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I love the idea! 😁 Btw, here it is, The Fallen Madonna with the Big Boobies (although I would very much like to see some of Donald Mitchell pictures 😉).
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Good that Dan and Vaughan are on the same page regarding the possible threesome with charming Ercole. As long as it is fun, it is ok ... but, I hope they will escape any tricky business involving this mysterious family and infamous Mr. H. Big breast women pictures - reminds me of British sitcom 'Allo' Allo! and valuable painting from the town's chateau – The Fallen Madonna by fictional artist van Klomp (it is usually referred to as "The Fallen Madonna with the Big Boobies").
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Aww, one big happy family. Working action with sleepovers at Andre and Chris's...beautiful. It's like adventurous camping for teenager but might be a little bit overwhelming for A&C. Well, they got office painted so, a little sacrifice of their privacy is (mostly enjoyable) 'price' to pay. Off course, they are going to need a good, spa, relaxing (and smut 😉) holiday after this action!
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Oh yes, regrets ... I'm deeply touched by this chapter, maybe the most heartbreaking chapter till now. That's why I left 'sad' reaction, because that's how I feel after reading it. I know I'm repeating myself but, I really think that, if we cannot change the past, we should, at least try to fix the future. Please @Ronyx, give Phil a chance! 🙂
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No, not burn...just grill a little bit!
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This chapter is still part of an overture. Tension is slowly built, and author deliberately keeps us in dark. In this way, @Mikiesboy magnificently put us in Matt's shoes - wondering, where is this (he) going! There are even not enough hints for a good speculation! 😉 Guys, the truth is @Mikiesboy has hidden the clues so well that we know nothing! So, what to do in a meantime - korner's favorite hobby, burn @kboisfor murdering Kage! 😜
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Amazing chapter! Brings out the importance of communication! Once they start talking (Bart's wise advice certainly helped) they showed how mature, grown-up people should communicate. Keith brings up the facts, what he saw, what bothers him, without drama and jalouse outbursts! On the other hand, Thomas is honest, doesn't pretend like 'it was nothing' or 'it was not what you have seen'...and similar BS! He says - yes, it was longer kiss than it should be; yes, he is my ex; yes, he would like something more but no, nothing happened! Seems like a small thing but this is a big step for the guys and their relationship!
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For me, this is 'women's chapter'! It's Lasma and Alise's chapter! These ladies are amazing, true leaders. Theay are wise and brave, determined to save their people. Alise is already looking into the future, she is planning, not just surviving, but progress and strengthening of their clan. Reforms will prepare them to defend themselves and make them respectable force in empire! So, gooooo ladies!!!! Azula has the position he never wanted but, people respect him, and he has leadership qualities he is not aware of. With wise advice from his mother and sister he is going to lead clan into the bright future. But, although Azula might think the opposite, he and Sura Clan are not alone. Raith, with guilty conscience, is becoming their protector. He has secretly taken over the port city which is the Sura Clan connection with the world. What is going to happen? Evil minds in empire are not sleeping and seems that Sura Clan and Azula's role in this (political) war is not over!
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YES, thank you @Danilo Syrtis... thank you, thank you!!!! I've been thinking it's my limited knowledge of English in combination with brain slowing down! 🤪
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Everything Comes Together
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Everything Comes Together
The blondie girl?!? Politics is not allowed in comments, so, I don't know how much to say not to be banned... Well, @Summerabbacat, I agree with you, I could have easily died in ignorance. The only 'strange' lady from US I've heard of till know is Miss Alaska 2006-2009! Anyhow, it's good to know that we, in the 'black hole of Europe' are not the only one who breed bizarre politicians! 🤪 -
Everything Comes Together
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Everything Comes Together
Not the most romantic proposal I've ever seen but, with some alcohol...it went well. 🙂 We could argue about some inconsistences in the story but, I have learnt till now that @Lee Wilson is the most unconventional author at GA. His writing is fun and all these, sometimes bizarre, twists and turns; strange medical conditions and cures; legal solutions; relationships etc... are part of his world. When I stuck with something 'strange' in Lee's story, I remember his words - guys, this is fiction! So, let's all enjoy the happy ending - don't forget, it' Lee, he could easily kill them all in a sudden mafia attack!- 58 comments
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Party time at the Villa Torronia
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Party time at the Villa Torronia
Art smugglers family...hm, could it be? Well, If the young master of the house has mission to seduce Dan and Vaughan...and, maybe use them as carriers of some art to London?! Ulysses might be very foxy (I had to check on web cause I'm familiar with Greek name Odysseus) and dangerous ... What did our boys get into?? -
OMG, family drama, live at GA!!! Let me get a popcorn and please continue...
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OMG, what just happened here?! Alex is a mess; I don't even have words for his excuse anymore! Emotions they buried deep inside themselves, manifest in a completely wrong way at both boys, which leads to wrong impressions and wrong conclusions. If we add alcohol, there is disaster at the door!
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One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
One parent full of shit - seems to be dead! The other one, still on probation with me so...let's see! -
One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
Absolutely agree!!! No other words to comment disgusting sex with two years old!!!- 34 comments
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Andrew makes me wonder, how far are authors ready to go in research to get information?! 🤔 Matt is on a highway to hell... Where this highway ends - in Russia? Another @kbois influence, she had one dangerous lion hiding there... Still early to make assumptions but question arises - is Matt going to escape before or after getting very hurt?
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Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
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Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
If you deliberately harm yourself, over and over again, it sounds a bit masochistic... Well, stupid for sure. What is he thinking, he'll make him weaker over time...?!? 🤪 -
Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Oh, you again...with those names... 😂 @weinerdog, he did it again!- 42 comments
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Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
Well, the following chapter title says everything - One Parent Full of Shit. Ok, Rocky is under stress with all memories back and I can understand his violent behavior. Not that I approve, but I can understand. What I don't understand are Bass's masochistic attempts to confront Rocky over and over again. Is he stupid or what? -
THANK YOU, Mr. Google - now I know what Tim Tam is!!! All the time I've been thinking it's snacks like chips! 😜
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