Another excellent one. I don’t know a lot about Aspergers, but I do know there is quite a wide range of levels. I suspect Corey is on the high end of functionality. Not completely socially inept, but needs to work at it. Nate is on a different spectrum, anger and pissed off at his situation. Corey will be a leveling influence.
Regarding Max, Jess will set him straight and he’ll tow the line because he wants to keep his balls.
Wow! Emotionally packed. Had to work hard to keep the tears at bay. Excellent job. Can’t wait to read more. Fortunately, I won’t have to. For a few chapters anyway.
Seems to me the best stories are the ones that pretty much write themselves. I’ve never used an outline. I start with the general idea and let the characters do what they want to do.
Our personalities leak in and hopefully, the end result of that combination is entertaining.
As always, your feedback is great. I’m glad you feel they were well written. Maybe I am getting better at this as I go along. I’ll give some credit to my Beta Reader, @Sherye Story Reader keeps me on track, finding my mistakes.
I appreciate the feedback. I have a somewhat off-center sense of humor. Fortunately, it still provides humor to others. Personally, I think 'Well, Well, Well' is funnier, but maybe that's just me.
Thanks. I'm happy when my readers are satisfied. When I started writing last March, I wasn't sure how good my stories would be. Now, a little over a year and a half and thirty stories later (including nifty), I'm still going strong! Without feedback from readers like you, I would have given up long ago.
A little googling, but, yeah, I wanted that part to be true-to life. All my characters are real to me. I'm always thinking what else I can do as a sequel.