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    Chapter 36

    So many wasted years, and yes I have seen more than one set of parents use their children to hurt their parents, their children's grandparents. If you want to be treated as an adult, then act like one.
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    Chapter 18

    A price must be paid for the use of any power; what matters is your determination that paying that price is worth it.
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    Chapter 19

    Can just see this "gang" riding into the school parking lot and how it would probably freak some people out...
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    Chapter 18

    Wonderfully written and constructed, can't wait to see what you come up with next. It seems both sides need a respite; but I am sure trouble is brewing. Hopefully more for the Elvin courts that our cohorts. Keep up the great work.
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    Chapter 35

    I just knew the Grandmother was going to be more interesting than we first thought. Can't wait for the next update.
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    Chapter 33

    A wonderful accomplishment and a truly lovely story. Thank you so much for taking us all on this amazing journey.
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    Chapter 34

    This was truly a very special chapter from start to finish. The writing was just remarkable.
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    Chapter 17

    All hell is about to break loose, literally...
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    Chapter 17

    What is that saying about if you didn't have bad luck you would not have any luck at all...
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    Chapter 33

    So much pain, both physical as well as emotional and psychological. Maybe the grandmother will surprise us all, we can hope. Keep up the great job...
  11. A delicious little side story, with truly lovely characters. Can't wait to get back to the main course though. Keep up the great work, and a Michael and Paco diversion would be appreciated.
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    Chapter 16

    The King and his side seem to be spending a lot of time playing catch up; plus you know this as to be causing comments an reactions in others within the court. How many issues can the King and his triad handle at one time?
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    Chapter 32

    Rick got the justice that he deserved; hope that everyone can begin to heal from his actions. Rory and Milan are the future, but storms can still arise. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 31

    A truly lovely chapter; the writing was delicious. The meeting may not make anyone truly happy, but can't wait to see what happens there.
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    Chapter 16

    Truly enjoying this story more the second time around; parts I remember vividly, and others just whispers of what happens. Can't wait for the next few chapters.
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    Chapter 32

    Really enjoyed this chapter, the writing and pacing were spot on. There was such a sense of melancholia throughout this chapter, not just the obvious places but seemingly permeating even those moments of happiness. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 15

    Never reveal everything to anyone. Once again, thanks for the re-post.
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    Chapter 15

    More strangeness but I am glad that they decided to fight back. Can't wait to see what happens next.
  19. Oh such high drama over something as simple as love... LMFAO......
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    Chapter 31

    I am sure it is the evil cow. Will be happier when Jeff is there to help. Can't wait to meet this evil Grandmother; but have to wonder if she really is that bad, or is the twins parents the real issue with her. We will see. Great chapter, keep up the great work.
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    Chapter 30

    MaryAnne was there for this encounter; but Milan is going to have to learn to stand on his own two feet within this world. I have a bad feeling about the upcoming town meeting, but we will see What a truly delightful chapter.
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    Chapter 14

    In general, groups other than those of European ancestry have never faired well with treaties or legal agreements. Beware of trusting humans, even if some have good intentions.
  23. centexhairysub

    Chapter 14

    Great update, this chapter just flowed seamlessly. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.
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    Chapter 30

    Truly adored this chapter; the writing and pacing were spot on. Would not mind a look at what the Jay and Cerrian get up to at the pub. Can't wait to see what happens next; I am sure that there is more drama, but nice to have a few light chapters as well.
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    Chapter 13

    The enemy of my enemy is my fried, at least temporarily.
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