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Chapter 22 ~ Skittish Little Colt ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 22 ~ Skittish Little Colt ~
The additional characters all have a purpose and are not just random side stories. In the future, many of those characters could be spun off for other great stories in other locations and situations. -
Noah gets some playing time and gets seen. This is a confidence and morale builder that Noah needed badly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 5: Poorly Executed Plans
dboggs9700 commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 5: Poorly Executed Plans
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Chapter 2: Like Nothing’s Wrong
dboggs9700 commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 2: Like Nothing’s Wrong
Wyatt needs to buy Emily a one-way ticket as far away as possible. Is Beau getting professional help? -
Chapter 1: Han Shot First
dboggs9700 commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 1: Han Shot First
You had my attention with "Dial Drunk". I like your writing style and it's an interesting story start. -
Beautifully written and intense love making. Tastefully done and kept from becoming gutter pornography. Elliot and Theo are so lucky to have found each other.
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Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
dboggs9700 commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Can you keep a secret?
I had a feeling Carol would have told some of the family making Nathan's announcement much easier. Amelia definitely was not popular with the family either. Hopefully things will keep going well for Nathan and Martin. -
I do not see the transformation as complete at least physically. Austin's thoughts seem to be merging with his wolf, but I see no indication his body has.
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Finally! Theo is such a nice guy and truly deserves a man that loves him and Mateo. Elliot maybe that guy BUT is it the challenge of getting Theo's attention or something toward love? I'd like a HEA for them, if it is meant to be. Great chapter Nuno!
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I do not remember Randy mentioned either. Let's hope Randy was transferred out versus the alternative.
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Shaky start for the third arc for Levi. Looks like Jimmy and Dan are going to give him another chance whereas Brooke is more cautious. Matt's advice regarding Levi giving information would be confusing to me too if I was Levi. Beware of Casey......watch your back Levi!
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One of these days either Kent or Randy need to make the first move.
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Looks like the turning will be successful since Austin is already wanting to mate with Xavier. Probably a good thing Xavier didn't stay.
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Great chapter and story so far @Kevin Snell. The characters are so well developed. I appreciate Cian being so direct and just short of dominating. Cian is totally aware of Evan every moment and very thoughtful of how he is feeling. Evan appears to like the approach Cian has taken after always second-guessing what Nolan would want. Cian wants Evan to be himself and not pretend or submit unwillingly.
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Finally, our three heroes are together again and safe. Hoping for some good makeup sex after Theo finishes scolding Vee and Jack.
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I just caught up on the story, and I am very much enjoying it. I really like your writing style and watching the way Oliver is changing.
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Chapter 21 ~ Welcome Home! ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 21 ~ Welcome Home! ~
Great that the security cameras are being installed, and I doubt any intruders are smart enough to disable them. A few well-placed bear traps might be effective too. How much does Reed know about his wonderful extended family? He also seems at risk working outside the ranch. -
Great chapter, really enjoying the story so far. Maybe the Major can make stepdad disappear after he suffers a little.
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Parents Weekend, Book Five of Five
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Five of Five
Great chapter and story. Matt is an unforgettable character and will be remembered for his ever-ready tools.- 16 comments
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Very well written and a fun read @Lupus. I'll watch for other non-fantasy stories from you in the future.
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Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
Another great chapter! Not sure who had the better time, Matt or Cassidy and Jax. I need a Matt right now. -
Will won't go easy on Travis. It wouldn't surprise me if Kendo "accidentally" lets Will know about sleeping with Travis. Travis would have to bring up the GHB being the reason which will result in Kendo's death. Will gives Travis an ultimatum to go into rehab or they end things.
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I think Jake and Danny can work things out between themselves with a little help. Kyle wants Danny and Jake to get back together as friends, but I think Reilly will be the one to get them back together on good terms. I am not quite sure about Caleb's interest in things.
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Beautiful story. Happy that everyone ended up together and happy. I especially like that Mason kept his job for five months and has a spreadsheet budget. He seemed the most hopeless, but Julian helped him get turned around.
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I am sure any phone calls are difficult because the people you call can read you just by your voice or by pauses. In Kent's and Ken's case that is magnified because of being such close friends and being twins. Misery loves company, so thank God, Kent and Randy have each other to lean on.
