peter rietbergen
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a cliffhanger if ever there was one. But, as such, well-timed - in a story that has emotional plot-turns galore; believable ones, too, even with K not looking for the dream-book immediately. The tale is, indeed, addictive. I can only hope that you will not, as so many other auhors on this site do, decide to put the story on "indefinite hold" at some time. That would be unforgivable, given that you've now got this crowd of fervid followers...
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the entire story makes sense - emotional sense - but for this line of Rob's: “Love is blind, Sam,” he said with broad grin, pulling me closer to him and wrapping me in a tight embrace. for it seems to contradict his final decision - unless the recognition of the "premiere fois" came later...
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Forcing me to look at myself, my life. Revealing. Painful.
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An Accidental Clarity
peter rietbergen commented on Menzoberranzen's story chapter in An Accidental Clarity
a "coming together again"? Much as I yearn for happy ends, I think not. A glimpse of understanding, though - that just might help them seperate for real. -
This is an unexpected but, I even now know - or, rather, fear...? - momentous plot-turn...
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But Still It Lingers
peter rietbergen commented on Menzoberranzen's story chapter in But Still It Lingers
heart-rendingly true - and, therefore: a tiny work of literary art. Thanks.- 15 comments
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This is well done indeed. The lust, the longing, the uncertainty - and the atmosphere of Berlin on the eve of Christmas. Thanks.
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This was very well done indeed. Realistic. Moving. Thought-provoking. Thank you very much.
