Jump to content

peter rietbergen

Members
 View Profile  See their activity

  • Posts

    1,031

  • Joined

  • Last visited

 Content Type 

Everything posted by peter rietbergen

  1. peter rietbergen

    Story

    peter rietbergen commented on Menzoberranzen's story chapter in Story

    the entire story makes sense - emotional sense - but for this line of Rob's: “Love is blind, Sam,” he said with broad grin, pulling me closer to him and wrapping me in a tight embrace. for it seems to contradict his final decision - unless the recognition of the "premiere fois" came later...
  2. peter rietbergen
    Forcing me to look at myself, my life. Revealing. Painful.
  3. peter rietbergen
    a "coming together again"? Much as I yearn for happy ends, I think not. A glimpse of understanding, though - that just might help them seperate for real.
  4. peter rietbergen

    Chapter 13

    peter rietbergen commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 13

    This is an unexpected but, I even now know - or, rather, fear...? - momentous plot-turn...
  5. peter rietbergen
    heart-rendingly true - and, therefore: a tiny work of literary art. Thanks.
  6. peter rietbergen

    Story

    peter rietbergen commented on Stefan's story chapter in Story

    This is well done indeed. The lust, the longing, the uncertainty - and the atmosphere of Berlin on the eve of Christmas. Thanks.
  7. peter rietbergen

    The Story

    peter rietbergen commented on northie's story chapter in The Story

    This was very well done indeed. Realistic. Moving. Thought-provoking. Thank you very much.
×
×
  • Create New...