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Dolores Esteban

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  1. Get well soon!
  2. Happy Birthday!
  3. Many thanks again everybody for reading and commenting. I'm very happy you liked the story I do love the GA Anthologies
  4. My condolences, Kevin. I wish you strength to get through this difficult time. (I lost my father and my grandmother in the same year. It was a very hard time for me.)
  5. F A L L A W A Y Feeling a little lost, Andrew went away yesterday. A N Y W H E R E
  6. S Q U E L C H Y See, Quentin's Uncle Eric luckily came here yesterday. S N I P P E T S
  7. English is not my first language. So I had to read the story twice, using my wonderful online dictionary now and then. And finally I got it and it made me smirk. Great
  8. Drastic times call for drastic measures, I guess. No, honestly, I think it was the only way for Jack and Gabriel to seize a chance. Everybody would, I think, on the brink of death. You know, I'm not so fond of graphic descriptions, but I thought the story concept was great
  9. What a sweet story! I enjoyed it very much. I loved the setting and the characters. Vantor is a great character. I also would like to read more of your fantasy pieces. A beautiful story. Thank you
  10. I enjoyed this story very much and I was convinced it was fiction. Until I read the posts in the discussion read. Yes, you were lucky. Thanks for sharing this great story with us
  11. What a beautiful and moving story! Marvelous! Thank you!
  12. Although I saw the end coming, I hoped for a happy ending all the time while reading the story. I was truly shocked when I read the last line. A well done story
  13. I also thought that the narrator crossed a line. She acted selfishly, in my opinion. The story is very well written and, I agree, it is thought-provoking. I think it's a great story, although I do not share the narrator's view
  14. I'm glad things worked out fine. Thanks for sharing
  15. Thanks everybody for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked the story
  16. A cold shudder ran through my body when I read your story. I experienced something similar many years ago, less violent though. You described the horror pretty well. The opening line was excellent. The message of the story is plain and clear. Great
  17. I like the style of this story. There's something surreal about it. The solitary girl: Is she real or is she just a dream? A fascinating and enigmatic image that is worth being developed. I'd like to read the whole tale
  18. This is another sad and beautiful story with a strong message. You finished the story with a 'happy ending'. But I think the story has just begun. We don't know how things will work out in the end. You leave the readers thinking. Very good
  19. I very much enjoyed this beautiful and sad story. It started as a fairytale, but it soon turned into quite a nightmare. I was so sorry for Smiles and I feared for his life. I hoped for a happy ending, but I was not so sure about it. I'm glad Smiles took his courage in his hands and abandoned his old life. I would like to know how the story continues. A very good story
  20. Thanks for the reviews. I'm happy you enjoyed my story. I'd like to thank Kevin for reviewing my submission and spotting some stupid mistakes. Many thanks to Graeme for fixing them. Many thanks to my readers. I hope you enjoy. I love the GA Anthologies. I look forward to reading all the stories. Dolores
  21. N E W B R I D E Naughty Elton was busy reading Ian's diary entries. A D D R E P L Y
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