving and this will be his last chance to find out what he is missing? Or will Troy stay friendly but proper?
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Chapter 16: The Shore Leave Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Shore Leave Episode
They transported to this planet to have a needed break. The high point was that Hollis and Tweek got drunk and officilly married. After they woke up, they decided to get married again when thy were not drunk. Flip told Tweek...."You balance his cynicism with your optimism. It is a highly efficient symbiosis." Meanwhile, Guy kept winning at the casino. He gained too much attention. So far, he was surviving, though. He might bring his prizes back to the ship. -
Chapter 7: The Bounty
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Bounty
Things are going to happen fast and Will and Andrew are at great risk Tanaka called in his best option. The Italian military in Libya was asked for a quiet hand help. I expect we will hear soon if Will and Andrew will learn of a new safe place. -
Didn't Know You'd Be Here
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Didn't Know You'd Be Here
Two boys finally fulfilled their high school sexual fantasy. Dreams can come true Love the proposed new storied -
Kendo may need some very strong "encouragement" to leave and stay away. Jake and Brad have the dirt on Kendo's drugging younger actors. His sordid past could be leaked making him unemployable in Hollywood.
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An emasculated Renn ended up with a slave trader who ordered him to completely strip. Renn lack of his cock and balls was revealed. The slave trader saw Rennn as the right object for a client. "An Afamatian nobleman has been looking for a pet just like you." Rennnn's life will be very downgraded and hopeless as a subservient sexual slave.
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it was very enlightening to actually the luau came together. I attended a tourist version when I stayed on the Big Island. The ending with the overall good feelings and dancing was very heartwarming. Daniel spoke of his feelings for Julian and Julian told him his heart belonged to Sam. I think Julian has to be gentle with Daniel going onwards.
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Brad and Jake got their points across to the key production people. Kendo will be written out of the show. Travis' antagonistic show father will turn off his attitude outside the actual filming. It looks like the absence of Travis will be explained by saying he went into rehab. The painful withdrawal Travis experienced was described in painful, graphic detail. He suffered. Will stayed with him as he was abuse verbally by a sickened Travis. Only as Travis seemed to come back to a normal status free of dependency did Travis begin to appreciate Will. Travis still has a long way to go. Will is going to keep om supporting and his turnaround
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