Terry P
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You sure know how to do a cliff hanger. When I realized we would have to wait to see how Roger would destroy Charles I was so disappointed. This chapter was amazing though.
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Wow. What a great first chapter.
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I can't believe that I actually loved this story. Good work.
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This story gets weirder by the minute. But, I am hooked. Bring it on.
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This is going to be unanimous. Please, please continue it. For all that has happened to Jeremy and Carter this is not the end, but the beginning.
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It's hard to like either Jeremy or Dexter. There is no excuse for either of their behaviours. Pour Carter. He is better off to be as further away from these two as possible. That being said, the one I really don't like is Dexter and one day soon he's going find his due. Jeremy on the other hand should grow a pair. I undrstand that everyone grieves in their own way, but really? I'm wondering if Carter is related to Ethan. Looking forward to seein how this story is going to proceed.
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Oh, dont you wish you were there at the lake too??? Thanks for the suggestion of the Ravigote sauce, I'm going to try it today when I make dinner.
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Caleb is quite the character - and to have come up with the idea to strangle Calvin was ingenious. This is a great chapter, and while you should never say what will happen, when anything can, there is no way that the Judge would give Caleb to Calvin.
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In all my years on GA this is the first time that I have actually read every single comment on a chapter. It's great to see how many are so engaged in this story. Thanks everyone. Your comments reflect exactly my own thoughts.
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A lot happening in this chapter - really interesting. Really gives us an interest perspective on how the possibility of real aliens exists. The next chapter should be very interesting with the arrival of the government biologists
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This is fascinating. Problems coming? No doubt about it especially from the old carmudgeon.
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You can't take with someone like Black says in order to justify what he does. There is no justification under any conditions. This is an interesting story and I look forwrd to it as it unfolds.
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This story is very interesting I I am sure to like it. I can see so many possibilities some good and some equally bad.
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Bored???? How can anyone get bored from this chapter. It was very entertaining. I was only sorry to see it end.
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I've just recently read the first version of this story and decided to read it again in the revised form as I really enjoyed this one and all of the stories in the series.
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The boys don't owe the neighbour any explanation. She should be told that her questions are inappropriate and she should mind her own business. Maybe they could give such a start that she ends up moving away.
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I wouldn't be too worried about the kids. Calvin will be Calvin and royally screw things up for himself.
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This is my second time reading this story and again, I really enjoyed it.
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A good way to end this story - and an epilogue would be great. As for your other stories if they are written as good as this one and as moving as this is I'm in for the long haul. Happy New Year
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I agree. Much better. Thanks.
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Discussions and Decisions
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
Sorry, me again. I just have to get this off my chest. What kind of an ending to a story is this. I'm really angry about it. Just when we're getting attached to all of the characters in it you end it in such a disappointing way. You're a good writer. I would have expected more from you. I know, is only a story. But....... -
Discussions and Decisions
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
I agree with BoyLove on this. I really enjoyed this story. But the ending sucked and seemed like a really weak way for you to end it. I highly recommend you change the ending. -
Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Serious, and More New Problems
I have a hard time believing Zac, and wonder if he's lying just to get back Dylan. The big question is if Dominic is exagerating about Jackson yelling at him or not. Given a choice I would go with Dominic telling as it is. All in all I feel sorry for Dylan and if he has to break up with Jackson that he doesn't let Zac in. -
Since we're all thinking who might have killed Curtis Buck I will say : "None of the above". Curtis got himself into a very stick situation and probably borrowed money from a very bad person(outside of the family, etc.) and when they realized he double crossed them decided to make him pay for it by killing him. The roughing him up part eliminates a number of possible suspects, although Big and Zak would perhaps be capable, but I doubt either one did it.
