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  1. Johnathan Colourfield
    I understand your situation and i'm sure you will get through it. I share your mourning of Roan, I was very close to the guy and his memory is going to drive me for a long time. Thoughts your way xx We should catch up soon!
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    I've known this was coming for a few weeks and its sad to see such a good friend gone Thinking of you buddy Rest in Peace.
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    Good to hear We have missed you
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    you'll get through this renee
  5. Johnathan Colourfield
    there are game boy simulators that you can download that have the games but you can't like transfer the file from DS/GBA to Computer
  6. Johnathan Colourfield
    Happy birthday you awesome person you
  7. Johnathan Colourfield
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY my fabulous editor/beta reader/rewriter haha
  8. Johnathan Colourfield
    I really did enjoy the mystery of this story The blog is great where it is - I like being able to have the time to read without the pressure of oh theres another one tommorow *panic*
  9. Johnathan Colourfield
    The Shrouded One decided that time was up. She was no longer feeling weak and her shroud was at full intensity. In fact she was feeling quite strong. Her hospital bed began to creak as she swung her legs round. She felt her feet touch the floor and she felt good. Her guilt had passed. She knew exactly what she had to do. It was merely a case of escaping the chamber that they had kept her in. She pondered upon the thought when she just placed her hand upon the door. It wasn’t concrete. She
  10. Johnathan Colourfield
    Her memory was still fragmented but they were coming back piece by piece. In fact, at this moment, her memories were nearly completely intact and she could remember what happened… That event that she thought was so beautiful was something quite vulgar… ** It happened years ago. The glimpse of light. The hand reaching out to hers, saving her from the darkness. She was taken… She had been saved, by a man she loved. But then she was taken… Her creator came to collect
  11. Johnathan Colourfield
    If i get stationed in SoCal and i have a day off then i'll be happy to come along. All location dependent really
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    Story

    Johnathan Colourfield commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Story

    That was an excellent read AJ. You have a great ability to show the reader the emotions the characters are experiencing. You really caught me with this one. Thank you for sharing with us. You should write more - you have a great talent. However, you dont' escape a slight telling off. Head Hopping, you do a very sudden change of point of view and it distorts the reader. Although it does work in this story, you need to look out for this in future. Congrats on a brilliant story! I expect to see some much greater work from you in the near future!
  13. Johnathan Colourfield
    Happy Birthday Mum.... I mean Nephy! hehe Hope you got spoilt rotten!
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    Happy Birthday
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    Story

    Johnathan Colourfield commented on Comicality's story chapter in Story

    Such a creepy little story! Poor guy! I'm scared of Jonas now
  16. Johnathan Colourfield
    They travelled together and it was midday; they had to carry on in order to reach the next town or they would die in the cold. Ash was the stronger of the two of them so he held The Mental Patient up as they travelled; wishing they could find somewhere to stop that was safe. ‘Ash, where are we. I feel so weak.’ He began to cough. ‘We are nearly to safety, just stay awake. You need to stay awake, please.’ A tear began to drop down Ash’s face. The Mental Patient tried to st
  17. Johnathan Colourfield
    I have written a review for the Blog but i thought i would just give you my thoughts. This is an excellently well written story, with completely 3D characters and i was engrossed throughout. Bravo Dolores!
  18. Johnathan Colourfield
    Happy Birthday!!!!
  19. Johnathan Colourfield
    **same reaction as Cassie...** Err... i wear boxers lol
  20. Johnathan Colourfield
    HI Hayden Welcome to GA We're a bunch of crazy folks here Make sure you come into chat at some point - sometimes we have a lot of people in there
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    Oh my gosh how did i miss this! Happy Belated Birthday!
  22. Johnathan Colourfield
    Happy Birthday Momma
  23. Johnathan Colourfield
    Happy Birthday Sweetie! Hope you had a great day!
  24. Johnathan Colourfield
    Good to hear If it makes you happy you should definately do it it's never too late to go to university
  25. Johnathan Colourfield
    Chapter Four Blank. The room was blank. A haze of white and a glistening light from above where she was laid. She had begun to awake from what felt like a months’ worth of sleep. She was unsure where she was. Immediately checking her wrist for her heartbeat, she took a breath of relief. Death had evaded the situation. Alive… The walls were tiled with black lining. Then, an image appeared before her eyes. ‘You…’ ‘Yes it is me.’ The man laughed and looked down upon h
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