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Thank you for giving us a story, where "Hope springs eternal" really does come true! You have crafted a marvelous tale with exciting characters and amazing backgrounds. By the way, will you ever go back to Australia and see how bad the mess is? :nuke: :nuke: :nuke: :nuke: A benefit concert would be wonderful over there for a sequel, just a speculation Congratulation to Chase and Brandon, may you alway love and cherish one another until death do you......well I hope never........part.
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Hmmm....You are right! CJ has been a naughty boy again with misdirection. We never hear them say Helen is dead.
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As I said: Please! Give Eric a boyfriend! <on my hands and knees with a hidden dagger behind my back for security, hehe>
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Fitting end for bad rubbish! Yet, we knew some one must die as well on our side, Finally, I saw it coming through my speculations, Finally, Please give Eric a boyfriend soon! (I have said a million times and I know shadowgod agrees, hehe)
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Maybe Brandon can take over managing the Band; actually, there have been hints at it for a while now that he would make a good band manager. Helen always compliments him on his keen sense of what is right for the band and his sense of fashion sense. Remember the first time he and Chase went out to his apartment and he forced chase to wear sun glasses and a cap. He also knows how to get attention pretty well. CJ were you hinting at Brandon's ascension to Band Manager all along I wonder or is that another story in the distant future.
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Yep, he is saved! Dimitri has his and War is brewing............ I sense a dkstories storyline coming; I mean, the guy started world war III for god sakes, the least CJ could do is start a small regional conflict. From a fan of both authors, I would love to see a crossover between you two or corroboration, since both of you have highly technical storytelling techniques and your use of atomic weapons are well known. By the way, here is to Jerry!
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Don't worry, its just an editing thing for the profile you set, your actual age is shown with your date of birth, but your profile has a separate age from when you created the account. So, you have been here for a year and a half by my assumption.
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Glad to hear that Brandon has a chance at life, but Dimitri will be alive, too. I want Dimitri to be tortured for information for some reason; it just feels right to me for what he has done to Chase and all the people he killed and tried to kill.
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Sovereign Emperor of Evil Cliffhangers for Life
W_L replied to Tiger's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Dan's stories are less cliffhanger oriented and more action/thriller oriented. Do over series is my favorite out of all the stories (sorry CJ, I love let the music play, but I have spent four lifetimes loving Davey and Brian). I will tell you guys one thing though, when Dan does want to do a cliffhanger, you will go nuts thinking what he will do next. Do over has a few, so does Do over redux and Doing it right, but Let's do it has the most of them all. -
Amazing, I can not wait to see how you will get one of our favorite protagonists from death? By the way, I can not wait for chapter 46. PS. Kill Dimitri Painfully!
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Thank you very much for the happy birthday notes and Graeme, we may have differences in opinion, but I respect you immensely. Well, it's not my birthday yet; I am still legally a minor in some rights, so guys do not think about any thing bad yet.
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sounds like a good title, "blood and sacrifice"; knowing your penchant for in-bedding hints in titles, who's blood will be spilt and who will be sacrificed? CJ, the producers of 24 need some one like you for the next season, who else can establish a high tension plot with cliffhangers every other chapter.
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Well, the legion of doom could have been made stronger, but the balance between good and evil should always slide a bit more to the good guys. Back to the story, I get a feeling that the coup will not go as planned and it might ultimately fail. I think Scar would escape from South America at some point. Dimitri is a dead duck (not goat!); he needs to die soon.
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Actually, I was implying actually getting them together. I want Eric to fall for a guy.
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if you want to leave the blame on Shadowgod, you got to include a character from his stories; maybe get him involved in a relationship with one of your characters, who's a little bicarious, hehe (Sorry for the plug; just a fan's dream) Out of all the guys here, I really don't think you are a goat. You seem too sheepish for that!
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Oh CJ is the king of cliffhangers! It's a good title CJ, look at it this way, you build up your stories and keep the intensity building. Your cliffhangers might get resolved, but things keep building. By the way, life and death cliffhanger count; look at it this way, chapter 44 life and death count could really be over 4-5 million people, so it counts as a cliffhanger too.
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I really like the chapter and can not wait to see that scumbag finally get his! Poor Chase & Brandon, after everything is done and settled those two should just come out and get married. California has made it legal at least for now, go boys and do it. As for our Bassist and the remainder of the band,
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Good cliffhanger, but it now makes me think this is going to be a bloodbath. CJ, Don't you dare!
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I just got a plot idea, why don't Dimitri try a terrorist tactic, drive the car with high explosive directly towards the house, then he could detonate and kill everyone? It works for Palestinians, Iraqis, and Afghans, so why not poor little Dimitri. It would be a lot easier and smarter to do that than to go in with everyone knowing who you are with guns blazing; even if you have an AK-47 and grenades. At the end, you will die either way, so why die in the most efficient military manner and take out as many as you can. The kGB was supposed to train their agents to think like that.
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This is going to be fun, but Dimitri
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....And a bomb, especially if it is the one I am thinking of, is way too risky and high profile to use on just a handful of people. That will most likely be the last surprise for our heroes. Oh, by the way, Helen is not a Bitch! She is just dog like in her tenacity and shrewdness, hehe. I actually like her character; she seems very human and adult in the story.
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The guys are right; although as a reader, I know the selfish desire to read new stories, too. CJ take a good break and if you feel like it afterward start to create a new story or do a sequel. Just remember us readers will keep on rocking and rolling for you with strange ideas and concepts.
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Thanks for telling us about the sequel; hopefully, we will get know Joe Clump or Lump a little more in that story. If I had to put money on it; he still has a lot of issues to deal with; a bit of homophobia does stem from not being able to accept homosexual desires within yourself and I get the feeling Lump might just be unhappily in denial as well as the whole issue revolving around his mother's murder by......(silent whisper, "his father"). I also feel like you could explore the band dynamic wise; The Shadows could be explored a little more, too; including the relationship of Wilde and Steve. Here is a plea from not just one fan, please give Eric a relationship with someone, preferably Cody, and tons of Tequilla for his wild adventures!
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It would not be likely for Dimitri to pretend to be a deputy and succeed; don't forget the kids saw him with Scar/Jerry in Australia. Although, he could try the plan and be tricked into being held hostage by the band, their manager, and 50 or so bikers with an intent to kill some one for what just happened, hehe. That idea would make one interesting scene, I wonder what types of torture techniques the kids and bikers would use to force information out of Dimitri; nothing sadistic.
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Dimitri still has a nuke out there for LA remember, mwuhahaahahahahaha. This could get tense really quick.
