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Amazing chapter @Paladin! I really thought there is some cheating melodrama behind Stingray Heads story! This is so much serious!
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I think there are clues and signs all over the chapter. Since the Noah's outburst at the door and boys' reaction to that, all the comments, and 'small' events (18 y.o. boy rather intimately cuddling with his father (!?!?), 'fighting' for the front seat in the car ...) ... leaded to 💥 The evening was just a long-time postponed culmination. Anyway, I'm sure you'll give us some origins in your famous flashbacks! 😁
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Amazing start of a new story @CasualWanderer82! Wild, hot, intriguing, kinky... As always in your stories, you give us riddles challenging our mind! You are playing Man Up game with your readers! 😉 Two boys in desperate fight for their (step)father's attention. And more than attention, they are in fight for his love, his body... Ryan is missing a father figure. He things he is strong enough to challenge Nate while making Caleb, who wants his father all for himself, jealous. So, Nate starts a game. But what is the goal of the game? Is it a punishment or a lesson? What starts as a gentle hug, ends up in a raw, merciless sex. Is Nate's domination, Ryan's submission and Caleb's humiliation going to Man them up or is it going to break them in thousand pieces?
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How on earth did Carter hit Dexter so hard that he became cyborg?! 🤪 It's time for Carter to end this monster who killed half of his family! -
Two very powerful and rich men. Men that influence lives of many. One is a member of wealthy aristocracy; the other one is the Godfather of the mafia. Both men, with all the money and connections they have, must save their own grandchildren from their own family and ask a refuge from strangers! Money and influence cannot by all, obviously!
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There's some immatureness with Blair and Calvin. As much as I respect their parents' decision to support their gay son, still, I think that funeral in rural North Carolina was nether the place nor the time to make such a statement what Calvin did. Not because he should hide who he is but because it is easy to be hero for few hours and then leave to the safety of New York. What about those who stayed? Calvin didn't think about safety of his family, possible bulling and judgment of the neighbors... Unfortunately, it was his uncle who turned out to be the biggest bigot (although, I have a feeling there is something more behind this separation).
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https://gayauthors.org/story/jjquinn/halos-and-heroes/ is great story from a great author!
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There is not much good to see in Rebecca. She's despicable - awful mother, wife, sister...awful woman generally... But that is not the end of it! I think she is dangerous! Now that I think about it, John might be submitted to his wife, but it is also possible that he stayed with her so she could leave the others alone! (this is me trying to find 'something good' in John 😁)
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If I understand well this family relations - Rebecca and Melissa are sisters and Peter is their father. John is Peter's son in law and Melissa's brother-in-law. Nevertheless, you are right about motives. As younger daughter Rebecca always assumed her older sister is the main heiress. Therefore, she manipulated and married John (even knowing he is a gay) because of his wealth. We can only imagine Rebecca's anger when she realized her sister is disowned by their father as lesbian. That means Rebecca married John for nothing (as she became the main heiress anyway). Well, now that Peter has second thoughts, seems that Rebecca's dirty plan was not all for nothing (at least from her pov).
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(PART 1) PROLOGUE: PRESENT DAY, NEW YORK
Cane23 commented on LJCC's story chapter in (PART 1) PROLOGUE: PRESENT DAY, NEW YORK
I like it. Is this the start of the story or just announcement?! And please, PLEASE do the backup! I'm still crying for Mr & Mister Danvers Book2! -
Another very emotional chapter. Two scenes have brought me to tears again- reunion of the White family and Oliver salute to the marines. In one word - beautiful! It seems to me that decisions they made in this chapter, determined the lives some of the guys - Juan and Daniel in embrace; and Jon back in the closet (or golden cage) with his wife. I have to agree with others that Rebecca is even worse than I thought. She knows about John's past, and she did everything to manipulate him and dominate him. There is something insane in her attitude, need for domination (she's the man). I could see her as guard of woman barracks in concentration camp, during this dark part of human history!
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Yes, I think all this scene in Las Vegas is Godfather's fulfilling his part of the deal with Roger. Roger's part of the deal is to take twins, so they are not in Vegas as they are soon to become Cicero.
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Amazing chapter, so many new things happening in Jonah's life. I like the bond that is arising between Jonah and Monty - triplets are generally great but Monty seems to be the most mature one. What separated brothers - Jonah's father and uncle Nolan. Could it be that Uncle Nolan has a gay son?!? Or is it something much deeper? Are there some family secrets here? As for the Jonah himself - he'll have to handle his guilt if he wants to stay sane. He'll need help, he'll need to talk about it with someone.
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Michael is meeting some new people, building a new life and 'alternate' family. Past is coming in flashbacks as a reminder what he lost and why he should change! Only new, redeemed Michael can go back and look for his children.
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What a chapter - scenes are changing fast giving us more and more new information regarding the characters and their lives. Bulling at school, Neil's suicidal thoughts, Lucas's dysfunctional family, the gossiping...altogether with flashback and reveal of Nei's father being a gay! The bright thing is that, even Neil is not aware of that, he has big support in his mother and uncle. They shouldn't wait too long to speak with him because Neil is on the edge.
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I guess it's all setup. Some sort of digital and AI hologram technology. Jeremy has enough money to purchase something like that. I'm still confused why did Jeremy change his mind at a first place...married Carter and accepted his father? Nothing insinuated such change!
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So, the monster 'loved' only her child conceived with lover (Kai - wherever he might be now) ...all the other children, poor boy, Jett - are collateral damage, meant to be sacrificed if necessary! Isn't it ironic how Jeremy's infamous theory of 'inherited poisoned blood' sounds now! But this is not over yet, let's not forget Dexter is still free!
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Is it because he is going to live in another state that law is so rigid about it?! Seems that Jonah's aunt and her family are more acceptable and liberal than Jonah's birth parents... Very interesting start...I'm eagerly waiting the following chapter!
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I like how supportive management of this company is! On some other place, they would do anything to get rid of gay employee!
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Jordan should bring his past in front of Cameron, before the past decides to show itself in a most inappropriate moment!
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A small world they say...David is working in Michael's ex company! It's exhausting job and Michael might eventually help with it... It seems they are nicely synchronized but there is no running from the past. It will come out sooner or later, hope David is going to be supportive, not judgmental once when Michael opens up. I also hope Michael parents is never going to find him. They are so possessive and toxic, they might plot around again and ruin all the progress Michael is trying to make with his own life!
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I like this chapter because it shows Ludo and Arthur are humans! Nobody can stay immune to so much stress. Even without Jackie, police and medias...living together and adapting to different family dynamics is very hard and it can break a man, let alone relationships. Taking all this in account, the guys are doing great!!!
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Chapter 26: Carter's life is in danger. Will Jeremy save him?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 26: Carter's life is in danger. Will Jeremy save him?
Because, no matter what you say, you afraid your readers will haunt you!!! 👻 -
Chapter 26: Carter's life is in danger. Will Jeremy save him?
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 26: Carter's life is in danger. Will Jeremy save him?
I strongly believe that Jeremy has survived. I wouldn't be surprised that it is plot between Carter and Jeremy (maybe even Jett and Eric) to get truth out of Laura! As for the Laura, she certainly doesn't know Jeremy is alive (if he is). She'll end up completely insane in mental institution, eaten by guilt and evil! -
Survived 'Orthodox' Christmas unlike many poor pigs that ended as pork chops for holiday lunch! 😜
