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Awe @dboggs9700, you've just made my day. Thank you so very much!
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I was stumped deciding how to react to the truth of the comment. Then suddenly a thought popped into my head... How is it that she has such great dykedar but can't for the life of her figure out which way Jake's swing goes? I know what research says about homophobes not being latent homosexuals but...
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Thank you sooooo much! Now, to figure out who will have the honors 😉
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@sandeman let's not be knocking Hallmark movies! LOL There really is something special about Two Spirits. I have to say, it's the first place I've visited (yes, even in my mind) with such incredible individuals across the board. Thinking of recovering from such trauma, I'm left to wonder about forgiveness. Unlike many, I'm more of the mind that what's most important is coming to peace with such experiences. Forgiveness? Some things, in my mind at least, are unforgivable and simply cannot ever be forgotten. I certainly hope the Holocaust, Darfur, and other human atrocities are never forgotten for fear they'll be allowed to repeat. Ballet/dance can be so enchanting. One of my greatest memories is when my sweetie took me to see Mikhail Baryshnikov dance. As for opera, we did see one Russian performance, or rather, we tried, but both of us managed to fall asleep. It was lovely but so very dark. You've tickled my funny bone @sandeman. The mention of "His eyes crawled across her body" reminded me of a gal on social media who finds and reads the most horridly written "romance" novels. I'll have to ask my dear friend who the lady is again. I'm not big on social media, but that woman's offerings are always worth a cringeworthy laugh. While classical can be okay, it's not my favorite either. Give me some jazz, R&B, zydeco, country... Hold up, there are just too many genres to choose from. In the end, it's the mood that dictates choice in the moment. As one can surmise, Dixon Dallas has been chosen for this story. Anyone have any other suggestions??? Yes, @Charles26, much adventure and many revealing scenes await. The past couple of days, I've uncovered some of Jo's history. What a start he had. And, of course, Shayna, what can I say? She absolutely insisted on showing herself, but will she be happy or be left in dismay? I'm looking forward to hearing reactions to that scene, but getting there will take a little time. Meanwhile, we still have to hear the rest of the conversation in the Den with that cozy fire going...
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@VBlew I've joked about Mannly being clueless, but truth be told, none of them suspected which team he was playing for either. CC and Shir, what an incredible couple of ladies. As for our two young gentlemen, we shall see...
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Unless you object, we just might be seeing "dykedar" in this story at some point. 😆
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What a great message to wake to; thank you @dboggs9700. Saddle up; those following are in for a ride!
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Thank you @Doha. As sad as it is that consciousness was brief, it warms the heart to know he can return to sleep safely for the critical rest.
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Wow, you're awesome, thank you! I must admit to your having me laughing, as "dykedar" is one I've not heard before. Yeah, he's not been very perceptive, and darn if he didn't remember Jake's little slip of "my" and "precious." The poor boy really is clueless. Head injuries suck! Pardon, but there's just no other way to say it more clearly. Okay, yeah, a few expletives might add a little, but we both know how rotten it is to be stuck with the aftereffects of such an injury. Funny, when writing, I was a little concerned there was too much mention of alcohol, but hey, I love me some Kahlua and coffee, and vodka is a better choice because, for me at least, the smell of alcohol isn't very pleasant. Thank you for continuing to follow and for all the great feedback!
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“CC, wake up.” Pulling the pillow over her head, CC groaned, “Uuugggghh.” “Please, baby, wake up!” “Do you know what time it is, Shir?” “Yes, it’s Jake. Mannly’s…” Shir covered the receiver and whispered, “Jake’s on the phone, so upset he can barely talk.” Shooting straight up in bed, “Mannly? Did you say Mannly? Is he okay?” “Hold on, Jake, I’m getting CC up.” Whispering again, “No, I can hear him in the background sobbing; he sounds hysterical.” “Damnit! I wa
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@Doha hopefully she'll reveal herself soon enough.
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Welcome to the Two Spirits adventure @Doha. It's horrific to think that what can transpire in only minutes can mark a person's life for years to come.
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Right there with you @drsawzall. Wear it, she does, but can anyone see the written description under all those layers of her makeup? Thinking of her, I'm reminded of a coworker who stayed in our home when escaping an abusive boyfriend. Poor thing was so insecure she needed a putty knife to scrape off all the gunk. It was literally so thick we had to buy new washcloths after she left because it wouldn't come out of the fabric. Bleh.
