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So much information, almost an overload but just too well done. Can't wait for the next update.
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Damn, loved it and it just rocked.
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Chapter 38 - Back to Derrick, Gabe and family
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 38 - Back to Derrick, Gabe and family
Honestly, the course of true love rarely runs smoothly. But Robert and Keno are the only two that can resolve the issues between them so that it works for both of them. Great to see how Dane is progressing. -
Another excellent adventure, can't wait to see where you take us next.
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Darling Aria, so right and wrong all rolled into one; and Amara, the brave warrior doing anything for those he loves and cares about. This may not have had the sheer power of the last chapter, but it proved to have just as powerful of a punch without the windup behind it. Can't wait to see what is coming next.
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Why is it always children that are sacrificed? Why bot a 35 year old neo Nazi or someone like that . Another excellent chapter, once again thanks for the reposting of this story...
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Truly loved everything about this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next, but I do think this realm Lord may already understand more than he is letting everyone know.
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Torsten may end up torn between the two; starting to wonder if a dragon of fire and one of air could be happy in a polyamorous relationship with the seer. Great job with this chapter.
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Exceptional writing of the battle sequences, and it flowed beautifully. The arrogance of youth on display so vividly but even though the artifact was lost, with Torsten's new gift, I feel all is not lost.
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A truly excellent chapter; the pacing and timing were first rate. I never understand why even in real life; the bad guys always seem to be so over-confident. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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I truly believe that those that harm children have a special place in hell; but I think that they should have a special hell here on Earth as well. I can understand Lady Jane, to a certain extent, but in the end no matter what, you have to be a human being...
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Perhaps Walt Disney was preparing the world for the possibility that real magic actually exist.
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Have to say that the character development of the creatures have all been done exceptionally well.
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All work and no play will make Worthington a very dull boy... Ha Ha...
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Another excellent chapter, the writing and pacing were just spot on. A truly interesting development, can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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There is just so much evil in the world...
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Some people are just willing to kill themselves and others to keep from admitting that they need help. It appears that Sinclair is going to have to deal with one of those more closely than he or anyone else would like.
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Well, damn, I have a feeling that this is going to get much more bloody than anything we have seen so far.
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Still so many unanswered questions left, hate to think what the King and his coterie are up to now.
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While I agree that the government will probably cause problems at some point, I don't see a realistic alternative at this time. This meeting, or at least the initial discussion, went far better than I anticipated.
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So glad to see an update, was easy to slip back into the story. Still don't think it is safe to have Kelly free but... Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great job.
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Self-loathing much...
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Grandmother has turned into an unexpected delight; but do admit that Drew's reaction to the file has me worried. On tenderhooks waiting for the next update, this story is just really lovely.
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Well, an unexpected turn of events, more allies. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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A storm is brewing, and more than one person might need to get ready. Thanks so much for reposting this story.
