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I truly enjoyed this chapter; but it still did not make up for the emotional scars left by the last one. I am going to go back and read this story from the beginning as soon as I can. I really feel that I have missed something at some point. I still think that Donovan and Shane could live happily ever after; or they could both kill each other, and everyone would call it justifiable.
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A truly adorable chapter, that started with a dash of true excitement. Not only is there a rogue wolf, there is someone protecting the wolf as well. I for one, have my suspicions about the identity but we will see. The writing was truly wonderful in this chapter.
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Chapter 28 - Blind Date
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Blind Date
A lovely little chapter; the perfect petit morceau. Can't wait to see what happens with this side story in this saga. -
Truly enjoyed this chapter a great deal, the writing was excellent but I did feel the flow of this chapter seemed to be off somehow, I read it twice and still can't say why I feel like that. Mark Geston is an ass, but there is one in every school that wants to be an alpha male, and may even come across that way; but they rarely ever really are. Rhys is becoming more than just a little important in so many ways. Can't wait for the next update.
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Really enjoyed this chapter so much; the writing was effervescent and just flowed so smoothly. I wish Ben had accidently gone over the edge of the building. I am sure he is in cahoots with their mother, and maybe even part of what else is going on as well. I am sure the twins are not perfect, since no one really ever is; but if they are truly as horrible as Ben keeps saying, then why is he still there?
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700 strikes against Shane
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in 700 strikes against Shane
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And the truth comes out; but Rulf instead of understanding, since he knows better than anyone that there really was no other option; turns his back on Esthor. And where exactly is a blind man suppose to go?
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Great chapter, the writing is just so good. I really like how the Alpha handled all of this. I do hope that Chris gives Milan a chance. Really impressed that Rory and Chris both stayed in formation to protect Jet; and made sure he was safe before going after the other wolf; wonder if he was the one that was watching Rory earlier at Milan's?
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I really want to see Ben and Drew throw down. I have a feeling I know who would come out on top. Love the idea of a second party, and the pie story was the perfect addition. Amazing what can happen, that at the time you think will blow over; but literally decades later is still being talked about.
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I have to admit that I suspected the main reason that Shane has an issue with anyone even getting near his butt; and for a man it can often be more psychologically scarring than physically. I am still annoyed with Donovan, and starting to feel a little like Shane could do better. I really did enjoy the chapter, the writing was first rate and the pacing was very good as well. I can't wait to see what the attire will end up being; I have a feeling that we will all be surprised.
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Loved Dean and Kao coming home to roost so to speak; they will make great Betas. Still so sad about Gene. Heather is a delight and a find on so many levels. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 27 - Forgiveness
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 27 - Forgiveness
Such a delight, so glad to get an update. Glad he was able to reconnect with his mother in a way that seemed to work for both of them. Can't wait to see what happens next. Good job. -
Really good chapter, the writing and pacing were spot on as usual. With the AI, I really can't figure out why they can't find the person trailing them on a camera. I realize that no security system is perfect; but if it is only the kids here; I would not think that any of them had the necessary skill set to stay hidden this long. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Excellent chapter; hated the way it ended though. You have to believe a lot of the pack will think and believe like Chris. Even if Milan is Rory's mate; will they allow that to stand?
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The one regret that changed everything -Shane
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The one regret that changed everything -Shane
I loved this chapter; clearly made up for the last one. Shane getting that nervous just because the hospital might be the one that Donovan worked at; then it was. The way the kids fronted Donovan in front of Shane was hilarious. The writing was so crisp and just spot on. I do think they need to talk when neither is drinking or hung over. They need to be able to clear the air and decide for "themselves" if they actually want to give it another try, declaring one of the strikes a foul ball, or truly move on from each other.- 33 comments
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Truly loved this chapter; Amara and Drew showed Aria so much support. There are more out there that identify with Aria then most would be prepared to admit. I can't wait to see what happens next. The c&%t needs to be put down.
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If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in If it's a bad idea, why does it feel so good?
So very disappointed in Donovan and all the DONNAS.- 43 comments
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This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what the gift from the Elder gets them on their next adventure. The power exchange that is occurring during the temple massage is bound to be effecting the attempts by those in the other realm; but how is it effecting each of them???
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Some great descriptive dialogue about some of the most interesting locations in Australia. Really gave you a feeling of actually being there. I do wonder about the zap of power that occurred during the massage; did it reverse what they were trying to do from the other realm, or did it cause some other as of yet unforeseen consequence.
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An interesting start to this story; I wonder if the other three that were really mentioned are all someone from the other realm? Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Lovely chapter; but who is the wolf/shadow? Is it someone that does not want Rory to be the future Alpha? So many questions, can't wait for the answers.
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Well, thank you, finally Rulf and Esthor came together; lets just hope that their secretes don't tear them apart. The prince may be in for more of an adventure then even he thought about.
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Chapter 15 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 15 - The Dawn of Day
A truly grand adventure for these three humans; but said that they discovered that the humans of Earth managed to destroy themselves; over something totally idiotic probably. I honestly have no doubt that will probably be our fate in the end. Well written from start to finish; and the plotting and characterizations were excellent. Enjoyed the journey. -
Well is Ben really Ben, or did whatever tried to possess him get him before Cash was able to pull him back? Did the entity possess Travis, is that why he acted so horrible to everyone else, especially his brother? Good chapter, but left the reader with lots of questions, can't wait for the next update.
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Chapter 14 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 14 - The Dawn of Day
So enjoyed the chapter; glad to see that the Aryaka trio have their neural implants restored. The Aryaka truly seem to be one giant family; they support each other and move forward with the common good. I am glad they will be able to take the humans back to Earth; but wonder if they will be able to get them close to their own time frame of when they left???
