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Chapter 11: The Queen of Queens
Terry P commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Queen of Queens
This chapter was seriously hilarious, at the same time as being very decisivee. Well, written - it would make a fabulous movie. -
i just pushed the Love(Heart) button as the 10th person to do so. That makes it a perfect endorsement and I insiste that it be collaborated by everyone. (I am not Peter (unfortunately) I love that guy.
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What a great story. I was sad as I was reading this chapter that it was probably the last one in the story. Sad, because it was the end. (or was it?) Is it possible that their will be another story coming out of it? Yes or no, I really enjoyed it.
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Chapter 1: The Covenant
Terry P commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Covenant
I've been waiting for the Carter Series to comeback. An excellent story. I'm looking forward to it. -
What a great and wonderful ending. Everybody gets what's needed, despite all the odds against them.
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When i first started reading this story I wasn't sure that I was going to continue, but after about 4 chapters I really got hooked on it and am very happy to have made that decision. This was a great one and an ending that didn't happen the way I thought it would.
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I love this series of stories with Killian. I appreciate he needs time to figure himself out and where he wants to go, but I do hope he gets back with Micah. They can be so good for each other.
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Andrew's reaction to what happened says a lot for his character. We can feel happy and pleased about Dentons death and even how it happened, but Andrew has chosen not to.
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Thanks for the precision. I live in the Eastern Townships of Quebec and we usually get the first snow in December. This winter it was in late November. I visited Merickville last summer. It's a beautiful place.
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I'm writing this comment before reading the others so as not to be influenced. When Jake came running to to Andrew tears came to me, and then even more in how Andrew treated Tommy. This chapter was really amazing - a glorious end to this story. The first question I have is: Is there going to be more? And the second one concerns the night of the election. Does it snow in Ottawa at the beginning of November? Another great story with a fabulous ending Topher.
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I was thinking the same thing as I was scrolling the comments. Then I read yours. Thanks for making that comment.
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Oh my. You stopped this chapter too soon. Your such a tease. Can't wait for tomorrow (but I will)
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Alvin, Simon and Theodore is more realistic than Hewey, Dewey and Louis.
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I haven't been making regular comments on this amazing story as chapters come out, but this was one chapter that really hit hard. Where was Will Carter in 2018? Canada would have needed him. The U.S. would have needed him. The world would have needed him. Every chapter has been moving, but this one, for me, takes the Trophy.
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I (and am sure other readers as well) appreciate the work you put into writing this story. Thank you.
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Thanks for the admonitions. I was going to write at the end of the comments that it would be good to see us bus the ass of some unknown orange idiot. But I digress.
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I almost missed this story, and am so happy that I got it right when it started. Great intro and a lot of questions going out of the gate. Will definitely follow this. Twice a week sound awesome too.(wink wink)
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So, now that it's been confirmed(?) that the invasion of Canada actually did happen, our only hope for the future is now reliant en Alvarez? God, help the U.S.
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This was a very tough read. I kept waiting for Will to wake up from a really really bad dream. Maybe he still will. You don't know what kind of can of worms you just opened up? Or do you?
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I have one word to say: "WOW"
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This is amazing. I trip back in time to see how different principles (and we will sure find out more) character's principles were formed from the past. I, am hooked on this story already(just like your other stories).
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For some reason when I first looked at this story when it was first started , I wasn't interested in it, But whenever a new chapter was posted I got the notification. Finally I decided to look at it again and for the life of me I don't know why I didn't have interest in it because I got hooked and ended up reding from beginning to end in the same day. It was captivating and I look forward to the second part tomorrow.
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This story is amazing. I live in Canada and have never read a story like this happening (not real, but realistic). It`s riveting.
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This story is so good and intriguing.
