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Everything posted by Cane23
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Wow, this has been really unexpected end of the chapter! Everything went smoothly and nicely. I've been thinking how nice it is that Owain and Mhairi reached such level of confidence that they can speak about boyfriend who is still in closet. It is difficult to change all the perspectives and believes you've been taught for years. Mhairi is changing but it takes some time. I'm sure she wants the best for her son but love and parenting is also about compromises and support. We can also see that she has her own view of the events of the past. Owain has been thrown away from the house as being gay was unacceptable for the parents but, from Mihairi's POV, it might have been looked like he was the one that got away, and she had to stay with fundamentalists. I believe that she will come around eventually, healing the wounds from the past is not fast process.
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I have a feeling that nurse Judy has overreacted a little bit at the beginning. Luckily, she saw that herself and calmed the upset boy. I don't know what she saw in Michael's eyes, was it lust, ogling...but he didn't flirt or show any kind of disrespect. He didn't pass the borders of unacceptable, so, Judy's lecture might wait. I'm impressed by the medical students, very professional for young people. I've been patient in hospital examined by students, and I know how embarrassing it can be. One thing...did he put urine bottle on the table...and nurse didn't complain?!
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This amazing story is great mix of crime drama, mystery, triller, Cosa nostra tale, with romantic and passionate love story. Author is building this story slowly, starting with charming and rather cozy encounter and relationship growing between Paul, a local firefighter, and Corbin, mysterious new neighbor; settled in rural Idaho. Story ends with such turns and twists that reader stays breathless. @Wayne Gray intelligently leaves tracks all around the story that you wonder at the end - how did I miss that?! I've been tempted to peek at the last chapter a few times during the reading and I'm glad I didn't. It would have been sad to spoil such a wonderful journey.
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I totally agree with @Summerabbacat, it appears that Russ is more complex person than it seemed at first appearance. Yes, he is a lonely guy married to his job, but he is not shallow, and money obsessed. He is also taking care of society, ecology and other social issues. Ok, he likes sex and wants to have fun with Gordon and Brian, so @Robert Hugill in this hot sexual world of yours, double penetration is going to be exciting, both to participants and readers! 😜 What Russ needs the most is love, and I hope that you will find a nice match for him, then, they could have a happy foursome with Gordon and Brian! 😁
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Actually, I've been wrong - he is a bodyguard - literally! 😂
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ahahahhahah, sure, with weapon out! 😂
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I wasn't very pleased with the end of the previous chapter but, knowing Vincent's history now, some things have more sense. Nevertheless, I'm not very fond of Vincent, he is quite manipulative, planning to match his son and Claude when he should take care of Claude's safety. There's been a murder in the house, his lover has been killed and he is going to bed with boys, thinking with dick instead worrying about their safety. He is not professional at all; he is a playboy acting to be a bodyguard. Not to mention that he got out with police easier than he should. Ok, murders are probably connected but Vincent was last at the murder scene with his fingerprints and DNA all around, he should be at list a little bit suspected...
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I'm confused, third time they see each other, they have sex, they decide not to have sex anymore (but occasional kissing and showering is ok), they say they love each other, they say they are BFF (Really?!? Since when?!) and now girlfriend has been introduced and Chris almost become best men!!! 🤪
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It's too early for love, they have only exchanged a few words...and a passionate kiss! 😜 Thay have to get to know each other better, spend some time together, talk...and then love might occur, and even if it doesn't, they can have some fun. Not that Charlie is looking for a husband!
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Of course, it isn't! No matter problems he is confronting right now, he is healthy, horny teenager with raging hormones! Brad is exactly what he needs. Who knows with those curious boys, Charlie might also experiment with Jason and Danny...
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Reading all the comments about Colin's family, I can imagine situation the first time Colin says no... They will probably say those infamous words - What's going on with you Colin, you don't look like yourself?! You've changed!!! 🤪 Even if they accept him as gay, doesn't mean they are going to give up using him whenever they have some needs because - Oh, but living with a man doesn't mean you have a family of your own! 🤮
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True, six hundred years old Neuschwanstein in Baden-Württemberg! 😜
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Well, if we are putting orders now, I would like some epilogue for Stuff People Do. I've always imagined scene where Matt is giving a lecture in California, and together with Trent have unexpected reunion with Ricky and his husband.
