Even before the one really bad reaction, Dan knew where he wanted to go, and tried a HUGE number of times to get there, but never could get it to go in a way he liked. While not my favorite of his stories, I did like it a lot and also regretted not seeing where it was going to go next - but that's also the benefit and curse of online writing - you get to read some incredible stories and plots that may or may not see completion. Overall though (and ya, I'm biased) - I think Dan has a great track record of completions... but then again, part of it is his unwillingness to share anything until he at least has a decent start on things. I don't even get to see stories that can't make it out of three chapters.