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Just thinking of the cosmetically tragic skank gets my ire up; however, @Summerabbacat you had me laughing at the description. That one’s definitely being saved! Word around town, or so I’m told, is that the girl gets around, so the “cathedral” is apparently wide open. Shir is Creole through and through, @Summerabbacat her heritage is diverse, with a mix of European, African, Haitian, French, and Native American, though in appearance she is lighter-complexioned. She credits her foremothers and careful guidance by the ladies in her community with developing her natural-born gift, allowing her to see and sense what others cannot. If I Could Turn Back Time came forth loud and clear before I even opened the link. It’s interesting how sometimes things fall right into one’s lap unexpectedly. I’d not put the Mon Cher and Cher together until Mannly started rustling around in my brain about what Cher meant. While it might seem like it took a bit to ask about his naming, there’s much he doesn’t know or remember, and with the head injury, further pain, memory loss, and, of course, the hottie looking after him, there have been only so many questions he could manage at a time.
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Excellent points; @VBlew, maybe his background would answer some nagging questions. A funny thing about the job, with all the research to find him an online paper, is that I cannot remember one detail. Where exactly is the company located? Now for the clincher: I'm sitting here typing a response to the comment and thinking about Jake being clueless when all of a sudden my crazy computer has the image of Shir pop up (Yes, I have more than one window open), and she's looking straight at me. I swear I could see her eyes roll and hear her saying, "Seriously? Didn't I already say it's a good thing Jake is gay because even straight men aren't that clueless about women?" I doubt most men, though, could see how deep Shayna's ocean of scheming runs. Oh and, @VBlew, Shir sends you thanks for finally getting to roll her eyes at me. 🙄 Orientation: What's a guy to do when he's crushing on another and is certain they can't possibly be of the same persuasion? Mannly is doing an amazing job of keeping his cards close to his vest. Of course, that's not helping either of them.
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Jake was chuckling. “And then she said…” At the soft knock, they paused. “Come in.” “Good morning. How are my two favorite men this morning? With all the cackling going on in here, it sounds like y’all are having a good time.” Unable to contain his giggles any longer, Mannly choked, “Jake was just telling me a funny story.” “Ah, Cher, it’s so good to hear your laugh. I thought just seeing your smile and hearing those first words was a blessing, but nothing beats the soun
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Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Vcs commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
A sweet, simple man who's all heart. -
Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Vcs commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Jake has been admiring those muscular thighs. Some go for the tush, others the eyes, but not our Jake; he's a thigh man through and through.😉 -
Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Vcs commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
And a horse @drsawzall - the young man needs a horse! 😉 -
Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Vcs commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Pesky illnesses, those seasonal little buggers. Like you, @Summerabbacat I’ve spent quite a bit of time enjoying GA. I hope you’re feeling better soon. Once again, finding your comments has brought a smile. I’ve worked with individuals much like our dear, sweet Jo and hear the unique speech patterns when writing. Unfortunately, they can sound like a foreign language. As for Jo’s history, this too will be revealed. He’s had his challenges, but with the love, understanding, and patience of his Two Spirits family, he is thriving. Charts, huh? Nice surprise, thank you! Something else I have to learn to find on here. To say I’m technologically challenged would be a ridiculous understatement. Now I’m off to check out the albums mentioned before getting to work... -
“Shhhh, no, looks like he’s okay. Probably just tuckered out from all the excitement,” Shir whispered. “You go on back to the party and have fun.” “No, Jake, you need to spend some time relaxing and stop fretting so much. Come on, Jo said he’d sit with him.” As he and Shir returned to the living room, Sheriff Tucker approached, “There you are. Jake, I’m heading out. I’ve had a great time, Shir, and, as always, the food was excellent.” Hugging him, Shir said, “So glad you coul
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Inner turmoil, a struggle for so many. Count the minutes as the same never-ending routine stretches across the days, with pain inflicted by taunts, shoves, and harsh words. Is it any wonder that little cup has a strong voice, calling for solace and escape?
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I hear it's the 'biblically' that can get one in the most trouble.
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@Summerabbacat , you are great at providing me with chuckles. Thank you. Between speed bumps and flood zone,, hopefully, she doesn't have a full bladder. 🤣 Yeah, okay, that was pretty bad. Maybe it's about time to hit the hay.
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I know, and it's killing me watching him suffer. Will anyone finally tell that poor boy what is apparent to the rest of us about Two Spirits Horse Ranch, or will his insecurities get the best of him, causing him to disappear into the night? Does anyone else just want to shake him?
