Lee Wilson

I guess I was one of the confused ones, but I didn’t give up because I wanted to know how it turned out. Even now, I can’t tell whether Tyler was a man or a boy. If they found remains of two children in the ashes, it would make sense everyone thinking Nicholas had died in a fire. But if Tyler was chasing Nico through the woods, there was only one child’s body. There would have been articles about a missing Nico in the safe deposit box too. Tyler being a boy would make some sense at the time when Austin “remembered” seeing Reyansh with him. So, it feels incomplete to me. Like Austin never really found out the truth. Also, Reyansh seems to be quite a bit older than Austin, having a job vs. Austin still being in school (college?) It left me wanting more, but not in the sense of: It’s so good I want more of it.

When an idea comes, I will.

St first I thought ‘those two’ was going to refer to Brendan and Rich. Then I saw it wasn’t.

It’s possible to devolve from worthless lumps of humanity?

This is a wonderful story about two people coming together under somewhat unusual circumstances and making the best of it. Jay, or Jason, is confused about his sexual identity, but fortunately finds two people who help him in ways he never realized he needed.

Like Mancunian and Bill W, I don't know a lot about gender dysphoria, even though I wrote a story with that as a major plot point. I can understand how and why people feel that way, though. Just being bisexual is confusing enough for me, genderfluidity would send me running to my psychiatrist. Depression is enough to deal with. Regardless, it was a wonderful story about two people coming together under somewhat unusual circumstances and making the best of it. I was confused by Thirdly's comment on reading about Jay again. Does he appear in more of your stories?

Like this?

Had to balance the number of good players and bad players. The initial epilog tipped the scales over to good by Rich marrying his girlfriend Theresa, who had volunteered to be an ear for Jill.

Thanks much.

Make that chapter 8

Well I’ll be a monkey’s uncle. Thanks. Why did I know a Timmy and Lassie gif would show up sometime?

I have some liquor, a couple bottles of beer. Good enough?

And we’re all glad you couldn’t.

Like was said in chapter 5, she turned into a nympho. That kind of satisfaction solves everything for her.

I've read chapter 8. You didn't take it as far as we all feared.

Okay, I'm caught up now, you can post chapter 9 😁 Another wonderful chapter. I hope, like the rest of your readers, that we don't have to wait another 526 days for the next one.

I'd be honored to help you out if you wish. This is an amazing story. I'm a year and half or so late to the party but seeing the most recent chapter being posted drew me in, and now, like Ty, I can't let go.

The snake is a garter snake. It can't swallow too much, and won't even get too much to swallow.

Oops. I think need an update to chapter 9.

Thanks, and you're welcome. Brightening someone's day is always a good thing. These comments are working on doing just that for me.

It bears repeating, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Glad it made you laugh.

Oh, just wait until her revenge on Sunday. I think they both qualify as shits, tbh. Asking Abel was a way to instill yet a little more drama. Like this story needed it, hehe. Yes, Rich is the good sibling.

Thanks. Sorry for the blowup, the story sounded interesting, and it is. I haven't caught up yet, so prepare for more!!