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  1. The guys are starting to get to know each other better. They are playing house and it's really cozy. At one point, things will get out and it is not going to be easy for both of them but, until then, their dynamic is quite charming to read. I've been thinking about Colin's family. They might be shocked when they find out about Colin being gay, maybe even outraged, fearing for their reputation as good, traditional suburban family... 🤮 Eventually, they need him, they depend on him...so, once that farce will be finished, they'll come back (probably needing something...).
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    Chapter 1

    So, Bruce Willis is the father of the Claude (Jean Claude Van Damme - not so bad name after all 😁 )! 😂 Interesting start, who might be the murderer - bodyguard (maybe to obvious), jealous mother, father removing evidence of affair to avoid scandal, or somebody we haven't meet yet?!
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    Colin 3

    Owain has been already prepared to go to Colin's house at the end of the previous chapter, so, I think this is going to be You had me at hello moment!
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    Chapter 15

    Because it's how it usually goes in your stories - you either mate him or kill him!
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    Chapter 15

    Hint of a new story?! 🤔
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    Chapter 15

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    Chapter 15

    There is this old wisdom about @kbois stories - Something will happen in next chapter, unless something else happen, or maybe it won't happen at all... 😂
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    Chapter 15

    @kbois how nice of you bringing Luke back! 🙂 He really helped Caleb in his darkest hour so, he deserved at least guest star appearance. I hope guys will meet Robert in Germany. Robert has met the Sentinels in Spirit W , he was so angry to hear about hybrids and was eager to help Sebastian and Co. He might be helpful to healers too!
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    Chapter 15

    This was sooooo hoooot sex scene, it was worth of waiting!!!
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    Colin 3

    What?! Nooooo my friend, this is not chapter, this is cheating! 😜 Ok, but I expect your redemption with next one!!! 🙂 Back to the "chapter" - are the flowers really going to be enough?! Owen is going to need something more, if not mature guy by his side, than at least not to be offended in his own house by the guys he is paying to do the job!
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    Chapter 1

    Really nice start, you hooked me immediately with amazing characters you introduced us. Boys are already getting much needed help and attention, but it is going to be interesting to explore all the circumstances that leaded to their homelessness. Specially because story is situated in Britain - as I am learning from these stories, it is much easier to be left on the streets in USA than Europe.
  12. Good start, I'm interested in development of the story. I'm wondering, how did Beau know that he will not get punched when asking for a bj? It was not clear that guy showed that he is interested in Beau more than to solve car repair. Btw, goood advice, Beau might have multiple benefits out of this friendship! 😜 *What is the name of the protagonist? It's difficult to address him that guy all the time. 🙂
  13. There's been fast transition from professional to nonprofessional! 😁 I would like to read more dialogs between those two, but ok, it's up to author... Not sure unexpected visit would go well. Colin is still very much in closet, it is going to need some time to accept being in relationship at first, and then to share it with family and world. It is going to be difficult hiding around workers, especially Jimmie. This guy likes to stick his nose in other people's business, if he finds out it will be like telling on BBC News!
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    Chapter 14

    Stay healthy! I've been sick last week with flu and fever. I felt worse than with corona, still not 100% in shape! 🤧
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    Chapter 28

    Seth is in desperate need of LOVE! How is it possible that these parents are so blind to see, so oblivious to the feelings of their son?! He so desperately needs to hear word love from his parents, to be embraced by them...just hugged. Now I understand why the one boyfriend is not enough! He needs them all to show him that he is loved, needed, wanted; but also, to selflessly share and respond to affection with whole his heart! Poor Seth! 💔
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    Chapter 14

    14?!?
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    Chapter 28

    Although things are coming slowly to its place, seams that biggest chaos is still in Seth's head. He is missing a solid rock to rely on as both of his parents are quite unreliable. Craig pointed out that even Seth hasn't been good in communication, didn't give any hint to his mother that he feels neglected. But aren't the parents those who have to take care of their children, monitor their behavior, ask questions even if everything looks fine at the surface?! Both mother and father failed in their parenting role, mother feeling guilty regarding Stacy, and father who has started a new life with new family and not much taking care of his other two children. No wonder Seth is feeling lost... But even in this situation, Seth shows exceptional maturity refusing to go to live with aunt, aware that living with Blake would not be appropriate. Right now, the brightest point of Seth's life is his relationship with other boys. Although unusual, their connection is strong, full of passion, love and support. He feels it and it helps him overcome the chaos he is in.
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    Russ

    That was a hot meeting! Hope that Brian and Gordon will be able to have this entertainment and business combination balanced as good as possible. Fun and sex are great but I'm not so sure about Russ's motives! He seems like manipulative and potentially dangerous man. He might want to involve them in something which might jeopardize their relationship and even endanger Brian's custody over Toby.
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    Chapter 14

    Yea, that feeling - when you expect nothing, then you get...something! 🤪
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    Chapter 14

    I've put your exact words in that image creator @raven1 has recommended. Results are above... So, @kbois has this AI got it?
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    Chapter 14

    And first at 6
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    Chapter 14

    Thanx mom! 👶😂
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    Colin 2

    What I miss is a real interaction between the guys! They've become rather close till now, considering they both know they are gay, and some personal family issues. But all we know is from their thoughts, nothing from personal encounter so the relationship seems developing faster than maybe expected.
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    Colin 2

    Obviously, it's not only cliff that hangs! 😂
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    Chapter 14

    Oh, excuse me...after so descriptive description my guy applies as any! Wait a sec... Is that word average I see?!? And @Mrsgnomie gave authorisation to use average people?! 😱
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