Mari

Happy Birthday!

I normally try not to get involved in petty disagreements but SERIOUSLY???? In roughly the mid 90's when I was 13/14 ish everyone had sexual experience. All of my friends did, people had sex at parties , clubs ,school etc. And I'm not just talking about the party kids, the honor roll and sports kids were there too. The only people who didn't were the total losers who couldn't get a date to save their lives. I would like to stress that I am not name calling or pointing fingers. Saving yourself for marriage? Great, do it elsewhere please. When you die alone, sad and virginal don't blame me. The only 'extreme' thing I saw at all in this last chapter was that he came on stage. I've never done that or seen anyone else do it. Still, that seems like the kind of club you can get away with it in. I was hysterical when he got 'caught' How many times can you look back and remember getting caught doing something naughty? I seriously can't wait to see what the fallout will be from his parents and JP. There will be some shocked people wondering what happened to shy and responsible Will. If you have a young teen you are deluding yourself in thinking that they are sweet angels. Buy them condoms. I don't know if I should post this, it seems mean but whatever. Oh, and just to be clear, this is FICTION. Don't be so serious all the time

No one's going to like this but seriously? Didn't you guys ever go to a club when you were a teenager? This is not abnormal behavior ( except for the happy ending maybe. I started clubbing at around 13 or so, I think it's a maturity thing. You don't have to be stuffing money in his g string but you can appreciate someone just having fun right? It's not like you're dragging a minor to the backroom, which is where I would object. I liked seeing Will wild and not so shy. Maybe that will translate to CA. I do really, really wish we could get Steph, Jp, Robby and Brad's reactions though. lol.

I agree about the bodyguard, I think he'll have one, just not be aware of it. The whole outfit and him pouting while getting his picture taken was hilarious. I actually loved that part, dressing out of your comfort zone is not always what you imagine it will be. I can't wait to see what JP does with that picture It really added a fun element to their personalities. I would love to know Brad's reaction to his young son going to a gay club with a backroom and stripping contest that his baby participates in. Kristin's parents let her go to France with Gathan but all the sudden object to them sleeping together? It sounds like typical parents of teenagers. The marriage thing worries me, in my mind Gathan is eventually supposed to want Will, and Will is supposed to be unobtainable. That's the way it goes in my mind at least. Even joking around about marriage at the age freaks me out.

Can Will take Berto home with him until summers end? That would be the best souvenir ever! His relatives would be so jealous.

"He’s loving and beautiful and sweet and innocent as they come with a nasty side that can make a whore blush." My favorite line from a story. Ever.

I can't see Gathan doing it but Will would. He seems more impulsive? That doesn't seem quite right, but I can see him doing it. He's been educated enough about condoms and safe sex to be able to have sex with an HIV pos. person that he cares about. Not a one night stand but a relationship.

you're killing me. lol, I love this, poor Bobby. Where can I get one of those suit things? Sounds interesting... I need to know more! lol, This can't be the last one, no? Puck and Bobby are such wonderful characters and I love the dramatic way you write, If I could make my IM thing work I would've told you this already

This chapter was great! I'm glad Will finally, finally had sex as a bottom. I really think the bits about Gustave were appropriate given the circumstances. The almost rape would still be fresh in his mind and overshadowing when he has sex with Berto. I cannot wait to find out about the 'strip catastrophe'. There are so many, many possibilities... I'm not complaining, I swear, you probably update your stories more frequently than any other author( and I love you for it ) but 5 days to wait until the next new drama is excruciating. Considering I've waited months for other authors to update, you are amazing. I'm still surprised JP and Stef gave him permission to go to the club, lucky Will. I had to sneak out, he gets a chauffeured driver.

I really want to know what the contest is too! Comedy, dance off, strip show? Maybe by small dick he means what? Small by CAP standards or normal standards? I don't have one to play with so I have no base to compare with, really what's big or little? yay! on the two new postings I love reading about Will. I like Gathan too but I'd like him more if he was with Will

Happy Birthday!

I have three kids ages 8, 10 and 13 and I love them to pieces when they aren't being annoying as hell. I like the ages they are at now even though I spend most of my day shuffling them to activities and friends houses but soon enough they'll be off to college and I'll miss it. When my youngest hits college I will be a foster mom for older children and teens. I think the babies and toddlers are more frequently adopted and the older kids need a chance too and I can provide that. Teenagers need more of a guide that a constant in your face caregiver. And to be honest , other people's children piss me off.I live in the South where we have actual manners and it drives me NUTS when I see kids act up especially in public.

