Also on the topic of the 5 post rule, I agree with what sharon and vic have said. If you don't want to make 5 posts then don't, and wait for Dom to release the story to the general public. It's not hard to make 5 posts and they don't have to be spam, this is a discussion forum after all, contribute your opinion on Dom's stories, go to the lounge and wish someone a happy birthday, join in one of the games there; there's a lot of opportunity to get 5 posts. The whole point of the sneak peak forum is so that not everyone can read what's posted there. Either way, don't whine about having to make 5 posts because that won't get you anywhere...except one more post Sorry if this sounds harsh, but really, like Vic and Sharon said, the authors here provide us with their work for free, its not a right that you get to read them but a privilege...
Also! Loving this story, I think they're one person too, only Oliver got in the boat to go home, and he said it was a long way around the lake so if David was real how did he get home before Oliver?