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Discussions and Decisions
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
Sorry, me again. I just have to get this off my chest. What kind of an ending to a story is this. I'm really angry about it. Just when we're getting attached to all of the characters in it you end it in such a disappointing way. You're a good writer. I would have expected more from you. I know, is only a story. But....... -
Discussions and Decisions
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
I agree with BoyLove on this. I really enjoyed this story. But the ending sucked and seemed like a really weak way for you to end it. I highly recommend you change the ending. -
Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Terry P commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Serious, and More New Problems
I have a hard time believing Zac, and wonder if he's lying just to get back Dylan. The big question is if Dominic is exagerating about Jackson yelling at him or not. Given a choice I would go with Dominic telling as it is. All in all I feel sorry for Dylan and if he has to break up with Jackson that he doesn't let Zac in. -
Since we're all thinking who might have killed Curtis Buck I will say : "None of the above". Curtis got himself into a very stick situation and probably borrowed money from a very bad person(outside of the family, etc.) and when they realized he double crossed them decided to make him pay for it by killing him. The roughing him up part eliminates a number of possible suspects, although Big and Zak would perhaps be capable, but I doubt either one did it.
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You and me both. The tears were definitaly tryin to get out.
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I too was kind of miffed when I saw that Kit and Tom were no longer together. I thought: "Who the hell is this Mischa?". But now in learning the whole story - at least Tom's side of it I'm use to that and very anxious to learn where this leads with all of these characters.
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I'm thinking the same thing.
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Yes, but at what cost?
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This did come as a shock to me as well. But, aside from the violence, I'm happy it did. I've never been happy with Will's relationship and didn't think it was healthy for either one of them. I think Will's resolve to break up with Zack permanently is solid and I hope he sticks up to it. Zack has always had things both ways and Will made it easy for him, but, he went too far and if it happened once there is a very good chance it would happen again. Zack gets no sympathy from me. It remains to see how Travis will react to this.
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I read the first book a few years ago and remember how sad it was that it didn't continue. When I saw that the second book was now beginning I had to re-read the whole thing before tackling Book 2. Now i'm excited with the new book. Thanks for this.
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Not a story I would normally read, but you have got my interest piqued. I look forward to where this will go. Good start though.
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I was hesitant to even read the first chapter but am really glad I did. This is very interesting and as is usual by R. Eric, very well written.
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I doubt you have ever had a bad review Carlos. I agree this was a great ending. It'll be great seeing CJ and Owen and Liebe out of Mexico. While it was a great experience for them it was also kind of stressing also. CJ is an amazing character. It's cute how you wiggled your way into the story as well.
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Not at all what I expected. I remember from a previous story something happened to CJ while in Mexico. This is it. How terrible. Well written Carlo - although the cliffhanger was not appreciated (but well timed).
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I wondering if Grand has some connections that could influence the military in letting Jake off the hook and at the same time clear his record? Maybe too much to hope for.
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I don't think anyone saw that coming. And I'm rather glad about that as the kids would have been miserable otherwise. Now to find out who they really are and why they're doing what their doing. There is a ring of a religious cult to this whole mess.
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A very interesting beginning and I do like it. This chapter creates more questions and few answers which is what is to be expected from the first chapter. Poor Karl is walking into a potentially bad situation when it should be the opposite. However only one guy is the problem so I look forward to seeing how this story proceeds.
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These are the kind of chapters that are very emotional. Very sad, but very moving as well.
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I knew when I started reading this story that it was on temporary hold (how I missed it I don't know as I've read all the other stories), but now that I've gotten as far as I can go I'm so disappointed that it's been almost a year since an update. I know the author is still writing as I've rea other stories since.
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revenge would be sweet, but I'd just as soon that we be done with him.
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Northman can get as angry and vindictive as he wants with CJ. It would only mean his downfall from grace at the Embassy.
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I see upcoming explanations to things from the previous story in this series. Looking forward to it.
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I'm thinking that the phone call Carson made was to the Prime Minister. I wouldn't think he would have such easy access to the PM. I'm from Canada and I wish I could get the same access to him. I voted for his government, but would still like to give him a piece of my mind. LoL. I love this story.
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Elijah was right. "that was fast". Great chapter.
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By saying "things are going to get better" I only meant that the story is really getting heated up and that it's the story that will get better, not the final outcome - which we all know we will be for the better.
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