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  1. Paladin

    Chapter 8

    We all have our fingers crossed @mansexlover. It will be a while before we find out
  2. Paladin

    Chapter 8

    Thanks @Summerabbacat for your multiple comments. Obviously I don't live in Melbourne but I've always enjoyed my visits there. It has such a different vibe from Sydney.
  3. Paladin

    Chapter 8

    Thanks @Cane23 you are right that Jamie and Andre's personalities are different from Chris and Michael's personalities and in a way that are complementary. We will keep learning more about Andre as the story progresses.
  4. Paladin

    Chapter 8

    Thanks @chris191070 for reading and commenting
  5. Paladin

    Chapter 8

    We arrived at Tullamarine and headed for our hotel in central Melbourne where we checked into our rooms which were next to each other. The first thing we did was to open the connecting doors between the rooms. Then we started to show Andre a bit about Melbourne. Surprisingly he had never visited Melbourne before, so it was all new to him. As we walked towards Federation Square we told Andre about the free tram travel zone and the free city tram loop. Just then one of the heritage W class tr
  6. Paladin

    Chapter 11

    @Ticklishboy30 you are definitely right there. That they are. Another beautifully descriptive and fun chapter. Thanks
  7. A great chapter. A hiccup for both groups that led to an elegant solution. I love seeing them all getting on so well.
  8. Paladin

    Chapter 5

    A beautifully told story. I loved the way the new Jim brought about change in Parker as well as himself.
  9. A great emotional chapter. I believe I can uncross my fingers now.
  10. Paladin

    Chapter 4

    Will being Joe and Jimmy at the same time really work? Being Jimmy is getting stronger all the time. Mr Jordan seems to have plans.
  11. Back at Chapter 16 I gave the chapter a fingers crossed. Well, actually I gave Dylan a fingers crossed because at the end of that chapter I didn't trust either Zack or Jackson.My fingers are still crossed that Dylan and Dominic will still come out of this unharmed and better for it.
  12. This response is truer than most people believe. Pedophiles are predominately heterosexual and predominately family or close family friends and their victims are predominately female. I know that's not what the media would have us believe but it is what the facts tell us. It's convenient for straight pedophiles to keep the focus on homosexual pedophiles and away from them. The "he's gay so he's a pedophile" argument is the result of preconceptions and faulty logic which goes: He's gay, he's a pedophile, therefore all gays are pedophiles. (or even worse therefore all pedophiles are gay) It's like: That is a swan, It is white, therefore all swans are white. All those conclusions are WRONG. We need to continue to educate people with facts.
  13. They are both lucky to get "player Herb" out of their personal lives. Is he deadly nightshade or just a dill?
  14. @Lee Wilson you said this was difficult to write and obviously many readers have found it hard to read. It has also reminded many of similar or related experiences in their own lives. Good writing does this. @weinerdog I admire you for being the first to expose your feelings regarding your aunt with dementia. Even when we understand that relatives with dementia are not fully aware of reality it still really hurts emotionally when you are accused of things you have not done and have to accept that you cannot correct that misconception. It is not as easy as just telling yourself "they are not themselves so don't worry about it". In saying this I don't diminish the important personal experiences of other readers which have added dimension to the discussion. Dylan explaining the situation to Dominic was well done. These situations are always "one off" so there is never the "perfect way". Just what works. The best bit is Dylan keeping Lacy in Dominic's life as much as possible. The fact that he isn't displaying any resentment in front of Dominic shows real strength of character.
  15. Paladin

    Chapter 7

    Hmm it seems a few of you have doubts about Chris's baby minding skills. We'll all find out after Easter in Melbourne.
  16. Paladin

    Chapter 7

    Thank you @Cane23 @chris191070and @CincyKris for your comments. Andre and Chris are moving towards setting up a life together.
  17. Paladin

    Chapter 7

    Tuesday was to be my “work from home day” and I wanted to get into the routine before I started looking after William. Andre and I kissed as he headed off to work and I started to go through the job requests and problems that had been logged for me along with work related emails. Fortunately, nothing was urgent. Most I could easily do from home. I had access to my clients’ networks and servers and could monitor and fix a lot of the issues without visiting their premises. There were a couple of r
  18. Paladin

    Chapter 1

    I love etymology (which comes from the Greek . . . . err sorry) but I think even I would end up wanting to strangle Vincent. Pleased he found a way to channel his ability. A very enjoyable story. Thanks.
  19. Paladin

    Chapter 10

    Call yourself whatever you want, but welcome back to posting more of your charming story. Let its magic continue to enthrall.
  20. If only Senior Year at college could be like this! Once the gay guy with the second highest GPA in the College has been convinced by his bestie that he should pursue his secret crush, who just happens to be the womanizing king of the college, the show really gets off the ground. As you follow their developing relationship, you’ll laugh with them, wince at their misunderstandings, respond emotionally to their despair and pain (especially Rusty’s) and cheer their victory. The story also asks you to consider the importance of being yourself, understanding yourself and pursuing the achievable dreams of your future. This story is an absolute delight to read and will keep you wanting to read the next chapter to find out “what happens next”.
  21. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    Yes @drsawzall it is still there with all its complications, even though it had stopped sexually before Chris met Andre. There is also Skye to consider in this as well.
  22. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    Thanks to everyone for reacting or commenting on the chapter. I really appreciate your feedback. We will continue to learn more about our characters.
  23. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    I don't think anyone disagrees with you @Summerabbacat
  24. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    A very interesting observation @CincyKris . Jamie and Andre could just be very close gay friends who have know each other since school days.
  25. Paladin

    Chapter 6

    Yes @Cane23 there were some revelations at the dinner and we now know why both Chris and Andre had reservations about a relationship, while at the same time wanting one. We will get to learn more about the characters and their history as the story progresses. Chris says of his first meeting with Andre that he wasn't really sure that Andre is gay. This changes during the flirting as seen at the wedding with the "not your type" exchange and New Years Eve when he kisses Andre. Now that Chris knows about Jamie, he is curious about Andre and Jamie's history together. Is there anything worrying there? Thanks for reacting and commenting.
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