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No, no issues except they, somehow, appeared in Bavaria instead of Baden-Württemberg! 😜
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Nope, this is not a six-hundred year old castle! This is king Ludvig's of Bavaria Fary tail dream.
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Poor boys, there is some poetic justice in fact that orphans are going to be healed first. They might really go back to USA with Corbin or Asa and Caleb if Peter doesn't keep brothers or Marcel in Germany. Those lousy parents might order Marsel coming back when he is cured but I believe he will not go back now he knows what a real parenting love looks like. I think their future is in Texas but via Montana, to be spoiled a little bit by moms. The boys and Vann are going to be great friends, maybe something more but I don't want to speculate and risk being disciplined by @kbois. 😁
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Faster than a...ah, what was the sentence from Dichotomy...Perry grabbing Kyan's dick...or something similar... 😂 I'm going back to read the chapter...
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A short chapter again, but quite informative. So, Colin is happy, and his mother can't even share his happiness, as long as he is not happy slavering for his family! Owain and Colin are so similar, they are great together and Colin can see how their future might look like. Jimmie has been put to his place and Bruno appaired as new, interesting character, maybe gay too. So, waiting for the future development, hope you will reword us with longer chapter next! 🙂
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A Bridge To Yesterday is the best sequel ever written on GA! I have even put in Review how important this sequel is - because it gives us hope for a second chance! I really enjoy how is @Ronyx playing with his characters, exploring different situations because in one story, the character stays miserable his whole life due to bad choices, while in other (Gene in Bridge) he's got a second chance to repair his life. I'm not sure Seth needs a sequel, more like an epilogue, or sequence of life a few years forward (I would like the same for Bridge).
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@Ronyx brings this unique story about Seth, his road through chaos, to happiness, love and acceptance he was looking for. Seth lives with his mother and sister, feeling estranged, neglected and not loved. Although a good student, being a gay increase his insecurities. A horny teenage boy, shaken by hormones and emotions he is in a search for love and sex. Who is going to be the right guy? Sister’s boyfriend Craig, a muscular football jock; or Blake, boy molested by homophobic parents; or it is Ty, Seth’s best friend?! You might be surprised by the outcomes as @Ronyx has made reading this story a real roller-coaster ride.
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Jeff?! The shy, quiet guy?! I'm shocked! 😱 Oh son, I've missed you so much...but not dinner for you!!!!???? What happened to that nice, good neighbor, when did he became dictator with bunch of bullshit?! Why did he take him anyway, as revenge to his ex-wife? Well, I really thought father might be solution for Seth's problems. So, he is, but not the way I've been thinking. Seth leaving to his father has made mother think about it, think of losing him so she came to some sense finally! As for the father, I miss the closure here. Seth left quietly his father house with dignity but, there are some things that need to be said. Seth needs to tell him f*ck you, and everything else he keeps in his soul. Finally, a beautiful end to this story. Everything came to the right place, after all the chaos, Seth and boys deserves all the happiness they've got.
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This has been my impression too. An example how parenting should be done. I've been enjoying nudity in this story, more as voyeurism than something I would do but, as the story progress, I find it really liberating and good for building self-confidence.
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Waiting for the final chapter, I've crossed this one with comments again... This comment is so true, it reminds me of those preachers who are preaching about suffering on this world to gain eternal happiness in the heaven! My God...really?!? Dear Seth, suffer for two more years and then you can leave the home... Some advice!!!
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Yes, but one of the most beautiful too! I can swear that those are some of the best sentences @kbois has ever written!
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I expand my English knowledge with every new chapter you post! 🙂 I like British English; it reminds me on my summer English course in London sometime in nineties... I've been riding by bus in London. One lady was sitting and asked me at one moment to pull the cord! I've been looking at her confused, not knowing what the cord is. She stood up furiously because she has missed the bus stop, and it was latter on that I've been explained what the cord is! I came to England knowing only for the rope! 😁
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