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Drunk in public and lewd behavior with a woman...

Impersonating a stripper

Taylor Hanson Taylor Lautner Taylor Swift Jake Walmsley Chris Green Aaron Carter

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..... 'm never going back to New England again...

Practicing medicine without a license

Tell em to go get drunk and sleep with the first person they come across.

Heh. I wouldn't go to my boyfriend's house for Xmas. I'd bring him home with me though. He'd prolly get embarrassed though. Hrm...or I would... yuh nm. we'd be flying solo for xmas.

Hrm. Spitting in someone's chocolate candy for revenge.

Assault with a coffee cup

interfering with an investigation

Assault with a sex toy

Assaulting a police officer.

nm

dancing nakedly around the guy in a pink tutu and helping cause said accident.

Public Intoxication, Sexual harassment (of the bartender), Sex in a public bathroom (with said bartender)

Eww.... Behave.

I usually go until I feel that I've accomplished something. Lately I've had c hapters ending at around 10-11k. That's roughly 30 to 35 pages using my font and font size. But, after the first two chapters of Spider Webs I was getting quite a few complaints (mostly from my beta readers) about the size of my chapters, so I'm probably cutting it down to 5-6k length chapters, and as long as I accomplish something in each chapter I think I'll be okay. But I find that's another problem. How do I know what is necessary to each chapter, what adds flavor, and what is just a waste of space? All my betas and editors have said I'm using a lot of details, but for a 1st person story, going into the characters thoughts and feelings and perspective seems to be necessary; mostly because I myself need to know what is going on and what the character is feeling so I can, I hope, successfully write the story. I'll admit I used DomLuka's Dessert Dropping as a guide to writing a 1st person novel. Sometimes, I'm not sure I should have because he's a freaky lil writer; and a good portion of his stories were 35k or more. I think I'm going to follow CJ's lead here. I'm going to let each chapter write itself and stop when I feel i'm at an appropriate stopping area. Linxe T

Shiznitz. I'm late too. I know I said it in Chatroom, but, Happy Birthday Tigger!

Hrm. I loved the story so far. My interest has definitely been piqued. So, here are my thoughts on the story... 1) Rachel's most likely still alive. Due to her problems with Dirk she most likely decided the best thing to do would be to get out of the relationship but she didn't want to explain why so she ran away. 2) I don't like Lisa. I'm hoping she'll, eventually, disappear from the story altogether. 3) I'm willing to bet we see more of Ben in upcoming chapters. If his parents move around a lot I'm betting they'll be loaded. I also imagine that they'll be chartering the boat; at Ben's suggestion, and Ben will be on that boat. 4) I'm willing to bet after Summer vacation comes up that something is going to happen and Trevor is going to want to leave it all behind. He'll get on his boat and set sail. Hrm, perhaps there will also be a couple of stowaways, in the name of Ben and Lisa...oh, and that one guy who is dating Lisa. 5) I see something of interest coming up in our future too for young Trevor, just not sure what. Pirates, drug runners, smugglers. All a good possibility. It'll be interesting to see what, exactly, it is though. Hrm, perhaps we might see some hot coast guard boys or sailor boys. (No, they're not the same thing, and I'll argue with anyone that says they are.) Go Navy! Cheers! Linxe

Heh. Of course they did. This is american television. Nothing racie or sexually charged (perhaps imitating sex) allowed. After all, everything is geared toward the minority straight people and their children.

that piano player WAS HOT HOT HOT...okay, nuff said

Hrm...I slept with a guy that looked like this guy once. I was expecting a top and he turned out to be a bottom. Was married too. Heh...

Happy Birthday Colin! And may you have many more like them, each one laced with happiness. Happy Birthday ComeWhatMay! Congratulations, you're finally old enough to vote, join the military and still be treated like a child May you experience many more birthdays, each one of them laced with happiness