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Chapter 35 - A transformation
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 35 - A transformation
Can't wait to see what happens next, this just keeps getting better and better. -
Damn, just knew that a consummation was going to occur in the hot springs. Great chapter, keep up the great work.
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Lord, I bet Dick Cheney was a dark mage. LMFAO.
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Loved the calm before the storm, and you know one is coming. Jays is right, they do need to talk and always keep the lines of communication open. A polyamorous relationship is never easy, but they do work; and often better than one of one relationships. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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The writing and pacing of this story is just spot on. I can't wait to see what you do with it next. I find it exciting that this group is touching the edge of magic/powers that few can ever actually access. I do worry about the hate that this is causing in others; but we all know who is behind some that. Keep up the great work.
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Lord, I had forgotten how good some of this book was.
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Chapter 34 - New beginnings
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 34 - New beginnings
So glad that Dusty will be paying a visit; cowboys are hot... LOL. We all know what Michael is going to tell his sister. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
Anger and happiness in so many different shades; but so many unanswered questions... Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Truly adored this chapter, the flow was just perfect. I do so love Jay and Mama Chance; you have a way of making each of your characters unique in a truly good way. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Have to wonder if Geston is under the control or at least influence from one of the triads. Great read and flow, keep up the good work.
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You just know that it a$$hole Republican President that did an order like that... Love that this is getting reposted.
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So glad that Jay stayed focused and did what needed to be done. Drew knows how he feels; he just needs to deal with it. Maybe Mama Chance can at least keep Aria on an even keel until Drew can try to help him. So glad that Drew and Amara were really honest with each other. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 33 - Is that a no?
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Is that a no?
Loved this update, can't wait to see what happens next. Have to admit, I am liking this new group almost as much as the original, of course, a few more intermingling's would not be unwelcome. I agree that Dusty needs to stay around... -
Starting to think this quartet might be too much of a match for the three triads...
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A truly joyous chapter filled with much hope and promise. No growth or change comes without pain, in some form or another. Wonderful writing and pacing, can't wait to see what you do with this story next.
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Have to admit, that Worthington needs to realize that after the earlier attack; that he would be vulnerable at this location. Should have already had more resources in place.
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Mother knows best, at least in this regards. I bet money that Henley did not bother to tell either of the kids that he basically fired Drew.
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Chapter 32 - Help arrives
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Help arrives
Love the new direction to this story. Like Gwynn, and maybe she and Dusty will get added to the new little family. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
It can be amazing how often people from totally different backgrounds can find things that will pull them together. Worthington understands more about the world but if they listen those twenty kids will too by the time he is through with them.
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And the truth will out...
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Wonderful chapter the writing and flow was just perfect. Sort of wondering why Rory did not just turn Milan, is there something more to it because of Milan's condition? Can't wait to see what is next, glad the next chapter is up...
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Glad to see an update, hope you already have another chapter coming down the pike. I hope that Kelly doesn't try something while so many are out on this walkabout. I can say that I think she should have been confined in some way before they left. Can't wait to see what happens in the next update. Wonder how many are in the market? Will the herd just leave if they can't get inside, or will they meander around making it hard for them to get back out. Obviously, the police station was attacked, but by whom?
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Pissed on so many levels, not just at Henley, who has no idea what is really going on; but at Drew as well. Can't wait for the next update; I knew we would get to see Wales.
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Chapter 31 Don and Marco
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 31 Don and Marco
Loved this new chapter; the new direction will make for some interesting new encounters. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
Great chapter, but I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose. So much reveled but more still to come. At least Rory now knows who is behind all of this. Wonder if Dolon was really kidnapped or did he go missing on purpose. Can't wait to see what happens next...