I loved this chapter, have been eagerly awaiting it actually but I am so irritated that Will is taking the fall for the whole situation. It's implied that Gathan started the kiss ( at least it is to me ) but Will is the one who feels like everyone is mad at him vs. everyone being mad at Gathan. It could be possible that the group with the exception of Darius and Ella are not thinking he's a homewrecker but seriously. Gathan is older and the one involved in a relationship, he should be the one to blame IF blame has to be passed around. I'd like to say that Will been through enough. Abducted, raped, dumped,and then blamed for 'the kiss' and all that it came with but I love the drama Maybe he'll find a hot italian boy, become a model and make everyone like John and Gathan jealous? Side note, You would think Darius would know how sensitive Will is to being considered slutty and not said that to him, whatever happened to sticking up for family? Now I just have to kill 5 more days

I can't believe that John dropped Will the day after he was raped! Unfortunately, that is something that occurs way too often in real life and sets him up for? Some opportunity? I'm betting they're going surfing in the South Pacific. I mean, that's what I would want As for his brattiness and back talking in earlier chapters? For those that don't have children, that is normal. Every time I sigh and think what a pain in the A** MY 13 year old is , I think back to when I was 13 and thank GOD that he's not like me. I'm still wondering if there is going to be some huge outburst from Will, he may be mature but sometimes the smallest things set you off. Thank you for posting so much !!!!!!!!! My kids are still mad that I hauled them out of the pool yesterday just so I could read the new chapter in peace.

Wow! great chapter, even better than expected. Will's reactions to the rape were spot on, flying back and forth between tears and being 'fine'. I would love to know about John's feelings regarding this (and Darius') and how Brad/Robbie/Stef/J.P. handle this new drama/trauma. OH! and the reactions the family back home will have. Will is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters, you just want to pick him up and hug him. I keep thinking back the the 'naked, handcuffed to the bed' thing and I think that would probably be more traumatic than the actual rape for someone who is so in control...

***hugz Mark***

@hermetically sealed did he actually penetrate him though? it's hard for me to decide, it looks like it but then not? @ Mark Arbour I'm actually glad to know they aren't that self absorbed considering who Brad and Will are to them, especially Will.

I think Gathan and Kristen show an utter lack of concern. They seem like it's all this huge bother that they have to put up with. It does surprise me that John didn't really seem to exist in this chapter besides following JP in the condo. You think he would be front and center. I also think he's going to drop Will as a BF. I know the age gap is ridiculous but in my world Will would be with Max. They have that same monogamous trait but the age thing is crazy. If Will was at least 17 I could see it but really 13 is too young. I am REALLY interested to who discovered Will, how that's handled. How he meets back up with his family and their responses as well as if he actually accuses Gustave of rape. Considering his age and confusion because he liked it (eventually) , I wonder if he will?

So... after just reading this last chapter, I can't wait to find out what exactly happened to Brad and what Brad's reaction is to what happened to Will? Does Brad see Will handcuffed naked to the bed and assumes what happened? Do they go to the hospital? I'm going to assume Gustave will be 'eliminated' now. How can Will face so many of his family members, peers included after such a trauma ( even if it doesn't SEEM traumatic, yet ) , right after the events occur? I can't see him being able to face them and their questions. Especially from John, Darius and Gathan. Has it been 5 more days yet? Another great chapter, I love hearing Will's POV and I am really curious to what musical selections this chapter will bring. But really, how are we supposed to wait until next week? My imagination has already spun out dozens of different ideas and my BF has already yelled at me for calling him at 7 am to discuss it. Loved the last few chapters

Happy Birthday! Hope it was great

no revenge sex? that's my fav. part! Seriously though, I think most kids are like 15/16 ish when they first have sex unless they have morals Then they wait until they're married. I don't know anyone with morals, so I guess that's the best I can do for you

Wow, I just saw your having a baby! congrats to you both

Happy Birthday

omg Andy , you are a gem truly and what Mark said

YES! That's it I was really really happy to see he has more stories for me to read Thank you so much for the links!!! yay, happy dance