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Ah so now we know that Olivia was forced into a situation that lead directly to her imprisonment. I do trust Lucius one bit, even after this job is done; he will always find her another one that only she can do... So glad that Rulf and Esthor finally kissed, but they still need to be fully honest with each other. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
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So excited that Mom spoke, even if it was just sentence. Maybe Marnie is right and whatever pushed her into this state will ease and she can come out of it; she would be a help. As we see with each new chapter, each person has something to add or a gift to make the group better and stronger. Even if the creature doesn't understand the concept of what caused the sonic blast, they noise is something that even an animal might react to, so it could as well. Another excellent chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 10 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 10 - The Dawn of Day
Truly a wonderful chapter, the writing was wonderful but very melancholy at times, but then the content of the songs would make it so somewhat. This story just flows so well, can't wait to see where these two contradictory groups go from here. Keep up the great work, thanks for the update. -
Another really good chapter, I love it that everyone feels that they can speak up; but Richie finally sees to realize to some extent that what he says will carry extra weight and he needs to be aware of that. I don't believe any aircraft from Earth could have done what that one did. Starting to look more and more like an invasion of the Purple People Eaters...
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Really loved this chapter, Sean should have been pissed at John, but maybe at TJ as well. Once again, TJ went off without finding out the other side to the situation. I do think that John will try and do something to cause problems, but hopefully they will all be able to deal with whatever it is. Mel proved she really was nothing but a bitch, and not in a good way. I hope we have seen the last of her. Kevin was smart to want to get everyone's input, and especially a lawyer. Anytime you get involved in any legal situation, even in a peripheral manner, you need to at the very least consult an attorney. Great job, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Great chapter, so well written and the emotions just poured off the page. I really like TJ but he needs to get a double dose of therapy and stop thinking the whole fracking world revolves around him. He can be emotional and a pain in the ass and everyone is suppose to give him time and deal with it; but no one else is allowed to be like that??? I don't think so. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Smith needs to get kicked off the team... I have really mixed emotions about this chapter. The writing was good but it just made me sad.
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Great chapter, brings back a lot of memories from my high school days in the 80's... You would just not believe how many of the jocks, rednecks, and cowboys in a small Texas town were willing to drop trough to get serviced on a late Friday/Saturday night...
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You have to study and test and even retest to get driver's license and other job and specialty licenses; but any idiot can have a child and be a horrible parent... I am torn on this, as I do think the less government intervention in our lives the better, but I do think some people just should not be allowed to have children, and if they do, someone else needs to be raising them...
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So sad that there are truly parents that thing they can beat/pray/ignore/hate the gay out of their own children. It is so often the ones that are supposedly Christians, but obviously, they don't follow the good book very well.
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Loved this chapter, was just too funny at times and other times made me want to bitch slap someone. GSA's are so important, the verbal and emotional abuse suffered by those that are gay/bi/questioning/etc... is so damaging. There is a real need for a safe place and supportive people, so much the better when they are your peer group.
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And the bitch strikes back...
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I knew it, I knew the second he said he played football and baseball that this was who the secret crush was. This is just so well written, the pacing is spot on as well.
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Well dammit, this was one hell of a start to this story. I cannot even imagine how TJ felt finding out like this. Why do I have a feeling that TJ and the mystery guy are going to connect on some level... Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 13- Sweeping Bunkers
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 13- Sweeping Bunkers
Really loved this chapter, the writing and pacing were just right. You knew there was going to be a traitor, but exactly who it is I can't figure out yet, although I do have an idea. It is really good that Sindri views all the dragons as equal. Can't wait to see what happens next. I personally would not mind you doubling the number of chapters left... LOL> -
Well, the contact with the larger British base was not what I had hoped. The idea that some are willingly cooperating with the aliens is really disturbing. Could the virus be mutating so that those effected are made compliant by it and under the control of the aliens? I think that Alex is doing a good job; but we must find out about the saboteur. They have to find out who and why. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see where this goes next.
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This plan sounds like it might actually work, if they can get the mannequins and get them back safely. It seems to me that each trip to town with the creature close just adds to the danger; plus there is always the chance of drawing another creature to them. Plus the aircraft, whatever they are... Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next...
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Chapter 9 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Dawn of Day
Really enjoyed this chapter; feel as if I understand both groups more after it. I admire the way that Nahusha handled gaining entrance through the security area. Eric is adapting to this situation with increasing ease; but I am having issues with Dave, he is really starting to get on my nerves. Most Americans were considered nothing more than common criminals when they broke away from England by most of the world, the French not withstanding. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in The Roommate Situation - Shane’s POV
Oh Lord, I think the sea level rose again because I know part of the polar ice caps just melted. Lovely writing and the pacing was spot on; can't wait for the next update... -
Well, this story just got a lot more complicated. I am glad that Pepin was able to retrieve the book; I have a feeling that Esthor and Rulf and maybe the Shade and the Prince are all about to be involved in some kind of quest, and Esthor is going to need his sight back to do his part, fully. The writing and pacing were excellent as usual, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Ingenious plan, but the danger involved is maybe more than they have wanted to consider. I am not sure that the group could survive in the long run the loss of Richie and Jeremy both; so I hope that they have no problem getting to the coal bin and setting off the explosion. Have either ever set off dynamite? This is not something they are going to just be able to practice... The writing and flow to this story continues to be first rate. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Excellent chapter; so glad that Rory stood his ground, even if it was just a few moments. Milan obviously feels something for Rory already, even if he probably isn't sure what it is. Have to admit, not sure I like the doc, but too early to really tell; plus the lab buried under an innocuous cottage in the woods just screams super villain hidden lair, LOL... I can tell the Chancellor is going to be trouble...
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Chapter 12- Gifts and Skills
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 12- Gifts and Skills
Great update; so much going on but both groups are going to have to work together in order to solve this problem. The new additions may prove to be very interesting. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see where you go with this next. -
I have to admit; that I had high hopes that the fire might be something that would destroy one of the creatures. But I guess it would be natural instinct in even an animal type brain to get to water if on fire, to bad they did not have phosphorous. Glad to see that Jack built everything to withstand what he did; and good thing that even when they sleep; they could come to enough to hear that something was wrong. I do admit that the flying vehicles, still not convinced that they are actually planes; present a new conundrum. Glad to see that Richie is going to have Ben gather the information and log it; might be more important than they realize in time. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 8 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Dawn of Day
Well, both the humans and the Aryaka need each other; at least for the time being. They both want to return to their worlds; but the humans want to return to their right time, and that may not be nearly as easy. The story just keeps getting better and better, keep up the excellent work.
