Terry P
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This is a great story and I'm enjoying it a lot. I hope Jaimee keeps being careful around Paul because even if he is interested in Jaimee he does seem to have ulterior motives. If he came clean with Jaimee right away he might be able to get help and Jaimee would safeguard his relationship with Simon. It would be a shame that Paul would come between them, because he has a sh** load of problems personally.
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You got me. I'm hooked already.
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A really good and uplifting story. Thank you for ending it with the updates, etc. I'm looking forward to your next story.
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Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
Terry P commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
You got my all wound up because this story is still not finished. I was going to sick VInnie on you. However, since you've promised a sequel or more you're forgiven.- 77 comments
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I figured out immediately that this was a repeat and was going to check it out. Deciding to check the comments first I was relieved that others had done all the work for me. No problems though, it happens, and I sure know about that.
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I think they are beyond pointing the blame at each other. They both screwed up royally. Now they need to get ove the hurt and move onto the loving part.
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I love all of these stories. Very inspiring.
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I do think it's great you have a wide range of genres. Don't give up on doing that.
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Very different from what I'm use to from you Carlos. Well written. Not really my cup of tea but I did read it because of the author.
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Great Story. There are good people in this world.
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Love in the Shadows: Chatter and Criticism
Terry P replied to astone2292's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
I like the idea of a forum like this. I hope it works out to your expectations. This last chapter was quite interesting, although kind of confusing with all of the chatting between the 2 vincents and the 2 Mason's. I had to focus enough to remember which was was talking, although the wolf side does speak differently from the human side. I love this story a lot and look forward to each chapter. The new alpha for the New York Pack caught me by surprise, more in that I got a quick sense of not trusting him. I sure hope I'm wrong, but if not it should make some pretty interesting reading.- 2 replies
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Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
Terry P commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
A very appropriate story for all of us. We all have different circumstances from each other but this story serves as an example for everyone. Too bad it can't get circulated even more. Thanks for this. -
I wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. It's truly amazing.
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What a great chapter! Chris continues to surprise everyone and I'm liking him more and more (if that's even possible). Victor is a lucky guy, and from all appearances so is Chris. The ending of the chapter was so romantic.
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I'm really enjoying this story and look forward how things are going to develop. Jeff is going to need to hire some staff now. There are too many boys just for one to look after, but I'm sure you've already got plans for that.
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I've been enjoying these short stories. Keep them coming please. Are you working on any longer ones?
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So glad to a this story. I've missed everybody. Great start to this one too.
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Sounds really interesting. I look forward to more. As always, well written and great story beginning.
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I've been waiting almost impatiently for this chapter, but the wait was definitely worthwhile. That senator Taylor is just like some of those we see in real life, so that was more than believable. Chris really proved himself, although it appears that grandfather might have won that fight if it lasted any longer. Of course that would have been because of Chris's lack of experience. He sure is growing in power though.
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You have such an interesting variety of plots in your stories. This is great!
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I've missed having posts to this story, and new when you posted it that it wasn't going to last much longer. But that's ok. I am looking forward to the epilogue and your very brief description of it is the kind of epilogues I love. You're a great writer and I've enjoyed everything you've written. I know good things will continue to come from you.
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Ah - now we're starting to get somewhere. I look forward to reading more. This story has a lot of promise. It's well written and amusing at the same time. But $10 for a plumber? I just spent $50 for one and he was here less time than Rick was, and mine didn't even have to go out of his way. I was pleased at what I paid too. Send me Rick's number and I'll call him next time.
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I loved this chapter. I didn't get the "joke" when Marge was talking about when they were younger and she had all the suiters. She must have slipped somewhere, but I didn't get it. Sam is quite the character and I'm seeing a whole new story with him as the star.
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I've thorough enjoyed the story. I also discovered a new author - and a good one at that.
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A really great chapter - what action! When Chris could see the demon general do things that, while probably were happening fast, but he was just watching her do it. Why didn't he act against the demon while he/she was occupied with what they were doing? He could have brought the fight to an end sooner and with less problems for him. Just thinking.
