Terry P
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Yes, it does seem like she has that sixth sense. Maybe she's listening in. Buy the way, she's the ambassador, not a senator.
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It's great to have CJ and Ozzie back again. I'm so looking forward to reading this.
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This is a really great story and I'm so happy I discovered it. Very well written, very emotional and funny at times. Matt is a great character, and I only wish there was a sequel. (maybe there Is and I'll find it.) At least I've discovered a new author and will be looking at his other stories.
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Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
Terry P commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 29: Inconsolable Inferno
You really know how to stop a story with a cliff hangar! This is a great story and I've enjoyed reading it all along. I will try to be patient as I wait for the next part of the series begin. Thanks for this. -
I enjoyed this story, but I thought it could have gone a bit further. It seemed to stop so abruptly. Although it was a happy ending.
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P.S. I wrote my last comment before reading the previous comments. Seems like I'm not the only one who is looking for more.
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I really enjoyed this story. I can really understand how difficult the situation with Corbin was a really difficult one. So many young men are still experiencing the same kind of situation in today's world. Some of us who have been out either for a long time or for ever tend to forget what it's like. The only thing I didn't really appreciate was the constant swearing, particular on Corbin's part, because he was the worse. But I realize it was part of the character he was and reflects on how frustrated he was with his life. Who wouldn't. In the end it all worked out and hopefully the future for him and Troy will be a happy one. Maybe you can think about what a sequel would look like.
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Now I'm curious as to who those 4 boys really are. As usual, I'm enjoying this story. Good work.
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Great chapter. Good way to start it. And the twins are so cute!
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I agree it was a great chapter. While they are a great group of boys and Adam should be proud, they sure know how to pour it on when they want to. I can't wait to see what's in the letter the Ambassador left him. Was that a "slip of the tongue" when Adam referred to Marie as his finance and not his fiancé? Lol
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A Great story as usual. I got to really like Ritch in this one. He'll be a great example to so many people. If your past stories are indication this will not be the last we hear of him. Thanks.
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This was a chapter that starts the healing. First for Ethan and then Sophie. I don't know for sure that Ethan moving out of Jonathan's place is a good idea. There are arguments to both sides of that, but of course, time and your pen will determine that. And I don't think the warmings at the beginning of the chapters is necessary. If anyone doesn't expect that to happen by this time I don't think they would still be reading the story. I am enjoying the story too.
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I'm looking forward to where this story is going. Off to a good start though.
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I loved that ending. It was so unexpected I laughed so hard. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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A very short chapter but a great start. I'm liking this a lot already. Your writing is so diversified. I don't think we'll ever get bored.
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A very Different story, yes. But interesting. Not in my favourites of your stories, but sometimes a writer does need a break, doesn't he. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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This is really getting interesting. Agood story is suddenly getting even better. Way to go Rick. It shows what kind of character he has. Obviously he has a lot to lose with this deal not going through. But seeing Heinrich Sr. and Rita get the shaft is well worth it.
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This is a cool story. Because I've enjoyed all your other stories I know this one won't be a disappointment. I looked back on all of your stories and found one I hadn't read before (Home away from Home). I just finished it yesterday. I really enjoyied it.
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Cadet Second Class • II
Terry P commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • II
Great chapter Carlos. Getting to like Ritchie more and more. Not that I never liked him. He's grown into a fine young man and a great role model for anyone his age or younger. He'll do the Air Force a lot of credit. I thought we we're going to hear a bit more about CJ and Ozzie's experience in Mexico - and we did. Only not enough. Give it up already! Please? You need to know that while we've probably all grown to like straight guy Peterson we still love CJ and really need to know these things. LoL.- 56 comments
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Wow! An unexpected (or maybe not) cliff hanger. I sure hope Hunter is ok. This is a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.
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An appropriate ending to a great story. I don't know how many times I looked up what some of the food actually was as well as where some of the places were - I was so taken in by it. Thank you, and I loook forward to Book 2.
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Couldn't have said it better.
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Chapter 32 Hold my Beer or something...
Terry P commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 32 Hold my Beer or something...
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It's been so long since the previous chapters, but when I read the first sentence in chapter 19 I remembered the entirety of the story (I usually forget after a long time). But it was great to read the last two. A very interesting and good story with a happy ending. Cheers
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What an interesting start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading further. Well written too.
