Terry P
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I loved this chapter. I didn't get the "joke" when Marge was talking about when they were younger and she had all the suiters. She must have slipped somewhere, but I didn't get it. Sam is quite the character and I'm seeing a whole new story with him as the star.
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I've thorough enjoyed the story. I also discovered a new author - and a good one at that.
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A really great chapter - what action! When Chris could see the demon general do things that, while probably were happening fast, but he was just watching her do it. Why didn't he act against the demon while he/she was occupied with what they were doing? He could have brought the fight to an end sooner and with less problems for him. Just thinking.
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I love this story. It has so much potential, so I'm looking forward to reading it.
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I'm going to get a sore neck trying to see which way this story is faced. Now we've got 2 realities in one? Great work on this.
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You are the cruelest author I know. I love it. At this point I would say that this makes a lot of sense, but it also raises a lot of questions which I'm assuming will be answered in the next story - I hope.
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Wow! There is more drama in this story than all the soap operas put together. You really know how to keep us on the edge of our chairs.
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Sure is a lot going on in this chapter. But it sounds really interesting. I've seen a few stories with a Covid 19 context and have avoided them. I think I'll enjoy this one though.
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This was great Carlos. It was great to have more of a focus on Brett and César. I'm looking forward to see what you have next in the pipeline. Cheers
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I was expecting this to happen eventually, but I was completely surprised by this. Love it. I would like to have more of this story in future sequels.
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I too enjoyed this story. At first I didn't know what to make of it. Where was CJ? Of course this had nothing to do with him. A very interesting telling of the Lost Atlantis Story. As usual your excellent story telling made this all the more enjoyable. Thanks Carlos.
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Not a surpise there - but I'm happy with that. I don't understand Dorian not staying around as Alpha. I think maybe he really didn't want to stay and preferred to be with Karissa and her pack.
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Thanks for the new story. I'm hooked already and I don't know yet who'll be the main character(s) yet. But I sure as heck am looking forward to finding out. This is great Carlos!
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Me too. It ain't over until it's over.
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Very nice beginning to this story. You can almost feel how Jimmy feels as well - so well written. It's not really a cliff hanger though, since I'm sure we have a fairly good idea of what happens next. I guess we'll have to see about that.
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Great chapter, all about a remarkable speech. Very inspiring. I'm sure a lot of thought went in to writing this one.
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I can't believe you just did that to us!!!! So unfair. I look forward very much to the next chapter (soon I hope)
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I never believed, and still don't that the Dorian is dead. I think it's just an act to reveal Levi for what he really is.
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This is definitely not the type of story I normally get into. In fact I would have stopped after the 1st or 2nd chapter. But somehow I got hooked on this one. It's so "out of this world", but well written I I'm rooting for Danni - and now Calvin.
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I'm thrilled to have you writing again. I've missed these guys and look forward to reading more. I sure hope the call doesn't bring too bad news though.
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What an interesting chapter. Chris is changing so rapidly it's amazing. Look, even the Elves don't comprehend it. Thanks.
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That was really cool. I couldn't believe how it moved me. Imagine what it did to Chris and those who watched the ceremony. Well done!
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I Can't wait to read about the Ascension. All indications so far have been very ominous.
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A Great ending. I new it would come one day, but you really got it right. Thanks.
